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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Awesome Start
Superb Update
LOved it
Waiting for Next
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazin update
Eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing start and wt a dreamy meeting...
lvd it alot...
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nice start dear..
omg first meeting mein hi fida dono ek doosre par
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Nice prologue...
waiting for you to continue the story...
Wants to know what happened between maaneet...
give the next part asap...
and add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry guys for being away for so long...wz busy...😕

I shall post two updates today...i know that won't do for all these days...but hope u'll understand...

So here comes the second and third episodes...
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Episode 2

Scene 1:

Next day, Morning

Room no. 102, Girl's hostel

Rap at the door

Nandini wakes up with a start...

She looks around and sees that everyone else is still asleep.

"Open the door," orders the voice along with a volley of knocks.

Nandini's sleepy eyes pop wide open and she gulps in fear...

"OMG...Moti!!!"

She rushes dreadfully to the other girls and wakes them up...

Pinki grumbles and scolds her...

"Kya yaar...sone de na...I was dreaming about my chips."

"Utth nahi toh Warden Moti tera chips bana degi."

She then moves to Geet's bed...

"Geet!!! Get up!!"

She smiles still in her sleep...and stretches her arms lazily.

"Geet!!!"

Geet sits up straight with a start...

"Kya hua? Kya hua?" she asks looking out of place.

"Kya hua nahi, ab yeh socho humara kya hoga? Moti darwaze par hai...She's gonna kill us."

Geet stares at her in shock and then looks at the clock on the side table...and stifles her scream of fear, in time.

YIKES!

...

The girls fall in a line and move towards the door. Geet was pushed to the front...

"Teri wajah se hum kal wahan gaye the...aur ab phase hain...isiliye tum hi ab Moti ko pehle face karogi."

"Okay, alright...isme itni darne wali kya baat hai..."

She opens the door and...

Ta da!

A gigantic figure overshadowing the three of them appears before them...

The girls go numb...Pinki especially starts to shiver and her knees knock against each other. Geet knew she had to do something real quick before Ms Dolly busted them.

"Good Morning Ma'am...Kya baat hai Ma'am...aap itni subah humare room main? Koi important kaam hai?"

Ms Dolly narrows her mouth, and frowns maliciously.

Nandini grabs Geet's hand in fear. Geet consoles her...and looks back into Ms Dolly's evil eyes...as if she knew nothing.

"Yeh subah hai?? Do you know what time it is?" spat Ms Dolly.

Geet nods, "Yes Ma'am...hum toh...woh..."

"Shut up...Tumhe rules pata hai na...seven 'o clock sharp, mess main breakfast ke liye pahunchna hai...aur tum log ab taq so rahi thi...Chalo mere office...New students ko agar abhi se discipline nahi sikhaya toh phir tum log toh mere sir par hi baith kar tandav karogi."

She turns and walks...then stops suddenly...and turns again to face the girls...

"Kya hua??? Rajkumariyon ke liye paalki mangaoon kya? Follow me!"

Pinki and Nandini look at Geet desperately hoping she'd do something to help. But Geet simply followed the warden.

Scene 2:


Warden's office

"You!" Dolly points at Geet, "Yahan aao aur yeh files arrange kar ke rakho."

Geet does as told...winking at Nandini. She gulps wondering what was Geet going to do next.

"Aur tum..." pointing at Pinki, "Kya hua? Sote samay toh bahut mazza aa raha tha...ab aise hosh ude hue kyun hai?"

Pinki falters and gulps...unable to answer...Geet comes in to her aid, "Woh Ma'am Pinki..."

"Shut up! Did I ask you? Tum Pinki ho? Tum??? Bahut zyaada smart ho...Agar yahan rehna hai toh yeh smartness sab bhool jao...Tum jaise bahut smart ladkiyon ko maine theekh kiya hai..."

"Parr Ma'am...admission ke time par toh aap ne humare parents se kaha tha ki aap sirf smart girls ko admission deti hain...phir???"

She gets up angrily...glaring at Geet...who grins and...

She slips...the files flying out of her hands and landing straight on Ms Dolly's head...

Nandini and Pinki simply watch in horror...with their eyes and mouth wide open...Geet moves her eyebrows and grins again...

"G-E-E-T!!!" Dolly yells...massaging her pumpkin-sized head.

But fortunately at that moment a phone bell reverberates in the whole hostel...

And a girl announces in a high-pitched voice...

"Room no. 102...Geet!"

Geet looks at Dolly and says, "Ma'am mere ghar se phone hai?"

"Grrr...Alright jao..." she replies rudely with some hesitation.

