FANFIC:KANK: UPDATED STORY COMPLETED - Page 11

wow....its really good...continue ok...i would love to read more...

recap mukti feels unsecured and asks prem that she wants to get married soon then they show a week later everyone is getting ready sneha kasak vashaka r dressing mukti up mukti looks really sad in her mind she is thinking is prem like that did he really no that cant be but then what i saw what was that then everyone goes out and prena comes in mukti muje tumse kuch kehna hai patha hai jab tumhna prem ko mana kar diya tha 5 saal pehla muja both bura laga tha ka ek achi ladki na mere bata ko mana kar diya par fir jab ab tumhna ha kiya muja both kushi mili ab main aram se ji sak thi hu aj ka bad ghaar ki sare simidari tum sambha logi mukti hugs prena then prena leaves and mukti thinks i dont know what to do now i dont want to hurt choti maa ok then its decided i will get married i will deal with him tonight ok then here prem is thinking did mukti really no she cant do that but why would my eyes lie
then prena comes in and says to prem that aj mah both kush ho tumha finally ek aise ladki mili jo tumse both pyar karti hai aur tumha sam bhaage then they show in the mandak the sath phere during the first phere prem says in his mind after all that u did and i think u did i will still supprt you and luv u until the truth is revealed mukti says that in her mind to then the pheras r over its time for vidiye she is not crying after all she is going to the house where her own people are then its suhag raat prem wants to go to the room but sneha made a plan to irritate him she send some hot ladies with mini skirts to him then they started flirting with them then he finally shoos them away but outside his room sneha kasak and vishaka r standing and they say andher jana hai he says yes well they say shagun he goes like what they say money then he asks how much they go like 50,000 he goes like whatever then gives it to them they leave he goes inside he wants to talk to mukti very urgently but when he steps in he is totally suprised as to what he saw!

wow!cant wait for the next part!

recap-prem enters te room and is shocked
prem- mukti yeh sab kya hai she had destroyed the whole room the flowers on the bed the decorations the room was looking like hell
mukti- prem aj se hamari shadi ue hai per hum kabhi pati aur patni nahi banaga you r such a fraud u slept with debo
prem- oh acha to jab khud ki galti pakdi gaye to muj pa ilsam laga rahi hu tumhna bhi to karan ka saath suae(karan the onw who decieved mukti)
mukti-whatever tum itna gandha such sak to hu muja patha nahi tha aj ka bad mujse bath nahi karna she then throws a pillow at him and says i take the bed u take the couch they both r crying in their place they both r deeply hurt and the song is playing kabhi alvida na kehna and then finally its morning mukti wakes up early and cleans the room before anybody finds out what happend she then takes a shower and gets ready she wakes up prem and tells him that get ready before choti maa comes he gets up she takes the pillow from the couch and puts it on the bed she takes the comforter and puts it on the bed then prem comes uot of the shower looking hot he is wearing a suit and mukti is wearing a red and blue churidar looking very hot then they both go downstairs for breakfast then when they r eating sneha says i didnt expect u both to come down so early after all its was your nupital night mukti goes like sneha tum bhi na to make sneha feel as if she was embarased then when everybody is in the hall talking prena says to prem that here you go two tickets to london for your honeymoon he takes it she says you r leavung tonight then sends them to pack thier bags then mukti feels very uncomfortable about going to honeyoon but prem is all happy because he wants revenge from mukti and so he is going to make her life hell then they r all set to go(i know i am using then alot but bear with me)sneha kasak vishaka and doris hand prem thier long list of things they want from london then in the airport when the lady asks them what seats do u want mukti says seperate then the both get seprate seats

i hope u liked it check about 1 hour later for another update bye

hey!! do continue soon..but dun write in paragraphs...plz..can u write like u used to befo? like
MUkti: dialogue
prem: dialogue whtever

yeah sure if u want any more changes dont hesitate to tell me i would be glad to change it 😊

ok here it goes sorry for delay

Prem has seat 11 mukti has 17
Then they finally reach London
Mukti is relieved
Prem- basanti stay right here I will go and rent a car
Mukti- ok
They both didn't really talk much only when they both taught it was neccisary to talk the talked
Prem rents a sport car
Prem- basanti I don't think u need an invitation to sit in the car
Mukti without saying a single word sits in the car
Prem thinks in his mind to make mukti feel uncomfortable he should drive fast
He then starts to drive fast but to his surprise mukti does not say a single word its not because she didn't want to fight its because she was lost in her thoughts of how the heck her life got destroyed in her mind she was remembering that day when she saw prem and debos picture of when they were kissing she thought that maybe that might not be true and she should talk to prem
Prem- basanti we have reached to our destination
The lady on the conter gives them their rooms keys
Their room is totally mind blowing I mean it was the best honeymoon suit you ever saw
Then mukti just lays on the bed and throws the pillow on prem prem gets mad but then he doesn't say anything and leaves the room to go to the pub then mukti calls prena and tells her that they reached safely
Prena- where is prem
Mukti- a aa he is he is in the restroom
Prena- ok bye talk to u later
Mukti- bye choti maa
Mukti is watching cartoons on cartoon network then its 3a.m
Prem hasn't returned mukti is thinking
Why should I care let him be in the pub with those almost naked girls
Then its 4:30 a.m mukti decides to go check when almost she had made up her mind of going and was about to open the door prem came in she was speechless what would she say to prem what that she is worried about him what would he think and then prem asks her
Prem- basanti kanhi ja rahi thi tum ha actually main bhar garden main ja rahi thi fresh air ka liye oh thikha good nite
Mukti was surprised prem was nice to her so she decided not to go
Prem was talking in his sleep sayinh
Basanti I luv u so much aur tum ho ki kisi dusra ladka ka sath but pata nahi kyu still why do I luv you basanti I hurt u so much its because I luv u I am possessive about u mukti thinks
I need to talk to prem and clear these mis understandings


