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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Semanti you are a wizard!

I had liked your WAUFMAIO series for they left me with a grin after every chapter.😃

But this series is so prevailing and compelling that it sucks the reader in me like a vortex; not to mention the various intense and consuming emotions that they evoke.

And you give out a subtle message in each and every OS...brilliant work indeed!👏

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Res

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I love how you showed Arnav feeling restless and inadequate in his ability to show his love to his bride of 4 months. What he didn't realize was that the little things he did for everyday surpassed any grand gesture that he could've attempted.

Just loved this story!!! The passion between them burns so bright, words are absolutely unnecessary.

You aced it once again!!

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GirlOfFire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

First of all ... awww.!!!

Secondly - 'wonky'??? I thought I was the only one who used that word!! But wonderful, beautiful and sooo touching.

Loved it.. You can tell a tale girl!

Madhu

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arnavbarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

"The most important things are the hardest to say"

But Like you said...sometimes words are not required..

Beautiful update

Its a wonderful feeling that you feel loved in the small gestures of your partner...its way better than just one single day celebration

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

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really beautifully penned... sometimes actions do speak louder than words...😊
glad that there was so much understanding between the couple...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Wow... Amazing OS...
Really Loved It...
Beautifully Written...

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_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

How do you do it every single time ??

I always have a tear rolling down and a smile on my face at the same time whenever i finish reading these Celebration Os's.

Makes me want to go and run to my husband !!😳

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Hum aa gaye res karne

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Remind me again just why I have planned that collab with you?

You are just so good, especially with a short story like this one! I envy the gift you have, it takes a special talent to write something so concise and have it mean so much, and touch so many hearts.

I fell in love with these two in just a few sentences, and I loved that part with the mismatched candles.

It's all about the little gestures, the seemingly insignificant touches and glances that may not need words to add to their effect...and you have penned that beautifully.

A special thank you for writing this unique tale for the St.Valentine's Day story.

In every single piece in this series, you have made Arnav and Khushi your very own, and that is just amazing!

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

Beautiful!

To start with you used an excerpt from the kite runner...a book that I can't get enough of.😊

Arnav's inability to express his feelings in words to the final revelation of words not being necessary to express them was splendidly illustrated.

A thousand times over? Yes absolutely!😳

Loved the footnote on Valentine's day and your thoughts on the current commercialization of it.

All in all a wonderful OS👏

Edited by Eccentrica - 11 years ago

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