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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-IV

Jai and Bani are both nervous and itchy these days. Their minds are very working night and day as they are unable to decipher the dreams that comes to them at the same time. And now both are afraid to sleep at nights and why is it that the dream comes around 4:30am in the morning to both of them is this also someway connected?

They plan every day to keep their minds away from the dream but how could they? U can keep away from something which does not appear in front of u on a daily basis or you can make it disappear completely.


But how do u keep ur mind away from something which keeps coming back and each time creates more doubt and uncertainity about yourself? How do u get rid of the fear that has started to slowly reside in your heart? Is it even possible?

These thoughts keep lurking both Jai-Bani's mind on a daily basis and it justs keep getting worse.

And then suddenly one day both Jai-Bani bump into each other again this time they decide not to runaway from each other infact both turn and walk towards each other.

Then the most strange feeling happens to both of them it is like they are walking to someone who belongs to them and that alone gives a sweet tingling sensation in both their hearts a feeling that cannot be described in words only felt in the hearts of your lover.

Jai and Bani meet each other and talk to each other. They both sit in a garden and try to understand where each is coming from and both tell each other their dreams. Both also find out that their dreams occur at 4:30am in the morning and that to them is no concidence.

Both Jai-Bani believe that their dreams are connected to each other and now they have to find out how?

Preview for the Next Part-
Jai-Bani keep meeting and try to figure out a solution to the problem.
Jai-Bani get spooked by a man who calls them Raja-Rani!!!!
Who is the man?
Jai-Bani's car breakdowns and come to a house and are stunned to see their own photographs on the wall of the house.
What is the mystery behind the house?

Keep Reading!!!!

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-V
Jai and Bani meet each other and talk to each other. They both sit in a garden and try to understand where each is coming from and both tell each other their dreams. Both also find out that their dreams occur at 4:30am in the morning and that to them is no concidence.

Both Jai-Bani believe that their dreams are connected to each other and now they have to find out how?

Both Jai-Bani keep meeting they are trying to figure out how their lifes are connected. Is there a way? But how will they know.

Lost in these thoughts, they both were sitting in the garden trying to figure out the biggest mystery of all. Suddenly there is a man who sees them and is stunned.

He comes near the bench in the park where they are sitting he cannot believe that they are still alive and he had seen them dying with her own eyes. How is this possible?

Both Jai-Bani feel there is someone looking at them. When Jai-Bani look up they see a oldman of 80 years old looking at them with a horror-stricken face. Jai studies the old man's face a little closer. The wrinkles on the face can be seen clearly.

He looks from a village.

He is wearing a dhoti-kurta with a bag on his right shoulder. He is carrying a bamboo in his hand. He is wearing a rajasthani shoes. He says this cannot be them. Jai-Bani get up to come near him but he runs and almost trips himself he says Raja-Rani have died how can they be standing in front of me.

The very words of his spook Jai-Bani both feel a cold shiver go through their body. Both mummble Raja-Rani by the time they come to their senses the man is long gone.

They try to search him everywhere but are unable to do so. He seem to have vanished in thin air leaving Jai-Bani more confused than ever.

Since it is getting late Jai tells Bani he will leave her home Bani although hesitant nods ok. Jai-Bani drive in his black Merc.

All of a sudden it starts to rain heavily. Jai curses and says Mumbai's weather is damn unpredictable. Jai and Bani keep going. With the rains getting heavier by the second. Jai can barely see anything infront of him. The wipers are not helping him either. Since the rain is lashing on the front of the car. Both Jai-Bani have closed their car windows.

Jai-Bani keep going they seem to have lost their directions. All of a sudden the car jerks and stops. Jai tries to re-start it but the car seems to have other plans. The car is not starting.

Jai looks at the odometer to see that it is showing the car is not out of petrol it is showing 3/4 still left in the car.

Jai-Bani seem to have been stuck in a car in rains on a road leading to nowwhere. Jai keeps looking but all he can see is rains and darkness that looms the night. All of a sudden he sees light not far from where they are. At least it seems so.

Jai-Bani decide to risk it. By the time they reach to this deserted house they seem to have been completely drenched and they seem to be standing at the doors of the house. Jai seems to knock but know one seems to answer them.

Jai-Bani both a little nervous and scared push the door to find that the door of the house is unlocked this is not helping either of them to remain calm. They are spooked to the core.

Just as they enter the house they are stunned to see what greets them. It is a painted picture of Jai-Bani who seemed to be smiling in this painting made by the artist.