Pinki and Nandini look at Geet as if they were being left alone at a slaughter-house.

"Ma'am inke parents bhi mere ghar par hai...so can they also come?"

"Kya? Mujhe bewakoof samjha hai?"

"Oh no no Ma'am...hum aisa soch bhi nahi sakte. Aap toh itni smart hai...beautiful hai...you are an inspiration...humare parents toh aap ki bahut tareef karte hain..."

"Theekh hai, theekh hai...jao...Par yaad rahe...mujhse koi chalaki mat karna."

"Bilkul nahi Ma'am..."

They leave...

Geet laughs...

"Sshhh...aaj toh baal-baal bache. Chup kar, nahi toh Moti phir aa jayengi."

"Arre yaar...kitna darti hai uss Moti se...dekha nahi kaise khush ho rahi thi apni jhoothi tareef sun kar...Tum dono room main jaao...Main abhi Ma se baat kar ke aati hoon."

"Okay...Aunty ko humara bhi namaste kehna."

...

Scene 3:

"Hey Momma...I love you...bilkul correct time pe phone kiya."

""Correct time pe?? Geet...tu kuch shaitaani toh nahi kar rahi thi na??"

"Shaitaani...aur main?? Kya Mamma...aap ko apni beti par itna bhi bharosa nahi hai? Main toh abhi warden se mil kar aa rahi hoon."

"Hai Bhagwaan! Kya kiya tumne iss baar? Pakka kuch gadbad kiya hai, tabhi toh? Bata mujhe?"

"Kuch nahi Mamma...Woh Warden mujhe bahut pasand karti hai na...bas isiliye baat karne ke liye mujhe office main bulaya tha. That's it...aur aap toh bas mujhe humesha galat samjhti hai."

"Meri bacchii...Mujhe tumhari bahut phikar hoti hai...Itni badi ho gayi hai...phir bhi bilkul bacchon ki tarah hai...Beta dhyaan se rehna...sab tumhari tarah innocent nahi hote. Aur wahan shararatein kam karna...pata nahi kab kaun bura maan jaaye...Zamana bahut kharab hai..."

"Kya Mamma? Aap phir shuru ho gayi...aapne toh yeh bhi nahi poocha ki main yahan kaisi hoon? Bas shuru ho gayi apna lecture dene...Aap mujhse bilkul pyaar nahi karte..."

After a pause her mum tells her, "Tumse pyaar nahi karoongi toh aur kisse karoongi? Tum khush ho na?"

"Main bahut khush hoon. Aur aapki yaad toh bilkul nahi aati... Yahan par mujhe koi daatne wala bhi nahi hai..."

"Accha toh Mamma ki yaad nahi aati?"

"Arre Mamma...aisa kabhi ho sakta hai...ki mujhe meri Mamma ki yaad nahi aaye...Accha yeh batayiye mere pyaare bhai ne ab taq toh mere room par kabza kar liya hoga?"

"Hmm...le usse baat kar..."

"Hi Di...kaisa hai naya college...aur new life?? Bahut mazza aa raha hoga??"

"College ka aaj first day hai idiot...pata nahi kaisa hoga...but jaisa bhi hoga bahut accha hoga...Mamma ko bolna shaam ko call karne ke liye...abhi bahut der ho gayi hai...Aaj freshers ka Welcome hai... Accha main rakh rahi hoon...Bye...Aur sun mere room se agar kuch bhi gayab hua toh tu jaanta hai na kya hoga?"

"Gayab what gayab? Main bas apne friends ko bulaoonga aur hum yahan khoob masti karenge...Waise Mamma ne aapke Salman Khan ke saare posters raddi wale ko de diya hai...Ab main yahan apne WWE stars ke posters lagaoonga...YAY!!!!"

"KYA!!!! Agar tune aisa kuch kiya toh main wahan aakar tera poster bana doongi...samjha!"
"Di kuch sunayi nahi de raha...Bye Di."

Geet's mum takes the phone...

"Geet? Beta..."

"Haan Mamma...shaam ko baat karenge...bye...bye...love you."

...

Scene 4:

Room 102

Geet returns to her room...but what does she see??

The senior girls are sitting there, waiting for her, and Pinki and Nandini look scared.

"Aayiye aayiye...Humari Female Sherlock Holmes!"

Geet walks in and looks at them...

"Kal ka deal yaad hai na??"

"Woh...woh...woh..."

"Kyun kya hua? Kal toh bahut confidently accept kar liya tha...Nahi hua na?? Humein pata tha...tum jaisi hawa main udne waliyon ko humne bahut dekha hai...par humare saamne woh sab bheegi-billi ban jaati hain...Yeh pakdo humare Assignment files..." the leader of the senior girls throws the files into Geet's hands, "Ek hafte main complete ho jaana chahiye...Aur tum dono kya statue bani khadi ho...This is for you two also..." she the turns to her friends...

