FANFIC:KANK: UPDATED STORY COMPLETED

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I know lot of people were disappointed at Mukti return but I have decided to write a FAN FICTION which would satisfy all the people who wanted her to come back as a business tycoon.

My story starts off after the leap. Prerna is back from jail and comes to know that PREM has betrayed their family.

Five years ago when Mukti leaves the Bajaj House she joins an International Event Managing Company and eventually settles in New York. As time passes by she buys the shares of the company and becomes a 50% partner. The other 50% partner is Ishaan (pulkit from Kyuki). They become good friends. Mukti tells him about her past and Ishaan develops respect and love for her but doesn't build up the courage to express his feelings for her.

NEW YORK (PRESENT AFTER 5 YEAR LEAP)

560 Park Avenue

Phone Ringing

Mukti : Kya baat hai Ishaan kyu call kar rahe ho??

Ishaan : How do u know ki main call kar raha hu??

Mukti : Mujhe inti subh kaun pareshaan karega??

Ishaan : Teek hai par Rise and shine baby …it's a beautiful day….. I got up early aur mein bahut bore ho raha tha.

Mukti : Tho tumne mere morning karaab karne ka plan kiya hai??

Ishaan : aur nahi tho kya?

Mukti : Teek hai mein so rahi hu…you can keep talking

Ishaan : come on yaar its weekend kuch karthey hai

Mukti : Tum karo …aur mein sothi hu ok

Ishaan : Tum bahut boring ho

Mukti : Thanks so much same to u

Ishaan : Main aa raha hu get up and get ready ok.

Mukti : Tum bhi na….

Ishaan : I know mein bahut cute and handsome hu

Mukti : uuuufffff…ok bye

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Debonita walks into Prem's room and sees him with a girl

Debonita : Prem yeh ladkhi kaun hai??

Prem : Koyi Bhi ho Tumhe kya??

Debo : Mujse kya?

Prem : Listen, u r not my wife so buzz off and mind ur buisiness

Debo : Listen to me

Prem : No I am not going to and u can't make me ok

Debo gets frustrated and leaves

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This is the introduction of how Mukti's and Prem's lives have transformed after 5 years and where they stand. If you guys like it I am going to continue.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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really gud story. keep it up. 😊
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thats really gud plz continue 😃
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PART 2

Mukti's OFFICE ROOM

Mukti : Ishaan woo Sony Entertainment ka Mumbai event ka kya hua?

Ishaan : We are having a meeting with them today by video conference after that we will decide.

Mukti : But you have to take in charge of that project.

Ishaan : Main jaantha hu ki tum kyu uss project se door rehna chahthi ho…Come on Mukti…past is past…leave it…you have got on with your life.

Mukti : Haan par main apni past ke pass nahi jana chathi ..

Ishaan : OK Tumhari Marzi

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Prerna sends court notice to Prem and tells him to get ready for the case.

Debo : Yeh prerna…what does she think of herself…uski tho

Prem : Debonita stop it….you have no right to talk about Mother India.

Debo : Acha maa par bahut pyaar aa raha hai.

Prem : oh shut up and let me deal with the court case.

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NEW YORK

Ishaan : Mukti, I just got a call from Canada, Mom ki health teek nahi hai. Mujhe waha jana hoga

Mukti : oh god, main bhi chalthi hu

Ishaan : No mukti, you please deal with the Sony Project

Mukti : Par Ishaan

Ishaan : I know , but I have to go and this project is very important for our company

Mukti : Teek Hai, I will take care of everything and call me as soon as you get to Toronto.

Mukti signs the Project and she has to go to Mumbai to arrange the event.



Mumbai Airport

Mukti comes out and sees a driver with her name. She checks into a hotel and calls her Sony Manager to send her all their specifications and arrange for a meeting.

She decides to go and meet Prerna

You see Prerna walking in the middle of the road and a truck behind her.
Just then someone grabs her and when Prerna looks up she sees that its Mukti.

Prerna : Mukti…tum…

Mukti : Chotima aap..

Prerna tells about everything what happened after Mukti left.

Mukti : Main aapke saath hu Chotima. Par aap mujse ek vaada kijiye ki app kisi ko nahi bathayenge ki main Mumbai main hu.

Prerna : Teek hai…

Mukti : Chaliye main aapko ghar chod dethi hu

Prerna : Main tumhe dekhey bahut kush hu

Mukti : Main bhi

Prerna : aisa lagtha hai ki mera thakat wapas aa gaya hai.

