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Posted: 13 years ago
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This story goes out to all of the members of the new Besharam Gang! 😊love you guys! ❤️ This is just the first part if you guys like then only then will i contiune and get to the good stuff if you know what i mean 😉
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1o clock on a Sunday afternoon

Maanvi's thoughts

I can't help myself any more I have to go see him.

Virat's thoughts

I can't help myself anymore I have to go see her.

They both walked out of their rooms and went straight up to the terrace. On the terrace Buaji, Beeji, Kabardini Chachi (KC) , Inder Chachu (IC) , Pinky Chachi(PC), Mandan Chachu(MC), Viren and Jeevika were all sitting and having afternoon tea .

Buaji- Issme kya badi bath hain? Sukriya kehne ki koi zaurorat nahi Hum nei bas socha ke agar hum sab picnic per jayengay tho sab ko accha lagega

Beeji ' Pher bhi hum sab ne hum ko bulaya isleya surkriya

Viren ' Wasi bhi yeh idea both accha isseh sab ko thora bahar janne ka moka mileyga

KC- Hay nii sacchi bolthi ho Tussi tho tope ho iss ghar di hope ho wasi bhi mera dusura hope iteh hai?

Jeevika- pata nahi kal se main nahi dekha hai. Virat ko jab dehka tho who Maanvi ki sath jagarrahi thi ajj Maanvi bhi gayab hai app sab mein se kisi nehi dehka hain in dono ko?

Buaji- No sorry yahi kahi hogey

Beeji- Nahi dehka

Jeevika starts panicking

Viren and Jeevika hug. Viren stares into Jeevikas eyes and it helps comfort her.

Viren ' Jeevika shant hoja kuch nahi hua in dono ko yahi kahi hogey upni rooms mein ek minute.

Viren calls the servants to ask if they have seen Virat or Maanvi anywhere in the house.

Servants- Nahi Saab

Jeevika starts crying

Jeevika- Virenji '. Kahan gay hongey ???... mudje both hi gabrahat ho rahi hain ' aur ajj Virat aur Maanvi kahi nahi hain aur kal hi indono ki jagrah hua tha'

Viren continues to calm Jeevika down

PC- Hay oh raaba kaha gaya hon gey

This is my first time writting so compliments and critisium is well come😊

Index

part 1: page 1
part 2: page 2
part 3: page 5
part 4: page 6
part 5: page 10
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I like it!! like this would be a goood epi witout the jeevika drama lol jeevika is too much anyways other than tht i like it!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so short? Make it long next tym
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: imsid

so short? Make it long next tym

this is just the beginning i have a few more parts if i get more likes and comments then i will contiune i dont wanna post it up if only one person is gonna read it if thats the case i will just pm u the whole story but thank u for yr comment its aprriciated 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Nice start. Continue soon.

No worries i will soon! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: samko

loved it

continue soon

Sure i will update it right now! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -princess-

Sure i will update it right now! 😊

wow thats great news
😊
cant wait to read it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Recap*

Jeevika starts crying

Jeevika- Virenji …. Kahan gay hongey ???... mudje both hi gabrahat ho rahi hain … aur ajj Virat aur Maanvi kahi nahi hain aur kal hi indono ki jagrah hua tha…

Viren continues to calm Jeevika down

PC- Hay oh raaba kaha gaya hon gey *

I am so happy you guys are liking this heres the next update 😊
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MC- Inder tu sara Virat ko phone lago mein Maanvi ko gata hoon

IC-Virat ka phone bad araha hai

MC- Maanvi ka bhi phone bad araha hai

Buaji- Ek bath meri samaj nahi ahrahi in dono kei beech kasi jagra hua tha keh abb who dono phone bhi nahi utarahai hain?

Viren- Pata nahi … Ek minute Jeevika tumnehi tho dehka kal who dono ki jagraha ko kya baahti ho rahi ti?

Jeevika explains what happens because she is feeling better now.

*FLASHBACK*

Maanvi was storming away from Virat.

Virat- Areh jawab tho deiti jao

Maanvi stops and turns around

Maanvi- Tum asei kaseh kar sacteh hoo? Mudje tumsi bath nahi karni you're the worst best friend ever!

Maanvi doesn't give Virat a chance to speak and walks away towards her room. So Virat yells arcoss the hall.

Virat- Fine mudje bhi tumsi koi bath nahi karni!

Maanvi slams her bedroom door shut.

*FLASHBACK ENDS*

Everyone starts to panic after hearing about such a fight.

Jeevika- Mudje pata nahi kya horaha tha islisyeh mein kuch nahi kaha lekin abb…

Virat reaches on end of the terrace and Maanvi reaches the other they are both standing parallel to each other. Virman have an eye lock and don't realize that both their families are on the terrace as well.

The family starts to feel relief that they are safe and don't ask any questions just keep watching what is happening while drinking their tea.

Virman is so lost in the eye lock they don't notice that their families are sitting right there. Both slowly walk towards each other in total movie like slow motion cool style.

Smack! The sound was so loud that both families turned to see Maanvi had just slapped Virat and they were in shock.

Everyone was quite.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: samko

wow thats great news
😊
cant wait to read it😃

I hope you like it! 😊 and please excuse my hindi its very bad
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg ab kya hoga
itsv intersting
please continue soon
the mistry of manvis slap ????

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