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~⭐️Prologue⭐️~


🥳A Wedding Reception🥳


The place is full of revellers- family, friends, relatives, well wishers...

The whole place is turned into a dance floor...everyone jiving to the lively music.

The groom is brimming with excitement and is dancing like crazy🤪...his friends also join him in his celebration. Suddenly the groom notices one of his friend standing away talking to some men. He straight away goes to him...

"Maan, tu apne best friend ki shaadi main aaya hai...kisi business meeting main nahi? So...get on the dance floor...tu apne dost ki shaadi main nachega nahi?😳"

"I am sorry," he apologises to the guests for the rude interruption, and turns to the groom, "Adi...tu bhi na..."

"Main bhi kya?? Bahut cool hoon, smart hoon aur lucky bhi jo uss ladki se shaadi kar raha hoon jisse main pyaar karta hoon."

With those words an awkward silence develops between them.

"Accha chal dance karte hain..." Maan eases the tension and pulls him to the centre where the rest of their friends were dancing.

Adi smiles...

And they dance crazy...all the friends.

...

"Adi!"calls the bride.

"Haan...Pinki...come, you also join us."

"Adi, she's here. But woh jaa rahi hai. Tumse milna chahti hai."

He looks at Maan who was dancing with the others...and takes Pinki to a side.

"Oh no, ab kya karein? We had promised her that Maan wouldn't be here. Agar usne Maan ko dekh liya toh."

"Toh usse bahut taqleef hogi. No, we can't let this happen. She's my best friend."

"I know...but Maan is also my best friend...I can't throw him out of here. Waise bhi they both will have to face each other one day or the other. Kab taq aise ek doosre se bhagte rahenge."

"Toh? What do you say?"

He looks at her and nods...

She sighs and goes from there...

Adi rushes back to her and stops her, "Pinki make sure the press doesn't know about this."

"Hmmm..."

...

After some seconds she returns but this time she wasn't alone...there was another girl with her... (OMG😍...She's so beautiful...just one look at her angelic face and you won't take your eyes off her.)


"Pinki...I have to leave...Ma mera wait kar rahi hogi. Pinki!"

"C'mmon...meri shaadi main meri best friend thumke na lagaye...aisa kaise ho sakta hai?"

Some other girls, all of whom were their friends join them too, screaming in excitement.

"Wow...you are finally here. I am so happy to see you."

They all hug her and scream excitedly...

She smiles and joins them...in dancing...

The guests go in circles with the music...two concentric circles...one of guys and the other of girls. As the music becomes fast the circles also move faster. And suddenly...

They both come face to face...her hand in his, someone pushes her and she falls, but Maan holds her... and everything stops around...for them...


"GEET?" he gasps in astonishment.

"Maan?" she too responds in the same manner, in-fact looking even more shocked. Tears rushed into her eyes...


She withdraws her hand from his and turns to leave...not knowing what else to do. She never expected this. She just went numb.

"Geet ruk jao...itne dino baad mil rahein hai...mujhse baat bhi nahi rahogi?"


She turns...consoling her tearful heart...

"Ofcourse, why not? Kaise ho tum?" she asks in her bubbly voice with her innocent smile...when in reality her heart was aching like hell and there was no air to breathe.

He walks to her...making her really uncomfortable...but it doesn't show on her face.

"Tum kaisi ho?" he asks trying to look into her lowered eyes.

She lifts her face and looks him confidently into his eyes...

"Pehle mere sawaal ka jawaab do?"

He sighs and replies, "Geet main tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon..."

She interupts him in between...and tells him very happily as if his presence didn't affect her at all...when in reality her heart was being mangled every second, "Maan bahut accha laga tumse milke...I should be going now. You know bahut kaam hai. Okay then bye."

She greets Adi and Pinki happily in front of Maan.

" Tum dono ko dher saari shubhkamnayein. Have an awesome married life. Humesha khush rehna. And Pinki moti...sexy dress," she concludes in her naughty air, "Okay bye now...time milega toh call karna...nahi toh atleast mera call answer karna...I mean ab toh tum kaafi busy ho jaogi," she winks, " Bye...Bye Adi...meri Pinki ka dhyaan rakhna...Uska dil kabhi mat todna...varna...you know main tumhara kya hashar karoongi," she laughs...

"Geet?" stops Pinki when she turns to leave...

Geet holds her hand and smiles...

"Main chalti hoon."

Adi looks at Maan who just stood there as always with cold feet...didn't even try to stop her...

Suddenly...

"Geet wait..." he stops her.

She turns...looking surprised...