They hug and Mukti drops Prerna back at basu house.
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Mukti gets busy with the event and keeps in touch with Prerna

COURT CASE

The case is on Prerna's side and she has confident that she will be able to again get back her property.

Just then Prem bring is fraud papers showing that Mr.Bajaj has written everything on his name and he hasn't done anything wrong.

Prerna calls and tells Mukti about what happened in the court.

Mukti decides to hire a private investigator to find out how Prem has got those paper and how he has got the property.

Mukti : Mr. Mehra, I know those papers Prem has shown in the court are fraud and we need to prove that.

Mr. Mehra : Ms. Deshmukh, we need to find those paper and do some tests on them to figure out if they are fraud. No one can make Gov. property papers other than officials. We need to get hold of those papers and do those tests asap.

Mukti : Mr.Mehra, you please do the work and give me a call. We have only one week time.



EVENT

HOST : Ladies and Gentlemen please welcome to the Sony Entertainment Telly Awards. It is the first time Sony Television has hosted an award ceremony to recognize television talents of India. I am also pleased to tell you that this event is organized by an International Event Managing company. I thank all our partners for making this event possible. Let the show begin.

Ishaan : Hey sweetheart how r u?

Mukti : Ab main tumhe yaah ayi hu? Ithne dinno ke baadh? Aunty Kaisi hai?

Ishaan : oh god !!! tum ethne sawaal kyu karthi ho. Let me answer na

Mukti : OK sorry

Ishaan : Everyone is good. Acha yeh bathao…did u miss me??

Mukti : Sach Bolu ya joot???

Ishaan : ok Joot hi bolo….

Mukti : Tho tum bilkul yaad nahi aaye

Ishaan : how sweet…by the way madam Ghar aane ka mood nahi hai kya?? I heard the event was a huge success. We got some more projects after that

Mukti : Good

Mukti tells him about what happen when she was away

Ishaan : tho stay there help out Prerna aunty and then come.

COURT CASE

Mr. Mehra : Ms. Deshmukh u were right…those papers are fraud. Today we are going to win the case

Mukti is rushing to the court to give Prerna's lawyer the papers. But she is running late

Judge : Mrs. Bajaj, this is not right…court aapke proof ka ithezaar nahi kar saktha.

Prerna : Plz few ore minutes

Prem, Debonita and her aunt are getting happy.

The Judge starts to speak when………………

Your honor here is the proof……………..EVERYONE turns around….Prem's face is frozen……typical…Indian soap music……….

ITS MUKTI

Mukti : Here your honor , these are the papers Mr. Prem has submitted to the court and those were fraud. These are the real will papers. We have performed tests on the fraud papers to prove them wrong. According to these papers…Mrs. Prerna Bajaj is the rightful owner of Bajaj empire. Prem only has few properties on his name.

Everyone is shocked to see Mukti. Prem is burning with anger and shock.

Judge : According to the proof shown by Ms. Deshmukh, its clear that Mrs.Bajaj is the rightful owner of Bajaj Empire and Mr. Prem has to give everything back. The house and all the property.

Prerna Anurag and everyone are happy

Prerna looks at prem outside and tells him that truth always wins.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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great going yaar. 👏 👏 👏 I did not like the way in the serial they still showed mukti to be poor.
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Mukti leaves as soon as the case was accounced and did not give a chance for anyone to meet her.

Mukti : Ishaan…..we won

Ishaan : Mujhe paatha tha mukti tum jeet jaogi

Mukti: Thanks

Ishaan : haan I have to remind something.

Mukti : what??

Ishaan : we got some more projects from India and I want you to deal with all those and then come back here ok.

Mukti : OK if you say so




Prem is drinking in his house and is furious

Debonita : Mujhe patha tha ki tmse kuch teek nahi hoga

Prem : shut up ok and get lost…leave me alone

Debonita : That's what I am going to do. I lost everything because of you

Prem : Listen if you don't shut up I am going to kick you out

Debonita : I knw how to kick you out now

Kamollika : Prem tum issi kaam ke nahi ho…its our fault we trusted you

Prem realizes that these two are like Aparna and they were just using him for his money

Prem : you both get lost and leave me alone. Don't ever enter my hosue again

Debonita : Tumhe tho main nahi chodungi

Prem : Kya karlogi tum huh?? Nautanki

Debonita : tumm….

Prem : mein kya…get lost ok

Debonita and Komollika leave and Prem is left all alone


Next day Prem goes to office

Receptionist : Sir, Madam ne aapko bullaya hai

Prem : yeh mere office hai…yeh madam kaun hai??