They look around and find the pictures of them staring back at them. Jai-Bani are too numb to react and cannot believe that they are staring at themselves in this deserted house.

Preview for the Next part-
What is the mystery behind this house?
Is it somewhere connected to their past lives?
The house reveals traces of their past lives.
Jai-Bani figure out that the dreams are of their past lives.
Jai-Bani discover something startling about themselves.

Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish

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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
wow manish...so good...
why did u stop...i wnat more...
love it...what is the secret...
hope they fall in love again soon...lol...update when u can 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow amazing 👏 👏 👏 ...
please cont soon want to know the secret...!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thank you all for your lovely and encouraging comments.

Part-VI
Jai-Bani decide to risk it. By the time they reach to this deserted house they seem to have been completely drenched and they seem to be standing at the doors of the house. Jai seems to knock but know one seems to answer them.

Jai-Bani both a little nervous and scared push the door to find that the door of the house is unlocked this is not helping either of them to remain calm. They are spooked to the core.

Just as they enter the house they are stunned to see what greets them. It is a painted picture of Jai-Bani who seemed to be smiling in this painting made by the artist.

They look around and find the pictures of them staring back at them. Jai-Bani are too numb to react and cannot believe that they are staring at themselves in this deserted house.

Jai-Bani are now caught in two minds whether to proceed further or runaway from this place as far as possible. The house has some parts of the house has lights other parts are dark. Jai Walia does not know what to do?

Both Jai-Bani can hear their hearts pound and know both of them are scared out of their wits too much pride at stake to admit that they are scared.

Jai looks at Bani and both know their curiousity has gotten better of them. The house seemed deserted then how come the front door was open?

Jai did not know which way too proceed. The house was a huge one. They were standing in the middle of what use to be a living room. The floor is wooden and creaks every time either Jai or Bani move and that just heightens their heart a little further.

Both Jai-Bani are holding hands and are completely unaware of this fact. The room is full of dust and cobwebs.

Infact the entire house is full of dust and cobwebs all over the place. It seems know one has stayed in this place for a long time.

Jai-Bani both find it hard to believe that the entire house is full of dust and cobwebs but yet the paintings and pictures on the wall are clean and neat.

It seems someone wipes them on a daily basis.

Who could it be?

Jai sees a stairs connected to the living room. It is fully wooden. Jai Walia takes out his lighter to know where both are going. Jai-Bani slowly proceed to take one step at a time and the stairs creak under their foot.

There is a strange silence in the house and everytime the floor creaks the sound echoes across the house making Jai-Bani tremble further.

Jai sees that the left halif of the house is in complete darkness but the right half has light almost everywhere. Jai-Bani do not know what to believe anymore? But still keep moving.

The find all the rooms are locked except one where the door creaks everytime a light breeze touches it. Jai tries to find the source of the wind and sees the door open. He further examines the other doors they are locked.

But both Jai-Bani walk into this room.

Both see a lot of steel boxes and paers spread all over the place. It is a newspaper dating back to 1950. There is a news of a masscare of a village boy and a girl. The paper is torn at places. Jai can barely hold it. He is trying to read the article. Then Jai looks at the picture and is shocked. Bani is holding at another newspaper and she seems to be holding the same article.

Both Jai-Bani look at each other in disbelief as they understand that their dreams are of their past lives and the violent death that they both had suffered. Jai-Bani do not how to react to this. Both are pespiring and scared like hell.

Jai-Bani further investigate and find out that this was their house that they lived after their marriage there are letters and other family evidences that prove this. Jai-Bani are both scared and it further dons on them that they were married to each other in the past lives.
But what puzzles them even further is why were they killed?

As both are lost in the thoughts they both stiffen when they hear footsteps coming their way.

Suddenly they move towards the door to get out of the house but as they reach the door it automatically shuts down on their face both Jai-Bani try to pull the door open but all attempts fail.

They further see all the windows shutting up one by one. And then they feel someone just walks upto them through the wooden door both Jai-Bani faint.

Preview for the next part-
Jai-Bani dream about their past lives.
Jai-Bani come to know the truth behind their deaths.


Would love to know ur comments.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
haila...they fainted...OMG
whats going to happen now...
who is this myserious person...
so many questions... 😉 😉 😉
cant wait for more...
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
Dear Guys,
I am leaving for America tomorrow.
As I need time to settle down there.
Hence I will not be able to update any of my ff for the next two weeks.
I will be back on the KS forum by Dec 10.
After which I will update all my ff.
I hope to see you soon again.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,

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