Bin Tere Hum Tere-P6,Pg.4 NotePg 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a new Jai-Bani fanfic.
Fanfic preview:
Jai-Bani cross each other and for some reason are pulled towards each other.
Jai keeps seeing flashes from the past and so does Bani.
The flashes are gloomy and are not clear at all.
This is a reincarnation story of Jai-Bani who got separated in past life and now are re-born again.
Will they meet this time or will fate separate them again?

Part-I
Jai Walia is walking on the street he just came out of a restaurant where he had a lunch meeting. As he got on the street he bumped into someone. He mutters sorry and moves on.

But something in him forces to look back. And he sees Bani for the first time. Bani is just staring at him and he stares back at her. Both do not know each other but are attracted there is a force that is pulling them towards one another.

Two people who are unknown to each other are staring each other like two dumbstruck people in the middle of the day in broad daylight oblivious to the fact that people are just staring them.

After sometime, they both all of a sudden pull away. And walk away from each other.

As Jai walks back to his car a flash comes infront of him a gloomy flash of a village where he is runnning and he is teasing a girl they seem to be enjoying each other and Jai almost collapses but the hold on the car breaks his fall.

Jai takes a deep breath.

He cannot understand what is happening? Who was that girl?

Bani is also walking back stunned unable to understand or comprehend what just happened. Sudddenly the same flashes come in front of her as in front of Jai. The field and teasing a boy. He runs and pulls her hair and she chases him.

Bani is about to collapse but somehow manages not to fall.

She takes a deep breath.

She cannot comprehend what just happened? Who was that guy?

Both Jai and Bani are confused and scared at the sametime.

Preview for Next Part-
Jai-Bani see each other again.
Jai and Bani have a dream and that scares them.
Jai-Bani cannot understand what is happening to them.

Would love to know ur comments.

Pls tell me if I should continue or stop.

Keep Smiling,
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 19 years ago
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You know what I am going to say right mk.... i am worning you to con soooon....

too good yaar.. 👏

Edited by hanaane - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Manish, good something on different lines............ 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow!!

man how many are you writing??

ur trying to be my record of 10 arent you? 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dk*s_Jaanu_Guli

wow!!

man how many are you writing??

ur trying to be my record of 10 arent you? 😉 😆


Actually I am currently writing 6 of them. Would love to know ur comments. They are:
1.Touched by Love
2. The Runaway Bride
3. A Force to Reckon with- A Jai-Bani Crime thriller
4. Hum-tum
5. Bed of Roses
6. Bin Tere Hum Tere

Would love to know ur comments.
Happiness Always,
Manish
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏
loved the story line
Jai and Bani in a village that something different
keep it up
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Whoa..you are on a roll aren't you Manish!! I'm loving it, totally!! Love the Bed of Roses, Runaway Bride and Touched by Love. Awesome stuff! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow manish bhaiya(hope u dont mind me calling bhaiya)
u r writing 6 fanfics?!
I have read 4 of them will read others too.ur stories are really addicting. 👏 👏
keep it going

Lots of love
Shabna 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will say just wow wow
very good and carry on
👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 pliz continue
its lovely

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