When prem enters he sees Prerna

Prem : aap?? What are you doing here

Prerna : Mr. Prem yeh company mera hai. Aap yaha kya kar rahi hai??

Prem : aap ko main dekh lunga

Prerna : Dekh lo, Main e tumpe vishwas kiya aur tum mere ki ghar ko barbaath kiya. Aaaj se tum yaha mere under kaam karoge. And if you don't agree I will make sure jo property tumhara hai who bhi mein le lungi
Prem : Aap aisa nahi kar sakthey

Prerna : Oh really!!! Main kuch bhi kar sakthi hu. Tho you decide if you want to work here or starts planning to beg on the road. Ab tho tumri Aunty, partner or tumhari so called whatever be saath nahi hai. Tum apna ghar chod ke mere saath rahoge.

Prem has no choice and decides to work and live with Prerna


Prerna calls Mukti

Mukti : Jee chotima

Prerna : beta ab tum ghar aa jao…hum kal sab ghar prawesh kar rahe hai.

Mukti : Jee Chotima


Everyone is happy that finally everything is getting normal

The pooja is going on to go into the house

Everyone goes in and Prerna is waiting for Mukti

Sneha : Mama Mukti kaha hai??

Prerna : AAthi hi hogi….usne kaha tha ki who pahun chayegi

Just then…Mukti enters……everyone looks at her Prem is stun to see her more beautiful in a saree

Prerna : aaoo Mukti…tumhara hi intezaar tha

Sneha hugs mukti

Sneha : Kaha chali gayi thi tum??

Mukti : ab door

Everyone is enjoying the party

Prem goes up to Mukti

Prem : wow Ms. Bsanti…tum tho bahut badal gayi

Mukti : Kaash mein tumhare bare mein aisa kehpathi and she leaves

Prem holds her hand

Prem : kaha jaa rahi ho?? Tumne phir se muje panga liya hai…

Mukti : Min kya karoo…jab bhi mein sochthi ho ki tumha screw tight ho gaya phir se tumhara screw loose ho jatha hai aur mujhe tight karni padthi hai

Prerna : Mukti, ab tum hamare saath raho beta

Mukti : Rahi chotimaa…mein teek ho…mujhe bahut kaam hai mein baadh mein milthi hu


Prerna calls mukti

Prerna : Mukti, main apni company pane ki kushi mein ek bahut badi event organize karma chathi hu and main socha tumhare company usko organize kare..

Mukti : Chotimaa….but..

Prerna : Kyu?? Koyi problem hai….

Mukti thinks

Mukti : jee kuch nahi…ok mein kal meeting fix karlethi hu

Prerna : Ok we will meet tomorrow

Prerna calls Prem

Prerna : Prem come to my office

Prem : company kya mil gaya mujhe tho yeh apna working samthey hai

Prerna : We are holding an event and tomorrow we have a meeting with the organizing company. Its is a very big international company so I want you there.

Prem : OK mother India


Next day conference room

Prerna Prem Tushaar and others are waiting in the Conference room

Mukti walks in

Mukti : I am sorry mujhe deer ho gayi

Everyone is shocked to see Mukti here.

Prerna : Ms. Mukti Desmukh is the CEO of the International Event Managing company. They will be organizing our event.

Prem is shocked

Mukti : Thanks, Guys we r an International Company and this will be our second event in India. Or first event was the Sony Entertainment Television Awards which were a great success. I am very happy that Bajaj Empire has chosen our company for their event.

Mukti signs the papers

Mukti : I will be sending you all the details of the event and if you want any changes I will be happy to change them

Prerna : Prem you have done an event before. I am putting u incharge of this event.

Prem : OK and he gives an evil smile

The meeting is over

Prerna : Mukti dinner ke liye ghar aa jao

Mukti : ok Chotima.

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Prem : Not bad Ms. Bsanti

Mukti : Its Mukti and better be in your limits.

Mukti comes to Bajaj House …BTW : MUKTI'S DAD PASSES AWAY AFTER SHE LEAVES

Prerna : Tum aa gayi

Mukti : haa chotima

Sneha : I am so happy you are back

Mukti : Me too

Prem : Hey everyone
Just then Mukti's phone rings

Ishaan : Hey darling, kya kar rahi ho

Mukti smiles

Mukti : Mein Chotima aur sab ke saath dinner kar rahi hu….

Ishaan : Accha mein tho bahut akela pad gaya ho yaar

Mukti : I miss u too

Just then everyone looks at her

Prem gives her a staring look

Mukti : Acha mein tumse baadh mein bath karthi hu..ok bye

Ishaan : ok honey….mere liye bhi kuch kaha.

