SHIKAR (A Dangerous Love Story) ~2 RTMC FF - Page 15

Originally posted by: shafyyy

awsome

thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: disha15

reserved :)

EDITED.

I had read the update last night,but i HAD To wake up REALLY early,so kept the comment pending,but cudn't keep the reading part pending.Too tempting it was 😆

Well di,update was dhasooo! 😎 God,romance and horror is such a deadly combination i tell you!

And you are simply epic with this combo! I mean seriosuly how do you do it? 🤓

The whole romantic sequence b/n veer and chandni were like awww!hwo cute!He lifted her up in frnt of everyone! 😳 and one more thing which amazes me,meenakshi,she is such an open-minded Indian mom.I can relate her to my mom sometimes,coz i can tell her bout everything!and bout boys too! 😛she'd drop in a few suggestions herself sometimes 🤣Anyway,i loved the way how you described how veer pulled her away and kissed her 😍 like always,you are epic with these scenes!You have the creativity of one of the most creative people in the world i tell you! 👏 I mean,the way you think about the screenplay,super! 👏

And btw,the horror scene 😲 i was hallucinating thruout the night,thanks to this scene 🤔 lol i mean it scared me THAT much!when i was reading,it was already quite late at night and that too,though i LOVE horror flicks,they DO scare me 😛

The scene was brilliantly written!No wonder i was freaking out that much.I was scared to even look at the mirror 🤣

thanks a lot sweetie..😃...loved reading your comments...it seriously makes my day...thank you so much for appreciating... 🤗

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

god its scary...
n m in hostl n my rum mate is also not der...
hw m gng 2 sleep today alone in my rum...???
by d way it was romantic also but at d end m left wid a heart which is beating wid super xtra speed

i will make sure next time not to scare you so much 😉...but i am glad that the story is leaving its impact... thanks for the words dear...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

haye kinna cuteee n romantic update tha di
loved it
bt yeh veer nhi sudhrega na aakhir usne drink kar hi liye
koi sudherna chahe to yeh stupid dost usne sudherne nhi dete

insane n idiot frnds
i want to slap vishal

i hate him when he drunk
bt here after drinking jo usne kiya i just loved it
love u veer

muahhh di

i wish ki wo scene thoda or bada hota jst becoz i enjoyed that segment vry much

sbke samne usne chand ko purpose kiya usse utha bhi liya

sb unhe hi dekh rhe the mujhe to sharam hi aa gyi

di i love ur writing...

After that kissing omg
they kissed each other there n im blushing here

kitna romantic scene
they broke their promises

awww bhootni aa gyi fir se
haye meri chand ka kya hoga

koi to bachao chand ko

lovely ud as usual

cont soon
luv u di

thank you Tejjo darling... loved your comments...as usual i read them twice... will surely update soon...luv u too sweetie...🤗

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

That was simply amazing...

Gosh 1st wedding shock n then another one...

Cont. soon..

Thnx for the pm...

thanks a lot sweetie...😊

Originally posted by: Shraddhamurat

Atlast they accepted their love bt again ye bhootni aa gai chand ko darane...

Plz jaldi se bhagao...
Update soon

thanks dear...will update soon 😊

Originally posted by: shruja

beautiful update!!
y can't veer resist himself from drinking!! at least for chand!
so they finally confess their love tht too infront of all!
heheheh kamini was shocked!!
minakshi thought in the right way!!
ohh chand saw tht bhutani again! she is looking exactly like her!
is tht was satyabhama?

thanks a lot Shruja... loved your comments...lets see how the story unfolds... thanks for liking Shikar...😃

Originally posted by: ashu1909

superb update and what is mystry of ghost face similar to chandni?waiting for mysteries to be revealed soon

you have to wait for the next updates sweetie...lets see how the story takes its turn... 😉

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

Wow! very nice update dear.. Veer accept his luv for Chandni..in front of every1.. hmmm... see d guts.. iske liye b bahut himmat chahiye yaar.. aur hamara Veer to hai hi brave..aur I should say very naughty.. He took her in his arms...& thn dropped her.. ha ha ha😆 bechari Chandni.. bt finally wo muskurayi to sahi... warna hamesha Veer par gussa hi hoti rahti hai.. aur ye kya😲 fir se wo chudail aa gyi... kabhi Veer k pichhe padi rahti hai to kabhi Chandni k.. aakhir kya raaz hai us stone ka.. bt I luv their luv for each-other.. waiting for d nxt Ud..😊

thanks for the lovely comments sweetie... loved reading your comments...will surely update soon...😊

Part 45

"Mom...she looked exactly like me..."

Meenakshi's mind was somehow engrossed between an old conversation with her Mother regarding a similar issue but she ignored as being too analytical...

She didn't wanted Chandni to stress or feel scared... "Chandni...i think you are tired since the whole day went so busy for you..."

"but Mom...i am telling the truth ...i actually saw ..."

Meenakshi spoke in between "Chandni...you must rest...i am sure you will be alright by tomorrow...and how can this be possible???...now go to sleep..."

She hugged Chandni and left the room making Chandni think about what she had actually seen... " I am not so tired, that I can imagine a someone standing next to me." she said to herself...

Chandni couldn't sleep...all her thoughts ended at the strange figure her eyes had seen...she felt as she herself was standing in those white clothes... her brains were stuck between the incident again when she saw her Grandmother coming with the holy water inside her room...she chanted some mantras and sprinkled the water all over...