"Chalo girls..." she turns one final time to face Geet, "And I forgot to tell you...Aaj toh hum waise bhi college main mil rahein hai na...Freshers..." she stresses on the last word in a hostile tone.

"Ek minute rukna...Tina" Geet stops her.

"Ma'am...call me Ma'am. College ka first rule...First years will call their seniors Ma'am and Sir...samjhi tum?"

"Oh yes bilkul samajh gayi...Tina...Ma'am...par shart ke mutabik aap humari baat manne wali thi...yaad hai?"

"Oh hello...agar tum log jeetete toh...and it's impossible...tum haar gaye...LOSERS!!!"

"Parr humne kab kaha ki hum haar gaye..."

"What do you mean?? Ofcourse hare ho...by no chance can you..."

She is made to shut half-way...when Geet picks up her mobile and holds it in front of Tina...

"Yeh dekho...boys hostel ke abandoned dorm ke pictures..."

Tina is shocked...

"Impossible" Tina gasps in disbelief and then takes the phone from Geet's hand to see clearly, "Tum log raat ko boys hostel gaye?? OMG...But...kaise? OMG" she just couldn't believe her eyes...Her friends too checked the pics and were equally dumbstruck.

Geet starts celebrating...jumping like a child...


Pinki and Nandini look at her nervously...

"Great" says Tina trying to look at ease...hiding her shock..."Toh tum log shart jeet gaye...Theekh hai...par..."

"Par kya? Sun lo...bahut ho gayi tum logon ki daadigiri...ab hum log tumhari koi baat nahi manenge...Ab yahan se niklo...Hum shart jeet gaye...hum shart jeet gaye...YAY!!! Tums hart haar gayi..."

The seniors leave...and their ego gets hurt big time...but they didn't wanted to mess with Geet...cuz she was not like the other girls...she was different...she had guts.

"Aisa toh pehle kabhi bhi nahi hua tha...Iss Geet ko toh accha sabak sikhana padega...nahi toh koi bhi humse darega nahi...aur college main humari bilkul nahi chalegi..."

...

Scene 5:

Girls in shower

Geet wipes her hair...and realises that her earring is missing...

She looks around but it's not there...

She comes out wrapped in her bath robe...she searches on the floor...and suddenly...the wind ruffles the wet strands of her hair...and she sees him...standing there...right in front of her...looking at her her...a towel around his neck...


Geet's eyes open wide in shock😲...she gets up...and he's gone...😲

"OMG😲...yeh kya bakwaas tha...Why the hell was I imagining about this guy...jisse main jaanti tak nahi..." she hits her head with her fist repeatedly... "Geet...kahin tujhe...Shut up...sochna band kar...bhool ja...bhool ja..." she was acting weird...

"Geet?? Kya hua tumhe?" asks Nandini looking confused...

Geet looks up, "Mujhe kya hua hai? Main toh ainwayi hi...kuch soch rahi thi?"

"Okay..."

Pinki also comes out...

"Yaar time bahut ho gaya...we should reach college before the first bell..pata nahi aaj humare saath kya hone wala hai??"

"Don't worry...Main hoon na..."

"Tum dono ko college ki padi hai...breakfast ka socho...Tum logon ki wajah se breakfast miss ho gaya..."

...

~End of Episode 2~


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Episode 3

College

The College Union President welcomes the first years...and a nervously excited batch of freshers look on...

"On behalf of the Students Union I welcome all the first years to our college. Welcome to all the freshers...Welcome to our college."

A loud eruption of claps...👏

The first years were introducing themselves one by one.

Nandini was next in line...She looked around to check whether Tina and her friends were anywhere near...There absence was foreboding...

Nandini whispers into Pinki's ears, "Yaar kuch toh gadbad hai...woh Tina aur uska gang kyun nazar nahi aa raha?"

"Pata nahi yaar...mujhe toh bahut bhook lagi hai...jaldi se yeh introduction khatam ho jaye...so that we can go to the canteen and eat something."

"Pinki! Tujhe khaane ki padi hai...tumhari wajah se Geet ko washroom jaana pada...na tum uss par woh slushie giraati na uska dress kharab hota...aur na humein aise uska wait karna padta...Hey Ganpathy Bappa...Pata nahi Geet abhi taq aayi kyun nahi? Agar woh yahan intro. khatam hone se pehle nahi aayi toh pata nahi kya hoga?"