Mukti : ok bye

Prerna : kaun tha??

Sneha : Boyfriend?/

Mukti : Nahi dost tha

Kooki : aaj kaal dosthon ko bhi miss u kaha jatha hai

Prem is quite.


Next DAY OFFICE

Prem : Maine sab kuch check kar liya hai….but I want some changes

Mukti : ok I will send you my Assistant she will help you with everything

Prem : tum kyu nahi kar sakthi

Mukti : Kyuki mujhe doosre events bhi dekhne hai

Prem shut up

Just then Ishaan calls
Mukti : Kahiye…aapko mein kaise yaad aa gayi

Ishaan : bahut yaad aa rahi ho yaar

Mukti : well juch aur din intezaar karo

Prem is staring just then

Mukti : Excuse me

She goes towards the window

Mukti : ab bolo…

Ishaan : kaun hai saat mein

Mukti : Baadh mein bolthi hoo…office kaisa hai??

Ishaan : its good…we r getting good profit from India

Mukti : I know….mera ek help kardo

Ishaan: jee sarkaar

Mukti : can you go home and check my mails

Ishaan : sure aur kuch??

Mukti: bas…teek hai I will go now bye hun

Ishaan : bye

Prem : kaun hai??

Mukti : Mind your business

Prem : oh yea!!!! By the way miss basanti….tum aaj kal bahut achi lag rahi ho

Mukti : Oh thank you mr.premo….aap tho bahut hi gande lag rahe hai.


Mukti comes to Prerna's house

Mukti : Chotima…maine sab check kar liya…the event should be good

Prerna : I am proud of you beta
Mukti : ok ab mein chalthi hu

When she goes out she sees that her car tyers are punctured.

Mukti : Oh god

Prem : Hello Ms. Bsanti…need a lift??

Mukti : no thanks

Prem : soch lo warna yahi rukha badega mere ghar mein mere saath

Mukti thinks and sits in the car

Mukti : Holiday Inn

Prem : tho aap hotel mein rehthi hai

Mukti : whatever!!!

Its raining outside

Prem remembers all their old days

Prem : lo aa gaya aapka hotel

Mukti : Thanks

Just then it starts raining heavily

Mukti : Tum chaho tho you can stay here and leave after the rain

Prem : thank you

Mukti starts thinking about their old times

Prem : tum mujhe adar aane ko nahi kaho gee

Mukti : well…ok come

Prem goes into her room

Prem : nice suite

Mukti : thanks

Prem : Mukti…I wanted to tell u something. I am sorry about what happen between us. I know you don't want to forgive me but I have realized my mistakes. I know come to know who is my own.

Mukti : Say this to your mom who bahut kush hogi.

Prem : Mein maafi ke llayak bhi nahi hoo

Mukti sees the change in Prem

Prem : I am happy for you. Tumne ithna success paya. Good

Mukti : Thanks

Mukti : I will make some coffee for you

Prem : Thanks

The rain stops and Prem leaves


Prem comes home and sees Prerna

Prerna : Tum kaha they??

Prem : Mukti ko chodne gaya tha

Prerna : oh teek hai

Prem : Mom!!!

Prerna is shocked and has tears in her eyes

Prem : Mom plz listen to me….mujhe maaf kar dena…mujse bahut badi galthi ho gayi.

Prerna : Tu ne apni galthi pehchaanli wohi badi hai…ab tu….bahut hardwork kar….i am sure you will be very successful

Prem : thanks mom

Sneha and everyone sees this

Prem : I am sorry guys

Every hugs him and says that's ok

EVENT

HOST : Good evening Ladies and Gentlemen, welcome….Bajaj Empire phir se successful hone ki kushi mein yeh show organize kiya hai. I could like to welcome the company CEO Ms. Mukti Deshmukh

Mukti : Thank you, I welcome everyone for this event. My company is happy to organize this show. And please join the after party and enjoy the show

The show is a awesome and everyone are congratulating Mukti.

Prem : congrats Mukti

Mukti : Thank you

Prerna : I am proud of you beta

Mukti : Thanks chotima

Mukti : I wish Ishaan was here

Just then DJ announces

DJ : Guys this song is for a Ms. Mukti from someone special

Mukti thinks its from Prem

TERE DAR PAR SANAM CHALLE AAYE…TU NA AAYA THO HUM CHALLE AAYE………

Mukti turns around and sees Ishaan………..she runs and hugs him

Prem and everyone are shocked

Ishaan : maine kaha tha na …mujhe yaad karo and main pahunch jaunga

Mukti : wow….I am so happy…I was missing you so much

Ishaan : mujhe pata hai….helo madam…ppl ko galat faimi ho jayega

Mukti takes Ishaan to Prerna

Mukti : Chotima Yeh Ishaan hai…mera dost aur buisiness partner

Prerna : nice to meet you

Ishaan : wow app tho bahut hi beautiful hai…mukti aphi ke bare mein bath karthi hai

Mukti : Ishaan this is Sneha

Sneha's eyes are fixed on Ishaan

Ishaan : oh hey…how r u doing??