Ok guys hope u like it and yeah its 11:30 over here so I have to go to sleep in an hour and my dad needs to work on the computer so I will update tomorrow but listen guys I promise that tomorrow prem an d muktis misunderstandings will be over ok then g night

thanks for changing the update like i said!!! ur fanfic is going great!!! do continue soon

a very good fanfiction.....i be waiting

Prem has seat 11 mukti has 17
Then they finally reach London
Mukti is relieved
Prem- basanti stay right here I will go and rent a car
Mukti- ok
They both didn't really talk much only when they both taught it was neccisary to talk the talked
Prem rents a sport car
Prem- basanti I don't think u need an invitation to sit in the car
Mukti without saying a single word sits in the car
Prem thinks in his mind to make mukti feel uncomfortable he should drive fast
He then starts to drive fast but to his surprise mukti does not say a single word its not because she didn't want to fight its because she was lost in her thoughts of how the heck her life got destroyed in her mind she was remembering that day when she saw prem and debos picture of when they were kissing she thought that maybe that might not be true and she should talk to prem
Prem- basanti we have reached to our destination
The lady on the conter gives them their rooms keys
Their room is totally mind blowing I mean it was the best honeymoon suit you ever saw
Then mukti just lays on the bed and throws the pillow on prem prem gets mad but then he doesn't say anything and leaves the room to go to the pub then mukti calls prena and tells her that they reached safely
Prena- where is prem
Mukti- a aa he is he is in the restroom
Prena- ok bye talk to u later
Mukti- bye choti maa
Mukti is watching cartoons on cartoon network then its 3a.m
Prem hasn't returned mukti is thinking
Why should I care let him be in the pub with those almost naked girls
Then its 4:30 a.m mukti decides to go check when almost she had made up her mind of going and was about to open the door prem came in she was speechless what would she say to prem what that she is worried about him what would he think and then prem asks her
Prem- basanti kanhi ja rahi thi tum ha actually main bhar garden main ja rahi thi fresh air ka liye oh thikha good nite
Mukti was surprised prem was nice to her so she decided not to go
Prem was talking in his sleep sayinh
Basanti I luv u so much aur tum ho ki kisi dusra ladka ka sath but pata nahi kyu still why do I luv you basanti I hurt u so much its because I luv u I am possessive about u mukti thinks
I need to talk to prem and clear these mis understandings


Ok guys hope u like it and yeah its 11:30 over here so I have to go to sleep in an hour and my dad needs to work on the computer so I will update tomorrow but listen guys I promise that tomorrow prem an d muktis misunderstandings will be over ok then g night


Scene 1(prem-mukti)
Prem is sleeping mukti just comes out of the shower goes to prem to wake him up
When she is trying to wake him up he grabs her and rolls down the bed and falls on the floor to wake up and find out it was a dream he smirks



Scene 2(morning)
mukti wakes up and sees prem sleeping she looks at him with a smile on her face she goes and takes a shower she comes out and is drying her hair with towel prem wakes up and sees this some sort of feeling goes inside him that he should go up to her and say I luv u but then he comes to his senses and his ego doesn't let him do that so he decides to give a rude comment
Prem- basanti kitna kharata marthi ho sonna bhi nahi da ti
Mukti- whatever ma koi kharatha nahi marti
Prem- tumh sa sada us isaan ko pata hai jo tumhara saath sota hai so I know
Mukti- wait a sec tumhna kaha insaan per tumh to isaan nahi hoon so it must not be u
Prem gets angry goes up to her hold her hand and takes her up to the wall hold her by her wrist and says
Prem- u
Mukti- d tumha kya lagtha hai ma tumhse dhar jaogi nahi muja tumse dhar nahi lagta u.d
Prem leaves her wrist and just walks into the restroom closing the door very hard
Prem thinks why why r u doing this basanti why

Scene 3(out of shower)
o.k prem comes out of the shower wearing his regular clothes(the clothes he used to wear when he entered kasuti zindagi ki) mukti looks at him and says in her mind
mukti- pata nahi muja kya hogaya tha jo maina tumse aisa baat khi I am soory prem
she walks up to prem and says
mukti- sorry and leaves the room
then she is in the garden walking the song phela nasha is playing and she remembers all her romantic moments with premthen someone calls her it is a room service maid she says to mukti "maam someone called u
mukti- who
maid- ur husband
mukti- ok I am coming
scene 4
mukti is walking to the room and the song ram ram ji radha ram ram ma ram re sita ram
is playing as soon as she opens the door she is just shocked
prem is crying she goes up to hi and asks him
mukti- prem kya huva
prem- mukti mukti and just hugs her mukti is feeling bad for prem and is wondering what happened and prem is just hugging her and his expressions r omg he is smiling as if it's a scheme to hurt mukti

o.k guys I will continue in an hour or so I am so glad not going anywhere so I can write for fan fic bye and reply