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hi everyone our forum is so active and we have the best writers here .taking inspiration from u guys i decided to write an ff on manveer.its not a fresh idea i just got an idea reading ur ff ss oswhich iam putting down. first only i must say it wont have the standard our writers over here have .and this is the first time i am writing any thing online or offline only though ur encouragement can i proceed this .if u feel i should give it a try pls tell me or ignore it
flashback
flashback
it was early morning .the sun was just rising .the royal families of daivgarh and jaigarhhad come to haridwar to offerprayers in the temple.uday a small boy of 5 years was holding the hand of his best friend and fiance(he doesn't know its meaning) manyata a 4 year old girl .both of them where busy plannning how to escape from the sight of the guards as they were getting bored of all this prayers they wanted to play
uday 'its so boring over here come lets play hide and seek'
manyatha'ok you hide ill count till fifty
uday but do u know to count till fifty
manyatha yes 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 15 30 50
uday my god ok u count but dont cheat
as manyata started counting uday went and hid behind the mandir .there was a beggar over there
.he looked at uday ' what a cute little boy if i make him blind in one eye by pouring hotoil and burn his body with a heatedrod and break his legs then ill get more money i get now from begging .people ara so sympathetic here"
he got up and looked around .no one was there .he caught uday and hit his head with his stick .uday fell unconscious.he took uday from there and ran though the road leading to a jungle<
meanwhile their parents came out and saw manyatha they asked where uday was .she told he was hiding .the guards went to searh for uday they searched the whole temple and its surrounding but the prince was not found..
thanks for reading till here.plz ignore the grammatical and spelling errors .if u feel i should continue plz tell me otherwise ignore
Index
prologue- page 1
story sketch- page 3
chap 15 pg 64
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Naagin 7
Health and Fitness
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