NEW SS: Shards Of The Heart Chapter One Updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue

He felt the change in the winds as he pruned his plants and a sudden unease crept into his heart. Was it a signal? An omen?

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Dull shrieks of the phone broke the calm of the house. Mournful silence had engulfed the once joyful house.

"Hello" a soft, melodious voice answered the phone breaking the silence in the house.
The call was short but as the girl replaced the receiver her hands shook giving away the fear that coursed through her.

"Amma... I will be right back."

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He stood at the base of the stairs. Life would come a full circle. He had met her here and today he would make her his. He folded his hands in front of Devi Mayya claiming her blessings for his tryst. Would she support him?
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I had previously started the story as The End but messed it up big time in the middle. So doing it all over again with changes of course.

Should i continue? 😕

Edit: Isn't based on the current track.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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The End resurrected eh??
and once again the arnav-khushi-shyam angle...would love to see how to take it ahead this time!!!!

P.S:Dont mess it up again😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haven't read "the end" so this will be entirely new for me...interesting so far
Do continue
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls do cotinue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds awesome!
you should definately go ahead! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue can't wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interesting dear
pls continue soon
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏thanks...amazing...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting prologue
waiting to read more
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love to read your stories no mater what =) =)

So love to read this one too =) =)

But update your other stories too k =) =)

Continue soon

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