"Main tumhe chod deta hoon..."

"Maan...tumne toh mujhe kab ka chod diya..."

Maan looks at her in pain...and Geet hides her tears by putting on her usual bubbly smile...

"Mazzaak kar rahi thi...I can go by myself. Thanks for asking. Bye Maan, Bye Guys." she puts her thumbs up and smiles at the newlyweds, "You both are really lucky."

One last look and their eyes spoke all...but something kept them apart...


She turns and walks away leaving him there with a sense of guilt and pain...


...

What happened between them??

For that we will have to take a trip down the memory lane...

It all began a few years ago...







Episode 1

Scene 1:

setting: night-time, deserted road, two buildings on both sides of the road...surrounded by tall walls.

The sky roars and the mighty lightning strikes, illuminating the deserted street in that pitch-black night. The moon is hidden behind the hoary clouds pouring heavy rain down on the street. The single lamppost with light flickers and dies out...and the street is engulfed back into darkness.

A rustling sound...

The leaves move...

and

"THUD!"

Someone has jumped down the wall surrounding the building on one side of the street.

The figure then moves...a bleary silhouette is what could be seen against the pale moonlight and the heavy downpour.

The face is covered except for the eyes...And those beautiful hazel eyes, they look so familiar...


The figure looks up at the wall and motions in the dark 'to jump'...three more figures jump down landing beside the first one.

The hooded figures scuttle across the street stealthily...looking around to ensure the area was clear. After making sure that the watchman was inside, unaware of the intrusion; the figures search for something on the wall...and then they find it...gaps...through which they could...climb up. And they climb the wall, hesitantly though. One of them falls while climbing down the other side, and lets out a painful shriek. From the sound it becomes clear that it is a girl. Are the rest of them also girls? If so what are they doing here, sneaking out in this horrible weather?

Scene 2:

A mess hall filled with boys

Candles everywhere on the tables...

Some guys are sitting on the table having their dinner in the candle light, some others are walking around and some are leaving the mess hall.

Some guys jeer and hoot, cat-calling, yelling for the generator to be started.

On one of the tables...a bunch of guys are sitting, having their food...but they are also talking about something...

"What do you think the girls might be doing now?" asks a fat boy dreamily...😍

"Yaar jo bhi kar rahi ho...I wish we were there too😃," replies another almost dropping his plate.

"Kya kismat hai humari?😕 Girls hostel ke saamne rehte hai...aur aaj tak 'girls' ka 'g' tak nahi dekha😭. This boys hostel could well have been in Antarctica...what difference would it have made?" says another boy looking dejected.

"Sach main yaar...ab toh humein kuch na kuch karna padega. Aisa thodi na chalega...Uss girls hostel ki moti warden ko accha sabak sikhana padega."

"Oh accha...kaun sikhayega sabak...tu???🤣 Yaad hai na pichli baar kya hua tha. Pagal kuthe chod diye the humare peeche...tujhe toh injections bhi lagani padi thi. Waise I am sure there's still a bit of dog left in you," mocks the tallest of them.

"Oh yeah...main toh phir bhi decent hoon...Kabhi khud ko dekha hai...drool karte hue...," retorts the fat boy grumpily.

"Accha toh phir baat pakki...bahut ho gaya yeh atyachaar...Girls hostel main sneak karna aur unhe patana har ladke ka janam sidh adhikaar hai...aur hum apna adhikaar le kar hi rahenge," announces a boy, jumping from his seat.

"SSShhh!" warns the mess boy.

The boys get up and walk despondently to the pipes down behind the mess. They are the last to leave the table...so there is no queue. They all wash their plates...and put them in the racks.

The cook stares at them...menacingly.

"Yaar why is he always like this?" asks the fat boy.

"Mote...tu uska saara khaana joh kha jaata hai," laughs Vicky.

Unaware of the intrusion in their hostel, the guys walk back to their dormitories.

...

Scene 3:

Boys Hostel

Dormitory

"Hey guys where is our hero? Pata nahi kabhi uss par koi restriction kyun nahi lagte?"

"He's in the old gymnasium as usual. After all humare college ka best student jo hai, 'Princi' ka ladla. Kuch bhi kar sakta hai."

"Agar woh ek baar Princi se baat karega toh shayad kuch concession mil jaaye. I mean this is the 'free age'...aur humein aisa rakha hai jaise we are in Mars and humare padoos main Venus hai...the No Entry area. Tu baat kar na usse Vicky. Tu toh uska best friend hai na."