Tina and her gals make a sudden entry and all colour leaves Nandini's face...Pinki too forgets about food.

Only a few more first years were left before their turn came...

"Geet...jaldi aa jaa," prayed Pinki.

Scene 2:

Boys Washroom

"Bhagwan ji...yeh toh Boys Washroom hai...iska matlab that girl lied to me...nahi-nahi...galti ho gayi hogi..." she consoles herself.

She turns and collides with...someone...

She looks up massaging her forehead...

"Tum!" she blurts. 😲

"Tum!! Phir se!!!! Now what are you doing here?"

"Main woh...kuch bhi toh nahi...Main aisi hi college dekh rahi thi..." she stops and looks at him😡, "Waise main tumhe kyun bataoon??"

"Oh really...toh kya yeh tumhari favourite place hai? Waise tum kal raat ko Boys hostel main..."

Geet gulps in fear...she interrupts in between...

"Boys hostel?? Eh..mm...Main kisi boys hostel main nahi gayi..."

"Accha...par maine kab kaha tum boys hostel main gayi thi??"


Geet's heart stops😕...she closes her eyes realising her stupidity🤢...But Geet being Geet was not going to let him get her...

"Oh Hello😡... dekho zyaada smart mat bano...Waise tum ho kaun yeh sab interrogation karne waale? Tum kya yahan ke Principal ho?? Look main yahan ke sabhi seniors ko jaanti hoon...you know they are like my best buddies...aur yahan ka College Captain...woh toh mera boyfriend hai...Agar maine usse bataya ki tum mujhe pareshaan kar rahe the...toh woh tumhari chatni bana dega...samjhe Mr Inquiry Commision..."

He looks startled... "Boyfriend??"

"Haan boyfriend...so buzz off...Idiot😡."

She turns...feeling extremely confident that her lie has worked...

"Ek minute rukna please..."

Geet stops and faces him...

He simply glares at her...

Geet gives up...she just couldn't bare those eyes...For the first time she had nothing to say...

She walks past him...but he holds her hand...

"How dare you? Mera hath chodo..."

Maan throws her hand with a jerk.

Geet is shaken a bit...and glares at him...

He walks close to her...and pulls her close...

~😳MAHI MAHI😳~

Geet forgets everything...and his closeness felt so familiar...so peaceful...like she was meant to be with him...

Suddenly she opens her eyes and comes into reality...😲

She pushes him...and he too looks at her in daze...

She looks at him angrily😡...snatching her hand from his grip...

"I am sorry..." he apologises genuinely feeling bad for what he did, but Geet was in no mood to listen to him...

"Look yesterday night I saw you in the hostel...and it's not safe to..."

"Oh Hello...Who are you to tell me where I should go and where I should not? Gym Instructor ho toh woh hi raho...aur kabhi dobara mera hath mat pakadna...Samjhe! Huh!" she warns him.

As she leaves, he looks on baffled.

...

Scene 3:

Geet sneaks inside the small group of freshers left at the back...

"Geet, Aa gayi tum...I was so worried...That Tina is throwing me warning stares since she came in...Pata nahi kya karne wali hai?"

"Kya karne wali hai matlab?? Chill yaar...woh kuch nahi karegi...I'll go first...and show you...iss Tina ko kaise theekh karte hain..."

"Waise Madame aap ab tak Washroom main kya kar rahi thi?? Kahin phir koi shararat toh nahi kar rahi thi??"

"Hey Bhagwaan...tum na bilkul meri Mamma ki tarah baat karti ho..."

"Accha then what happened?? Why are you so late??"

"Yaar kuch mat pooch...woh kal raat ko jisne mujhe dekh liya tha..."

"What? Kal raat ko kisi ne tumhe dekh liya tha???" Nandini almost faints...

"Arre yaar...don't worry...woh na shayad wahan ka gym instructor ya koi tha...students itni raat ko dorm se bahar work out thodi na karte hain?? And tu darr mat...woh kuch nahi batayega...Maine usse aisi dhamki di hai..."

"Tune usse dhamki bhi de di...OMG...Ab toh hum gaye...Geet yeh tumne kya kiya??"

"Arre yaar toh kya karti...pata hai kitna akdoo tha...Uske upar usne mera hath pakad liya..."

"Ehem! Ehem!" suddenly someone breaks their conversation...

They look up...

A guy smiles...

"Aap dono ki gup-shup ho gayi ho toh...humse bhi kuch baat kijiye."

Tina also enters...

"Oh Adi...don't disturb them...mere friends hai..."

