OS: Afterglow

CONTEST : IPL 2026 Prediction Game

Page

Next Last

Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

165

Quote

Frequent Posters

lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

O My God! This was such an emotional OS. You have brought out the emotions out so well. His agony, his loss. How his happiness.i.e Khushi left him but with a hope for a new life, a little Khushi.

Khush smiled when she knew that he has finally accepted a life without her.

Very touching jess :)

Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Arshig8

@Arshig8

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Oh very nice n emotional. 😭

Quote

.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

res..

...

Damn, you should have told me that this would made me cry..!!
So heart touching and beautifully written..!!
Atleast khushi lives on in their daughter.. and the heartbreak that arnav has to go through
Everyday but the one to keep him strong is their daughter..<3

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 13 years ago

Quote

Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

Res for Samiya Di, since Zehra disappeared

Lol Di resd below. 😆

This is for Liya then :)

Edited by jessicad - 13 years ago

Quote

Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Jessica... you are terribly cruel... you knows how I hate sad stories...it made me cry... it reminded me of something I don't actually want to remember...

Amazingly written dear... I'd say this is your BEST work till date... you explained Arnav's emotions very beautifully...

Great job hun... do keep writing but only HAPPY stories...please

Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 13 years ago

Quote

-Suchi.P

@-Suchi.P

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

That was beautiful! I had tears in my eyes!
Beautifully written, especially the emotions portrayed! It was just too good! Thanks for the PM!

Quote

Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

i don't y i m crying while reading it...i can't write more

Quote

zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

amazing update
khushi died leaving junior khushi for arnie :(

Quote

Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: SamiyaIPKKND
Jessica... you are terribly cruel... you knows how I hate sad stories...it made me cry... it reminded me of something I don't actually want to remember...

Amazingly written dear... I'd say this is your BEST work till date... you explained Arnav's emotions very beautifully...

Great job hun... do keep writing but only HAPPY stories...please

Aww I'm sorry Di! :( didn't mean to touch a nerve.

I'll write happy fluffy ones, alright? :)

Quote

1 2 3 4 5 6

OS: Afterglow

Related Topics

Explore Topics