"Uska best friend hoon...isiliye tum gaddhon ko bata raha hoon...uske saamne ladkiyon ka naam bhi mat lena...aur woh bhi aise stupid demand ke liye...he'll kill you. Jaanta hai na tu uska gussa," replies Vicky.

Scene 4:

There are intruders in the boys hostel...and thank god the boys don't know that yet...cuz...

Yes...the intruders are indeed girls...but what the hell are they doing here?

They are completely drenched...They remove their raincoats and hide them behind the hedges. The girls are all dressed in jeans and casual tees except for the one with the mysterious hazel eyes, who's wearing a salwar-kameez and looks like an angel. She is the bubbliest of them; and has a beautiful, innocent smile that dispersed the darkness of the night.

The others are amazed to see her in salwar-kameez, when she removes her raincoat.

"OMG, you didn't change?"

"Yeah, I forgot...kya farak padta hai?"

She motions to the others to follow her inside...

But one of them is left behind...who looks completely exhausted from the jumping and climbing and sneaking🤢.

"We shouldn't have come here. Yaar, these seniors have gone mad. We are like breaking almost all the rules in the rulebook here. Raat ko humein boys hostel main bhejte hain. Agar kisi ko bhi pata chala toh humein yahan se rusticate kar denge. This is plain bullying...Aur hum pagal maan bhi gaye for this crazy act. Waise sab iss pagal ladki ki wajah se hua hai...Kis ne kaha tha Jhansi ki Rani banne ko...aur iss stupid challenge ko accept karne ki kya zarroorat thi?" complains the girl who fell down from the wall earlier, caressing her bruised knee.

But the hazel eyed girl about whom she was complaining has already entered the main building...followed by the others.

"Theekh hai, jao jao...but I am not coming inside," she refuses but when the others don't stop she panics, " Hello!!! Wait...tum log mujhe aise chod kar kaise jaa sakte ho."

"Sshh...Pinki apna mooh band karegi...agar hum pakde gaye toh?"

"Oh no...I can't even imagine the consequence...No college...no food...OMG...Wapis chalte hain, please."

"Shhh...Pinki koi aa raha hai."

It is too late to hide, but thank god for the darkness, they are not detected. It is the Warden and some seniors taking rounds to check whether everyone has gone to their dorms or not.

The girls split into two groups...but suddenly the beautiful hazel eyed girl walks away from the rest of them gazing at the far end of the hall as if she is under some spell.

She simply drifts towards the direction she was gazing at, and there is a twinkle in her eyes and a smile on her lips.

The other girls look at her in shock and try to stop her...but she wouldn't stop...she keeps on walking as if she is in a dream and is being led somewhere that meant everything to her.

Finally, one of the girls calls her name in desperation...

"GEET!"

Geet stops suddenly...and her hazel eyes waver perplexedly. She wakes up from her dream. She wonders what was attracting her, guiding her to go in that direction. Why was her heart beating so fast? The feeling was so powerful...She turns and looks at the confused faces of her friends.

"Guys...I am sorry...I might have dozed off. I mean I don't remember...Pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun laga ki koi hai wahan jo mera intezaar kar raha hai..." Geet shakes her head in confusion.

"Geet...tu kabse aisi batein karne lagi? Kahin kuch jaadoo mantar toh nahi kiya kisi ne?" asks Nandini wondering why Geet was talking crazy.

Geet still looks a bit shaken...She couldn't explain but she felt so happy in that mysterious moment...her heart became so restless...but soon she regains her confident, bubbly self.

"Main theekh hoon...Guys, let's just find the abandoned dorm and leave."

Geet and Pinki decide to search the ground floor, while the rest of the girls take up the stairs.

...

Scene 5:

Late night

The warden enters along with a boy...

"What were you doing outside?? How dare you try to sneak out under my eyes?"

"Sir, I wasn't sneaking out...Sir...woh maine ladkiyon ki awaazein suni...and I also saw one girl outside our dorm."

"Ladkiyaan...mere hostel main?? Chalo mere office maine agar tumhari naani nahi dikha di toh mera naam bhi Shaitaan Singh nahi.😡"

The girls hide and hold their breaths.😕

Pinki is completely petrified, and almost faints. Geet helps her to stand erect, which was almost impossible. But Geet manages to hold on to her and takes her into a nearby empty room. It looks safe. She helps Pinki into a chair and hides her behind the curtains.

"Pinki, you stay here. Main abhi aati hoon. Darna mat...aur awaaz bhi mat karna."

Geet then leaves...

She reaches the same hall where she felt something pulling her heart...

