ISHQ JHAGRA MANZIL (chapter 1-12)

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CHAPTER-8

recap: sharon-kriya found out the ir new apartment which they had to share with some house mates

new entry: martin (cook)
funny, jovial, crack jokes, possesive about his dearest kitchen

swayam was reading newspaper when rey entered..

"goodmorning dude!!"

"good morning !! so whats ur plan 4 today?"swayam reciprocated

"nothing special i cancelled all the meetings of ours.." rey said sitting on his chair

"what?? u cancelled all the meetings?? but why?" swayam asked with shock

"dude i think u forgot!! today sharon n her sis are going to shift here" rey informed him

"so?" swayam asked looking out of the newspaper

"don't act before me as if u don't understand any thing" rey said

"ok! ok! but i dont want to indulge with that chatter box of yours..oh god pehle to office mein hi bol bol kar mera dimag kha jati thi.. ab toh uski baatein 24 hrs jhelni padegi.." swayam commented

"sharon toh phir bhi thik hai but uski woh sis.." rey shook his head

swayam thought of teasing rey a bit..
"uski sis kaun??" swayam asked

"arrey woh.."

"woh kaun?" swayam suppressed his lips and asked innocently

"woh miss beautiful.."

"ahaan!! miss beautiful!! nice name dude." swayam teased

"thanks" rey smiled sheepishly

"haan tu kuch bol raha tha..?"

"haan woh jab bhi use dekhta hun toh kahin kho sa jata hun.." rey answered

"dude r u falling 4 her??"

"falling?? no way!! reyansh singhania dont fall 4 any one rather chiks fall 4 rey.."

"dude leave it.. they will be here at any time.." swayam shook his head at rey's denial

"yeah!!"

soon they heard a lorry's sound outside their house...

rey & swayam came outside of their house & what swayam saw shocked him...

instead of the driver, sharon was driving the lorry...and driver who was about 55-60 years old was sitting next to driver seat...

rey was little disappointed on not seeing kria anywhere..
he greeted sharon n went to guide the workers for placing the furnitures in correct place...

while driver got out of the lorry and sharon was looking at swayam for help.., swayam forwarded his hand towards sharon..but sharon looked here n there and at his hand...
swayam understood why she was looking at his hand...he placed his hands on her waist n pulled her out...😉😉

swayam's hands were still on her waist while her hands were on his shoulder..
they were standing in the same position but driver broke their look look hawa hawa session...they were feeling a little awkward...
a blow of wind broke their trance

but soon sharon turned to driver n spoke
"see old sexy, i told u, i can drive ur lorry perfectly"

" yes that i can see !! " old man answered smiling

just then rey came there n soon kria arrived with her car..with 5 luggage bags in the car..
rey was mesmerized by her beauty ...she looked as fresh as the first ray of sunshine n cool breeze played with her hairs..😍😍
she came out of the car and went to driver..

"hope everything is fine uncle..."

before driver could speak ,sharon interupted..

" yeah everything is fine...see i told u...i am a good driver.."

"yeah right.."

"yeah!! she almost ran over the hen which came in our way n broke two traffic signals..nothing more... u see..🤣🤣"

kria looked at sharon n raised her eyebrows..
sharon seeing the trouble spoke "well i would better go n help the worker's"..

before kria could speak she ran inside..

All (reyam, driver n kria herself) had a hearty laugh..

swayam went inside n rey stood there staring his miss beautiful..
kria turned to driver n said softly.."sorry uncle, she is little childish"

"are u her sis?" driver enquired

"yes she is 5 min younger than me..i am really sorry if there is any loss.." kriya appolozised

"dont worry beta!! although she is little childish n cheerful but she heirs all sweetness from u.."
with that he patted warmly on her head..

"thank u.." kria said sweetly

kria paid the driver n bid goodbye..

rey was seeing her talk with driver with smile & murmered " mujhse toh itni sweetly kabhi bhi baat nahi karti"

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All furnitures & luggage were already placed in their room..
only one box and one teddy and 3 small teddy were left...

sharon was struggling with her teddies...
she tripped on her heels n fell with loud thud on her teddies..

swayam came to rescue..no he didn't catch her this time., he was little late..thankfully,she didn't get hurt..

swayam bent down to her n asked "are u okay??"

" yeah am fine..."

"i was not asking u , i was asking these teddies jo tumhare bojh ke neeche dab gaye hai.."

"what?? huh!! whatever.." sharon said sticking out her tongue

"ok.. ok.. are these yours??"

"yes!! aren't they cute??😆😆" (she chirped happily)

swayam rolled his eyes at her chirping nature...
" ok let me just help u, just hold these two teddy , i'll hold this big one... now get up" he forwarded his hand towards sharon..

sharon placed hand in his n swayam pulled her with full force towards himself...

sharon jerked n landed against his chest ,too close to him...n their look look hawa hawa session began...😳😳

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outside the house kria was trying to lift the box ...
but rey insisted to lift the box himself..

"no thanks i can do my work myself.."

"wo toh dikh hi raha hai...chodo mai utha lunga.."

" kaha na nahi.." kria said

" haan.." rey retorted back

" i said no.."

"i said yes.."

" no.."

" yes.."

"no.."