Sneha : good

Mukti : aur yeh Prem hai

Ishaan : hey buddy…nice to meet you finally

Prem : Finally??

Ishaan : who kya hai na aap bahut famous hai

Prem : Famous??

Mukti : kuch nahi…yeh aisa hi boltha hai

Ishaan and Mukti sit at the bar and are talking…Prem is feeling jealous

Ishaan : tho how r u??

Mukti : I am good

Ishaan : good or very good??

Mukti : what do u mean??

Ishaan : you know what I mean

Mukti : shut up ok

Ishaan : shut me up then

Mukti : eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Ishaan : ok ok lets dance

Ishaan and Mukti are dancing and Prem gets jealous.

Prerna invites Ishaan and Mukti to dinner next day

Prem decides to tell Mukti about his feelings
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Prem calls Mukti

Ishaan answers the phone

Ishaan : Hello

Prem : Is Mukti there??

Ishaan : well she is not around app kaun hai??

Prem : Its prem

Ishaan : Hey Buddy its Ishaan

Prem : hey how r ya??

Ishaan : who bathroom mein hai…will tell her that you called

Prem gets low and says ok and hangs up

Ishaan : Mukti Prem ka cal aaya tha

Mukti ; Oh k

Ishaan : I think he loves u

Mukti : what pagal ho gaye ho??

Ishaan : come on Mukti….he has changed and I know tum bhi usse pyaar karthi ho

Mukti : Ishaan plz stop it. I have forgotten my past and I am happy this way

Ishaan : oh yea?? Then whats up with the photo of u two u hide under ur mattress

Mukti just leaves

Ishaan : I know you both love eachother


Mukti and Ishaan go to Bajaj House for dinner

Ishaan : wow you have a beautiful home aunty

Prerna : Thanks beta

Mukti : Chotima Sneha aur sab kaha hai??

Prerna : Apne room mein honge

Mukti goes uptrais and sees Prem

Mukti and Prem stare at eachother

Mukti : who mein sneha

Prem : oh ok..right

Mukti goes to sneha's room

Every comes downstairs

After dinner

Mukti : Chotima mein kal ja rahi hu

Prerna : Kaha??

Mukti : Wapas New York

Prem : what??

Mukti : Well yaha ka kaam ho gaya aur office mein bahut kaam hai

Prerna : Mukti tum ghar kyu nahi aa jathi

Mukti : Nahi Chotima…ab wohi mera ghar hai

Prem is depressed

After dinner Mukti goes to see her house

Prem comes there

Prem : kya dekh rahi ho

Mukti : apna ghar

Prem : tho tum laut kea a jao

Mukti : Nahi prem ab yeh mera ghar nahi hai…main zindagi mein aage bad chuki hu

Mukti starts to leave prem holds her hand

Mukti : Prem chodo muhje

Prem : tum mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakti

Mukti : kyu nahi jaao….tumne mujhe ithne dukh diye

Prem : Mukti I am sorry…mein badal gaya hoo…tumhare bina mera life adoora hai

Mukti : Bahut deer ho chuki hai prem

She starts to cry and runs inside

Ishaan : where were you??

Mukti : went to get some fresh air

Ishaan : aunty the food was amazing

Prerna : thanks beta

Ishaan : mukti cooking karthi hai…oh god…morning se lekar mujhe evening tak buukha rehna padtha hai

Sneha : kyat um dono saath mein rehthey ho

Ishaan : kaash…saath tho nahi par very close

Mukti : ok chotima hum chalthey hai…kal morning hamari flight hai

Prerna : ok beta we will see you at the airport


AIRPORT

Mukti : ok chotima…mein chalthi hu

Prerna : ok kush rehna aur hume dekhne aana

Mukti : Sneha tum sab holiday ke liye new york aao…prem kaha hai??

Prerna : patha nahi atha hi hoga

Prem comes with roses

Prerna understands

Prem : mukti yeh tumhare liye

Mukti : thank

Prem's eyes are wet and he is trying to tell her not to go

Mukti leaves

This is not the end guys……there is more exciting story ahead…


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