Geet frowns at her...😡

"Girls...Wow...Tina ke friends...tab toh tumse milna zarroor padega...Apna intro. nahi dogi humein...😃"

Geet and Nandini introduce themselves...

"Geet...melodious name...tab toh tum gaana bhi zarroor gaati hogi...chalo humein ek gana suna do?"

Geet sings a song...and Adi is impressed...

"Great...tum toh bada accha gaati ho...You can go now...We'll meet soon."

"One minute Adi...aise kaise jaane de rahe ho...You know Geet is a real smart girl...sabse smart...full of confidence..."

Nandini looks at Geet...and Geet is sure that Tina is upto something...but she had to stop herself in front of the other seniors...she didn't want to create a scene...

"Geet...tum bahut brave ho na?"

Geet really hoped she didn't tell everyone about last night...but if she tells it then she too would be busted...so what was Tina's plan...

"Geet I want to give you a special task...joh yahan pe kisi ko bhi nahi diya...specially reserved for you..."

"Apni pitayi karwani hai???" Geet murmured...so that only Tina could hear her...

Tina whispered back..."Nahi dekhte jao...tumhe main kaise mazza chakhati hoon?"

Geet rolls her eyes looking unconcerned...

"Everybody listen...Geet is ready to do the task...A round of applause for her..."

Geet looks at her in shock...but then feels...Whatever?? I'll see you later...

"Geet task bahut simple hai...Tumhe yahan khade rehna hai...aur joh bhi pehle wahan se aayega usse aankh band kar ke tightly hug karna padega..."

"Pagal ho gayi ho kya??...I can't do this..."

Tina walks to her and whispers in her ear, "Kyun darr gayi kya??"

Geet pushes her... "Main kisi se nahi darti...But agar koi Professor hue toh? So, we should drop the idea..."

"Haan Tina...I think you are going too far...chod do usse..."

"Arre Adi...Tum Geet ko aisa-waisa mat samjho...she's really smart...aur humare Professors saare Department main hai...I've taken their permission...So chill..." she then turns to Geet, "Geet...kyun ab toh koi problem nahi hai?"

Geet looks at Nandini...Nandini shakes her head in a no...😕

But Geet accepts...cuz she thought if she denies...Tina will think she's scared and will forever pester her and her friends...

"I am ready..."

Tina motions to her side-kick Betty with her eyes...and gives an evil grin...

Betty calls someone and shows Tina thumbs up...

Geet apprehensively walks to the door...and waits...

The entire auditorium looks on...



Scene 4

A few minutes later...

Approaching footsteps could be heard...and everybody looks at the door holding their breath...Geet just wanted to get over with the task...so that she can get even with Tina later...

The footsteps reach the door...Tina gestures to Geet to close her eyes...

Geet closes her eyes and wraps her arms around the person who enters...


And unknowingly the name comes to her lips...her eyes still closed...

"Maan"

Everyone wonders how did she know...but she was destined to know his touch...him...her true love...

She opens her eyes...and their eyes meet...

😳~MAHI MAHI~😳


~End of Epi 3~


Precap: Geet is shocked, furious, ashamed...all in one...She just couldn't fathom why did she utter that name...without even knowing him...

And who was this Maan???

Tina is shocked to see Maan😲...as she was expecting someone else...as she had planned with her friends.

Maan's real identity is revealed to Geet, and she is highly embarrassed and also fears that he'd tell everyone about the previous night...

Will he??😕

Wait for next episode😃

~To be continued~


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Edited by pj2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally update

uff babaji this warden 🤢🤢
bt our smarty geet 😆😆😆
gaat cant loose
maanu ne sikhaya tha na nana abi nhi pehle..😆😆😆
oops senior
senior ji dont mess with sadi geet...
part 3
wah ji maanu se takkar ho gyi hayee
omg geet so clg captain is ur bf. haww
mujko kisi ne nhi btaya...
lv maahi mahhiii
lv tina
kya chance diya hai hug ka
i mean maaneet hug..oops
haye lvd it
both parts were awesome
gr8 compensation 😆😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tiakashyap

finally update

uff babaji this warden 🤢🤢
bt our smarty geet 😆😆😆
gaat cant loose
maanu ne sikhaya tha na nana abi nhi pehle..😆😆😆
oops senior
senior ji dont mess with sadi geet...
part 3
wah ji maanu se takkar ho gyi hayee
omg geet so clg captain is ur bf. haww
mujko kisi ne nhi btaya...
lv maahi mahhiii
lv tina
kya chance diya hai hug ka
i mean maaneet hug..oops
haye lvd it
both parts were awesome
gr8 compensation 😆😆😆
so glad u liked the updates...😃

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