ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12) - Page 91

Originally posted by: koko_chetna

CHAPTER -3

precap- *interviews*

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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

sorry 4 late update

chapter 4

precap: "sharon n kria" -encounter with their real boss

do hit like button n comment ... hope u'll enjoy ... we know this part is little lame but we can't help it.. nothing came in our mind... we r really busy.. plz manage with this..this time..

(chetna n kosha)

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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

hey guys happy newyr..
this ff is unified version of ishq jagra manzil since the author jenifer of this ff is busy with her another ff n demand of this ff have been very much ... hence we (kosha n chetna) r going to continue it...
the first part is from the previous ff n we will be continuing from 2nd part... we r not good writers as hers but we tried our best hope u'll like it n critisism is invited...

so presenting

any ideas related to FF r also invited

n also let us know if u all r interested

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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter 7






It was lunch time, sharon & pinky was sitting and having their lunch in the canteen...

sh: khadoos, maha khadoos, maha maha khadoos...!!

p: chill yaar!! itna gussa mat kar warna wrinkles padh jayenge...

welcomed...any ideas, views...let me know...

plz if u have any one in mind as a cook let me know...
cook is grumpy, laughs very little..., possesive about his kitchen...
(plz send me the name or link of his photo)




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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter 8

new entry: martin (cook)
funny, jovial, crack jokes, possesive about his dearest kitchen











swayam was reading newspaper when rey entered..

r: goodmorning dude!!



r:ok..

m: so meet u in the evening...

krisha(smiled): ok

swayam n krisha went to krisha's new room ...

while rey was just to walk he noticed something gliteering in his shirt...he took it in his hands n a smile crept in his sexy lips...it was kria's earring still stucked in his shirt.. he slid it in his pocket n went to join others...






phew!!
precap: setting up their rooms..., some caring n romantic moments...



ps: plz comment n criticism is well invited n let me know what u think n plz peeps tell me if anything else is needed.. to make it more comfortable..




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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

specially for snigdha143 , star94, shaffy_arsha

chapter -9



all four of them were standing in the room with their hands on their waist looking all the furnitures randomly placed in the room...

sharon shot a dagger look at swayam...

but rey interupted
r: n agar wo phir bhi nahi bhaage toh swayam toh hai na u can sleep with him...😉😉


pheww!!

precap: not thought yet..may be valentine day...




ps: plz do hit the like button n coment on this part...any criticism are invited...







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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

sholly guys i know am late by 5 days am so sholly actually d3 me rey ko dekhkar my heart stopped working..n by the way its chapter 10 am so happy iam on chapter 10 wow..thanks 2 u guys 4 encouraging me thank u so much muahh!!

chapter -10




new entry : robert ( gardener)
jovial, funny, good at heart..consider reyam martin as his good friends





A DAY BEFORE VALENTINE DAY

It was early moning 6:00 am

m: offcousrse ...i can...n iwill not give u icecream...

"WHY NOT"...came a voice all looked at the voice direction...





pheww!!!
precap: entry of miss maria n rey ka band bajega... swayam fed up of sharon...


ps: plz do hit the like button n coment on this part...any criticism are invited...precap toh de diya but i am thinking of discontinuing it.. what say?? plz also tell me hwz storry going is it too fast or too slow



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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

chapter-11



new entry:miss maria (rey's nurse)
lovely n love interest of martin





"WHY NOT"...came a voice all looked at the voice direction...


r: martin what r u doing...??

k: ya martin we r sorry...

but martin was no mood to listen to them after what they did to his life-his kitchen...

he just dragged them...kriyansh seeing what coming next...

kriyansh: NO NO MARTIN NOOO

n with that martin pushed kriyansh into rey's bathroom n said " this is your punishment" n locked the door from outside...

pheww!! bas itna hi, viva hai

precap: kriyansh in bathroom n swaron in lift
(just imagine)


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Originally posted by: koko_chetna

😃ok guys i know u all want to kill me but kya karu " laziness rocks" n 4 updating late

to make up for my fault here is next update its pretty long...

chapter-12

pheww!! completed ...

precap: new entry ...any guesses???lets see who guesses right...entry of mysterious "SHE" n "THEY"

ps: ok guys now some serious talks: plz tell me n comment on it n do hit like button...critisicm is invited...i know this chapter is a lame one, i myself is not satisfied with this chapter..i know its worth not waiting ...u all expected a romantic scenes but i dont wanna ruin my story(i am kinda unromantic person) sorry 4 that... n also plz dont comment until u get pm ( exception: u r left 4 pm by mistake) as while this chapter i wrote half of it n lights went off so couldnt complete editing it ..n few of u commented on it...

n 4 pm plz add "koko_chetna" in ur buddy list...

n silent reader plz comment

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