FF-Revenge is BSC! note pg. 44

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Hi guys!!! this is my first attempt to write an ff!!! hope you guys like it... if you here is the intro will be posting part 1 and 2 later on today!!! all comments good and bad are welcome pls if you guys have any ideas after reading part 1 and 2 pls do pm me and let me know....ill incorporate them somewhere....hope you guys like it....

intro of story!!!

the story is about Bani singh who falls on love with Jai walia....but he is a womanizer doesnt want to get married...his sister jigyasa is after him to get married to roshni chopra....because she is rich so if he gets married to him Roshni and Jai can fuse their companies and will end up being richer than before...but Jai to go against his sister decides to marry a middle class girl whom he doesnt love....BANI!!! but he doesnt know that fate has a big twist for him......JAI after marrying BANI, abandons her and leaves to go to europe...leaving a heart broken Bani behind....bani cannot forgive him for the fact that he just used her to get to his sister...so she vows that she will use all her strenght and will uncover her past and will once again rise from the dead...becasue that is what she considers herself after the deceit....she considers herself dead....she will come back but not as before...not as the girl...who gave her heart, body and soul...for love...but as the ruthless, intelligent and calculating hard core business woman....to seek what her heart which now has become a stone wants....REVENGE....and as they say REVENGE IS BETTER SERVED COLD!!!

Intro of characters…

Jai Walia: 30 years old… Business tycoon, owner and President of Walia Group of Industries. He is happy with life....doesnt believe in settling down in life...he uses woman and changes them as ofter as he changes his clothes… lives with his sister, brother in law, nephews, masi and dadi….he loves his family a lot. But is sick and tired of his sister troubling him to tie the knot!!! His dream is to work in Partnership in a hotel project with the Famous Industrialist Kumar Singhania, who is the richest man in the world and an amazing business man.

Jigyasa Walia: Jai Walias sister…money minded….typical snobbish rich woman…she and her husband aditya are going through a tough time in their relationship…they are getting divorced. She is elder than Jai …She is 45 years old…she is bad…she can go to any extent to get what she wants…she wants jai to get married to Roshni Chopra because she is very rich…

Aditya Malhotra: Jais best friend and brother in law…he is married to Jigyasa…soon they will be divorced. Sweet guy…he is not money minded…he loves his kids…sahil, ranveer and anu.

Ranveer: He is aditya and jigyasas elder son…very fun loving and loves his family…he is good at heart and hopes to one day find the love of his life…works with Aditya and Jai in walia group of industries.

Sahil: he is attending college and finishing BBA….his dream is to go to new york to do his MBA…he is in his last year of college…(he is the same as in the serial)….only difference he is studious.

Anu: She is sweet and fun loving….doesnt have a major role in the fan fic…she is in college and the whole time she is with her friends.

Bani Singh: She is known as Bani Singh to everybody but actually her name is BANISHIKA KUMAR SINGHANIA….(guys sorry for such a lame name but couldn't think of anything else)….she is 23 years old ….she comes from a very rich family…infact she is the daughter of THE RICHEST MAN IN THE ENTIRE WORLD…she is 10 times richer than the walias…she is the heir to the Singhania empire which is huge…her father MR. KUMAR SINGHANIA lives in the United States of America… she was born and Brought up in New York...she hates the lavish life that she had back home so she moved to Mumbai with her best friend Rano…she wanted to have a simple middle class life…she wanted people to know her as what she was not at what she had…nobody in the whole world knows what does Kumar Singhanias daughter look like….her father never introduced her to society because she didn't want to….he respected her wishes…she is fun loving and sweet…doent care for money though she has had all the comforts in her life…she is doing BBA and wants to find the love of her life….

Rano Dixit: She and bani grew up together calls bani BANI DI…Ranos parents where Banis parents best friends…they also where very rich and died when rano was 17 in a car accident ...their name where Nishikant and Rakhi Dixit….rano is also 21…studies with bani both are doing BBA…Kumar singhania has been a father to Rano…she calls him papa…she considers Bani her elser sister.

Kumar Singhania: He is a rich industrialist....hardcore business man...his dream is that his daughter should take up the company after him.…He is a widow…was married to Kiran Singhania…she died when Bani was 19…her mother was in the car with ranos parents…all three of them died…He is a sweet guy loves his daughter more than anything….treats rano like his own child…both are his most precious possession…he knows about Banis secret identity in mumbai…he doesn't mind it because he just wants to see her happy…doesn't care about money…though he has more than you can ever imagine…

He owns Singhania group of industries…his main office is in new york but has offices all over the world…owns several companies, hotels and resorts…owns houses in the most amazing places like spain. Italy, france etc… owns restaurants…petroleum companies…etc…to get to work with is the dream of all business men....she is known worldwide and all the eligible bachelors wonder what is his daughter like....as no one has actually seen her...his pictures are usually shown in each magazine available and newspaper...

Pia Sinha: Rich girl…good for nothing spends her fathers money on jewellery, clothes and hangs out with her friends…adores her friends and is willing to help them in anything…her best friends are Jigyasa and Roshni Chopra...Pia is bad like Jigyasa….

Roshni Chopra: Same as Pia….money minded and calculating….the only difference is that roshni has a company of her own…she is a hardcore business woman…likes Jai Walia….dreams of becoming his wife….she is evil…she is just like jigyasa.

MORE CHARACTERS WILL BE INTRODUCED AS THE STORY MOVES ON... WILL BE POSTING PART 1 IN A SHORT WHILE.

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Can't wait for the first part!!!!
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ooh sounds really good!!
can't wait for the first part!!
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that was a great intro.looking forward to reading it. 😊
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omg andrea!! finally!! ant waittttt!!!! omg, ahahah my mind is already trailing off with possibilities of all dat could happen!! i have to pm u with some of my questions (yes they have formed already, all my inquisitive questions lol) because i dont want to accidentally give away an idea or something!!! will pm u asap!! but not right this moment, a bit later.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 Finally you are starting a ff of your own...the storyline looks interesting and to tell you the truth just by reading the introduction you have left me hooked!
You have always been a strong supporter of my ff's and i am very happy that you have decided to write one of your own...i am sure that it will be amazing!
The plot looks amazing...can't wait to know Jai's reaction to Bani being rich...i hope he actually does eventually falls in love with her! ( ok i know what i want is a long way off...but hey like i said the intro was amazing that it has left my mind churning!)
Luv
Sweetu 😳
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ooooo, nice intro, can't wait for the first part 👏
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guys thank you so much...working on the first part as yet...will be posting in a while....will let you guys know!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey andrea! can't wait for you to update the first part!!! very nice intro, you've got me hooked! 😊 😊 😊 will be waitig patiently for the first part!!! please update it soon! 😃

Love,
Godess
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Honey, i can hardly wait for your ff!
It sounds very interesting!
armana

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