" kabhi toh meri baat maan lo patni ji...😉😉" rey teased

kria almost blurted in anger
" tum nahi maan sakte pati ji...😆😆 "

kria realised what she spoke just now.. she was little embarrassed...

rey smirked n raised his eyebrows...

to coverup the situation she said " woh ..woh..."

"kya.."

"woh kya hai na box thoda bhaari hai .. tum akele nahi utha paoge

" toh tum help kar do..." he mocked enjoying

"huh!! ok let me help u.."

the box was indeed heavy...

" isme kya stones layi ho??" rey asked while trying to lift boxes

"shutup isme books hai..."

"ye lo ek aur encyclopedia is ghar mein aa gayi...swayam kya kam tha!!" he muttered under his breath and tried to lift the box in which kriya readily helped by catching it from other end

"kuch kaha tumne...??" she narrowed her eyes

" arr nahi toh..."

rey was heading backward with box by catching it from one side in his hand n kria holding from front at other end..

"reyaansh dyaan se chalna books girni nahi chahiye.."

"dont worry .. tum kaho toh main ise akele hi utha leta woh to tumne insist kiya is liye..."

" ya right tum toh superman ho na.." kriya mocked

"yeah..."

just then as rey stepped backward he tripped n box tore by itself and all book fell down from the box...

" dekha kaha tha maine books ko mat girana..but tum toh reyansh singhania ho na koi kaam thik se kar sakte ho..??" she taunted

" thik thik hai ab mujhe uthaogi bhi ya sirf scold karte hi rahogi.."

kria forwarded her hand to rey...but rey pulled her so hard that she too fell on him...rey was laughing at her like a maniac.. kria's head was on his chest...kria liffed her
head from his chest..rey stopped laughing n again got lost in her...he never noticed her green almond eyes from so close before ..😳😳
he was lost in her eyes.. they were just a cm away...soon cool breeze passed in between them which broke the trance of their eye lock between them...

unknowingly rey's hand flew to put back the strand of her hair behind her ears...kria shiverred at his touch..😳😳
she tried to get up but soon screamed.. "ouchh!!" as her earring got stuck in his shirt...😉😉

she tried to take it out but was unsuccessful...rey brought his hand towards her ear n unknowingly instead of taking out the earing from his shirt he took out from her ears...n none of them noticed it...
kria stood up abruptly n spontaneously without looking at rey , started to pick up the books...

"let me hold this books u gather them.."

kria didn't said anything just gathered the books n handed them to rey who was just busy in staring her...

on the other side swaron were not affected by any noise...they were still indulge in their look look hawa session...👍🏼👍🏼

just then a loud bang shooked both the couples...

" hey bhagwaan!! am i dreaming" said a voice who was standing at some distance with all groceries littered around his feet...(offcourse entry of cook) 👏👏

swayam n rey both came towards him while krisha sisters stood at their place...

" what hapenned ?? why r u shouting??"

"shout na karu toh kya karu?? aaj ka din to world history records mein record hona chahiye..." man said in his high pitch voice

"why??"

man(while pointing towards swayam): see who is holding teddy bears in his hands..🤣🤣

rey looked at swayam n looked at the man...the man n rey started laughing n hi fived with each other...they were laughing at swayam...🤣🤣

"ya ya has lo...but martin kuch jyada nahi has rahe ho tum..??"

"swayam baba mai sirf aap par nahi balki rey baba par bhi has raha hu..." man said lughing

"mujh par?? but why??" rey asked in confusion

" rey baba aapke haath mein books dekh kar hasi aa gyi...u look like a cartoon.. he he books n u!! what a joke..."
n continued laughing...🤣🤣

this time swayam laughed n hi fived with martin...

"shutup both of u.."

they both stopped laughing..
"martin they will also be living here from today..." rey said pointing towards kria and sharon
" he is martin our awesome cook..."

krisha sisters greeted martin...

"it was nice meeting u... if u r done with setting all ur stuffs then let me know i'll make special tea for u all..."

" n i 'll help u in the kitchen.." rey said getting excited

"mr. rey singhania!! i think u forgot u r banned in my kitchen...😆😆" martin gave a dissaproving look

"but.." rey tried to argued

"no buts!! last time when u came out from my dearest kitchen u totally ruined it...it looked like as if a huge storm passed from my kitchen..🤣
u better go help these beautiful ladies in setting up their rooms..."

"ok.." rey said knowing he lose the argument

"so meet u in the evening..."

"ok" krisha noded in agreement

swayam n krisha went to krisha's new room ...

while rey was just to walk he noticed something glittering in his shirt...he took it in his hands n a smile crept in his sexy lips...it was kria's earring still stuck in his shirt.. he slid it in his pocket n went to join others...😍😍

phew!!
precap: setting up their rooms..., some caring n romantic moments...

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chsripriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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amazing yaar especially oved svayam holding teddy bears and rey holding books even i was laughing and lovely swaron and kriyaansh romance and i loved martin charecter and plz update soon and thnx for pm me

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Nikki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Amazing update and thanks for the pm :D

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Posted: 14 years ago

#330

Awesum Update Girls...Swayam wud hve been looking soo cute holding those teddies❤️...Awiee...Nd ya pls update soon...nd btw d cook ws superr cute ...All d bst👍🏼