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Posted: 13 years ago
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Helllooo lovelies...!!šŸ¤—

I really dont knw, what made me write one more FF on this couple, but i just couldnt resist..!!šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

As my other FF 'Entwined' is based on the same surrounding of raizada mansion, thought of writing something different! Dont know how well it has come out..! The story and the surrounding will be completely different except for the character names!

And the lines given below, is from the song 'When i met you'! thought it would suit!😳

Do give me your feedbacks..! Comments/suggestions/critiques are more than welcome..šŸ¤—

And please do press LIKE if u want to be added in the PM list..!

and yes! will continue this only if u ppl want me to...!😳


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~~Prologue~~

'Samuel Adams please?' he asked casually, without looking at the bartender..as he waited,letting his eyes roam in the crowd..

He sat there surveying the crowd. Most of the people under this roof were just like him, and this is the place were he could relax and just be himself. He sighed, and closed his eyes.. His friends were late than usual.. This was the place, he could finally feel free after all the work pressure. It wsnt exactly a 'pressure' for him, but as lately he've been working too much, it was kinda tiring. But there wsnt any option too.. as a major project had just started and had a long way to go. Being the only son of one of the richest businessman in the country, it was his decision to work, and create an empire of his own rather than joining the family business. 'Dad, I aint going away, or running from all my responsibilities..i want to find a name of my own like you did. And to fulfill all my duties and responsibilities towards my family, I first should take up the responsibility of myself. I need a chance to prove!' He wsnt scared when he delivered these words to his dad, and he should not, even now! Because he had a long way to go.. People had already started to recognize him as the most hard-working, and sincere Civil Engineer in the town. In the age of 26, he had acquired almost everything that a man of his age would aspire of. It was his third year in 'Indiana constructions'. And within this least time, he was elected to be the next manager. And Arnav Ahuja was proud, just because he had a reason to be!

'Hey man! Really? Sleeping at the pub?' a guy said tapping him on the shoulder, making a seat for himself beside Arnav.

'Leave the guy alone. He have been working too much lately' said Guy 2

'And hey, Where is Nish??' one of them enquired!

'Ofcourse..She must be in pain..that her man cares more about his work than his girl!' saying, they all broke into a huge laughter, except one!

'Guyzz…guyzz..!Thats enough about me..I texted her. She couldn't make it coz she had to be in some girls party..!'

'A fitting pay back for you! Sab naatak hai mere bhai.. (Everything is a drama, my bro) She is in a mission to make you feel "desperate".' Winked Karthik, the biggest prankster in the gang!

'Watever' Arnav shrugged, making his friends sigh together, looking at each other.

And a bunch of gorgeous girls, make their way to the bar.

'Here comes my daaarlings..see ya peeps' Said rishabh winking, making his way to the dance floor with his so called 'gorgeous' girls!

'Ye gadha hamesha gadha hi rahega' (This idiot will forever be an idiot)

'Well arnav, what are you doing here? Cheer up boy! If not Nish, then somebody else.. Wont be too hard to find someone under this roof' Karthik said, looking smugly at the crowd infront, where almost all the richest brats of the city could be found under one roof.

'Guess, I already found one' arnav said smirking.

'Really???'

'Yup! Howz that gorgeous in white?' He said looking at the girl, sitting on the sofa in the left corner..having her drink looking pointedly at arnav and giving him her goofy smile.

'who tho already pat gayi hai..(shez already flat!) u don't even have to work'

'See ya guyz' saying, he kept back his beer mug on the tray muttering a 'thanks' and made his way to the floor.

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Exhausted, he sat back on his chair…, tired of dancing in a circle..being an only man for a bunch of girls googling around him!

'Tired??' Rishabh asked taking his seat beside him.

'Erm..kinda..guess I should leave now..its a Monday tomorrow!long day….' He sighed laying back, shutting his eyes.

'You shouldn't be sleeping here. I am sure there are many to offer you company..n I obviously don't want to witness a girl's wrestling show' He said laughing under his breath, making arnav smile.

'Okay den! See ya…'

They did a boyish hug and back slap!

Arnav turned around in the mid way,

'Rishabh, Karthik has taken my key..could you please bring it outside??'

'Sure…wait there!'

As he opened the huge, heavy door.. his eyes automatically landed upon a girl in white chudi.. collecting her things..and carefully placing it on a vehicle..taxi??

She stood there, facing her back towards him..as her hair moved freely on her back, making her hair shine on her crisp white chudi.

'Dude..!here is the key!'

He had to repeat, as his words failed to reach his ears!

'Heyy..!helllooo' He said, waving his left hand infront of his face.

'Oh! Yea..thanks..' he muttered, having forcefully moved his eyes off her!

'Yaha pe bhi ladki patana? Well boy, she is not your type'

'Ofcourse not…!'

He said..looking at the vehicle..as it made its way towards the traffic, without letting him have a look at her face.

'Thanks again..' he said walking towards the parking lot!

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"There I was an empty piece of a shell,

Just mindin' my own world…

Without even knowin' what love and life were all about….

And it all began..when I met you!"

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--Mahi-- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ammm..😲😲..tunay FF likha hai!!
and sabse badi baat it is just superb yaar..😃!!
n i jst loved the name of ur FF...MagneticšŸ˜..!!
Awsomeee...Continue Soon Pleashh...
and thank you so much for the PM..!!šŸ˜›

N yeah pleash reply jitna late karti hai utna late update mat karna...🤣
anjs thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely prologue...cant wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#4
Ummm...can't say much about the plotting, but yeah maybe next update will surely make it interesting.
So yeah Please continue😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Mahi--

Ammm..😲😲..tunay FF likha hai!!
and sabse badi baat it is just superb yaar..😃!!
n i jst loved the name of ur FF...MagneticšŸ˜..!!
Awsomeee...Continue Soon Pleashh...
and thank you so much for the PM..!!šŸ˜›

N yeah pleash reply jitna late karti hai utna late update mat karna...🤣


awww...thank you sooo mch MahišŸ¤—
glad you loved it...!!ā¤ļø
abey, yaha pe bhi meri bezatti mat kar🤣
Loved your colorful reply...!! <3<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjs

lovely prologue...cant wait to read more


Thank you...!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: amritafan

superb. plz continue soon


Thanks..!glad u liked it...!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sally2651

Ummm...can't say much about the plotting, but yeah maybe next update will surely make it interesting.

So yeah Please continue😊


Loved your honest reply..!😳
Will try to bring out sm interesting twists n turns in the story..!its just the beginning ..!Hope u'll find it interesting as the story progress...!!😃

Thank you!šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: casker

Sounds interesting pls continue


Thank you...!!šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sound interesting!!!! and does arnav already have a Nisha ?but wants a better person who just may be the girl outside near the taxi

plz continue thnks!!!!

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