Again she feels her heart beats becoming fast...she begins to lose control over herself...she is drawn again towards an unknown feeling, a powerful attraction...and to reach that place seemed the most important thing to her...as if she was waiting for it her whole life, and that she was born for this moment.

She keeps on walking dreamily and reaches an old, dimly lit hall...

She gains her senses abruptly when a dove flies past her...

"Yeh kahan aa gayi main?" she looks around, "Lagta hai yahan koi hai. I should leave before I get caught."

Before she could even take one step back... she sees him...some distance away doing his martial arts practice...


He seemed so familiar to her like she had known him all her life. She walks unconsciously towards him...her heart is instinctively drawn to him.

Her fingers stroke the flying curtains as she moves longingly towards him. She lifts her eyes and glances at him...and unaware of herself...she smiles...her heart pounding...


"Geet? Yeh kya kar rahi hai tu?"

She again looks at him nervously...

She's never met him...but still she feels like she knows him since ages.

He stops suddenly sensing her presence...



Geet hides behind the pillar...her ear ring gets caught in the curtain and she is terrified. She tries to escape...but he grabs her hand and pulls her into his arms...

Their eyes meet...

and they are lost in each other's eyes...

~MAHI MAHI~

😍😍😍
The light is dim...but her hazel eyes seem so familiar to him...like his entire world is in those angelic eyes...he just cannot take his eyes off them.

Their hearts beating in perfect harmony...❤️


Suddenly vague images from their past life flash before their eyes...



And they want to stay like that, drowned in each other's eyes, for the rest of their lives...Time freezes in that moment.

Geet suddenly realises she was in the arms of a complete stranger...and what was she thinking...She cannot believe that she did that...

She steadies herself up and turns to leave...trying to hide her face with a scarf.


"Ruko..." he stops her, "Kaun ho tum? Aur yahan kya kar rahi ho?"

She is petrified and runs away from there...because she herself didn't understand what had happened to her.

He follows her but is not able to stop her...He simply looks on...with a sense of uncertainity...Why did it feel so familiar? Who was she?

🤔🤔

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tPtLxJU_4Q[/YOUTUBE]



Scene 7:

The girls meet at the entrance...

"Geet where were you?"

"Woh...woh...I was..."

"Accha chod usse...We've taken the pics of the abandoned dorm...wahan koi bhoot-woot nahi hai. They were just tricking us."

Geet breathes and composes herself...She didn't want her friends to know that she was seen by a guy...and strangely wanted to stay with him forever.

"Mujhe pata tha...but if we show them proof that we came here...then we'll win the challenge and they won't pester us again and will have to listen to us for the whole college term," says Geet beamingly.

They leave the boys hostel in the same manner they entered...They are extra lucky to have done so without being caught.

Everything looks fuzzy in the rain but Geet being the really brave one, leads the others safely out.

Scene 8:

Girls Hostel

They sneak into their dorms...

and quickly...

change into their PJs...

Get into their beds and pull over their blankets...before the warden could bust them.

...

Suddenly...

They hear a munching sound...

They say together in a hushed tone...

"Pinki!"

"Kya yaar...after this dangerous rule-breaking...ek chips ka packet toh banta hai boss..."

They laugh...

"Ssshhh..." hisses the warden...and the girls go silent.

"Baap re...aa gayi Moti...Goodnight," says Pinki dunking into her blanket.

Scene 9:

Boys dorm

The door opens...

"Tu aa gaya...Maan?" enquires Vicky who is still awake.

"Hmmm..."

But he is still lost in her thoughts and what happened a few minutes ago. Who was she? And why couldn't he say a word to her?

He holds something in front of him...it is her ear ring that was caught in the curtain.


He lies down on his bed staring at the roof...and those eyes just won't leave his thoughts...everywhere he looks he only sees her beautiful eyes...even when he closes his eyes...he feels her presence...her hair flying on his face...

...

There Geet also cannot stop thinking about him...and unconsciously she smiles at his thought...in his arms she felt like she was the happiest...Aisa pehle kabhi nahi hua tha...Was she in love? Par yeh kaisa pyaar hai? Bina kisi ko jaane...How can she be in love?

They saw each other for the first time...but they felt like they knew each other forever.

And this is how they meet again as destined...and this is their story, the story of their true love.

...

Meanwhile, they both dismiss their new feelings and go to sleep...

...


😃~To be continued~ 😃


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Edited by pj2012 - 13 years ago
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Gosh!! What an amazing update!
Loved their first meeting :-)
Too good yaar!
Thanks for the pm dear :-)

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