"Grandma...please don't shower this water on me" Chandni wiped her face and arms...

Kamini didn't listen and continued with her prayer "sshh..."

Chandni knew that Kamini won't listen...finally she covered herself with the blanket... Kamini left after sometime...but before leaving she kept a glass of water next to her bed, which according to Kamini was a myth that helps prevents bad dreams coming near you...

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For Meenakshi nothing was clear and lucid...she would never want to circumspect anything that wasn't perspicacious... .she was still thinking about Chandni's words when on a spur of a moment she remembered the dairy she read in her office once...

"yes Father had written something...i can't remember exactly..." she said to herself while walking to and fro in her room... "he also had written something similar to what Chandni had seen"

She was worried about Chandni and never wanted even a slightest pain or sorrow around her '..Meenakshi walked towards Chandni's room just before sleeping to check if she's alright...

May be she wasn't thinking straight anymore but The dairy may put some light on the things that happened today... she made sure of reading the dairy as soon as she reaches office tomorrow morning...

She slept after turning off the lights and making sure Chandni was fast asleep...

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Veer was still drinking when he had second thoughts running in his mind...thoughts about telling Chandni about his curse...nothing was hidden from her except this truth and he would never want to hide anything before he starts his relationship with her...

he knew it was difficult to believe but it was truth...being rational he himself would have never believed but when he thought about the whole incident, it actually made him think what was really hard to even imagine...

he picked up his phone...something was still stopping him, but he knew even if he tells her the truth, that won't change their love for each other...

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Chandni heard her Grandmother shutting the door... she quickly lifted the blanket from her... glancing around she took a deep breath, she wasn't relaxed...after what she had seen it was not easy for her to even sit still...every second she was scared of the fact that for the first time in her life she had seen what she can't even believe... A soul that scared the hell out of her... even at the minutest noise her heart started beating faster... she felt as if she was engulfed around the danger...

Her train of thoughts was interrupted as a phone bell frightened her out of her wits...

"Veer...you scared me out of my mind" she placed one hand on her thudding heart... and took deep breaths...

"why? What happened ??" he raised a question to the already busy mind...

Chandni didn't wanted to disclose anything to Veer... she herself was unsure of what she had witnessed and how would she explain it to him... "nothing, actually I was sleeping so..." she was quiet for a minute waiting for Veer to continue...

" I want to tell you something... can we meet tomorrow"

Chandni never heard Veer so serious ever before, something was really disturbing him..."alright..." Chandni paused "8:00 at happy valley"

"hmm" he said and disconnected the phone...making Chandni think about him, "he seems blue" and that was the last thing on earth she could see...

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Next Day...

Chandni was about to step outside the house

"Chandni...wait"

Chandni turned around to see her Grandmother '... "where are you going??"

"jogging...where else" Chandni responded...

"fine then tie this thread around your wrist..." Kamini took out a black thread and tied it around Chandni's wrist...

"this won't let evil come near you"

Chandni nodded and smiled as she knew her Grandmother won't leave a single superstitious thing that she believes will protect her Grand daughter...

After some time '.

"Veer..." she stopped near the bench where he was already waiting for her...

he turned around and smiled at her... that was enough for Chandni to lost in his world...every time his smile made her die and live again hundred times...she looked in his eyes that seemed beclouded...she was still an inch away when his strong hands pulled her closer...

pleasingly her hands moved over his chest "tell me, what is it?" she asked again while he embraced her in his arms...she felt happy in his warm hug resting her face against his chest while his fingers entangled her silk locks...

After few minutes both looked towards the highest hill... with Veer's arms still around her...she rested her head on his strong shoulder...

"i love looking at the Mt Everest..." Chandni smiled as the cool breeze kissed her face...

Veer looked at her fair hands... and entwined his fingers with hers...

she felt happy after many days of the turmoil going inside her heart and mind, about her relationship with Veer...but today she was relaxed, she knew he was hers forever and he will always be with her...she somehow felt strong and wanted to tell him what she witnessed last night...

"Veer..."

"Chandni"

both started the conversation at the same time... Chandni smiled... "ok first you"

Veer happily wanted to hear her first "no, you first...what do you want to say?"

"Veer...please...you tell me why you called me here?" She looked at his dark black hair touching his forehead...

he held her more closer as if he doesn't want to loose her or let her go away from his eyes...

"i never realized any relationship in my entire life...i was very young when my Mother died..." he stopped for few seconds to think before he speaks...but Chandni clasped his hands more tightly making him feel more closer...

"I never realized my Father's love for me and I felt lonely...i indulged myself in drinking and keeping relationship with different girls, whom I never liked...but still I felt all alone...when my Father died I couldn't reach on time to the hospital to even see him...i was..."

Chandni felt bad, but she knew he was honestly telling her about his life...she looked at him with moist eyes...she wanted to snuggle him in her arms forever...

Veer looked at her while she curled her arms around his neck and kissed him on the cheek making him feel closer... "Veer, never think you are alone..."

they tightly huddled together for warmth...

After a long time...

"Chandni..." he whispered in her ear

"hmm" she whispered back...

"i want to tell this truth to you...i know you may not believe" he continued...holding her tightly...

"say" she added...

he placed a small kiss on her ear... "you saved me from death"

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