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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Haha! i was expecting a KISS not a SLAP! LOOOL but bravo! that was a total shock! and make the part flowing where the families see Virmaan and they stop panicking... CUZ its weird how they dont even ask them questions and just stare at them. GOOD JOB THOUGH

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Recap-Smack! The sound was so loud that both families turned to see Maanvi had just slapped Virat and they were in shock.

Everyone was quite.

With his signature smirk and eye brown raise Virat slowly snakes his hand around Maanvi's waist which was now making its way up and down her back but lingered at her lower neck then went down back again to her waist line.

Virat- I guess I kind of deserved that one

Chuckles as he hugged her tighter

Maanvi- Virat, nahi sorry Chep mein ne wrong nam sei pukara. tum hai kabi nahi sudrogi na?

Virat- Abb mein kya kia?

Maanvi- Mein kal ki bath kar rahi hoon stupid

Virat- Acccha tho yeh bath hain? Tho kya karoon tumhari maphi kehlie? Utah betah karoon? Murga banai wali ho? Ya fir mudjse pora din seva karti rahogi?

Maanvi release from the hug and walks around Virat in circles with a smirk on her face

Maavi- Mudje teri yeh ideas pasand hain lekin mudje nahi pata keh is meh si konsa tumhi doon tho islisyeh mein fasila kiya hain ki tum hai sab karna paraga

Virat- KYA??? Nahi maavi please torah tho esahn karno na please

Maanvi is quite for a few minutes and is watching Virat panic after listening to her punishment she can't take it anymore and starts laughing at him.

Maanvi slowly puts her arms around Virat's neck and slightly hangs in his arms as she says

Maanvi- Mein itni bhi buri nahi hoon kei mein tuhe yeh sab karneh doongi ….

Virat- sighs in relief; now the both of his hands are placed on her sides

Maanvi- lekin mein tum sei kuch kehna hoga

Virat- kya

Virat asks lovingly

Maanvi- Kal tumnehi mudje kya kaha tha?

Virat asks- Kya kaha tha mein tho rose tumhe both sari bathi karthi hoon ab yadd bhi karna parehga?

Virat- Ohh ….who mein …..really sorry …please bura mat mana ….

Virat looks down feeling guilty not sure if Maanvi feels the same.

I can imagine how shocked you guys are right about now but i am not gonna say thing till the next update so Enjoy guys! 😊 And keep posting your feedback, comments, rotten tomatos, smiles what ever you think it deserves! 😉 love:

-princess-

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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
After reading the first few parts u kno what song is coming in my head...
Khullam Khullam Pyaar Karenge Hum Dono Iss Duniya Se Nahi Daarenge Hum Dono...
Awesome But Make The Uodates Abit More Longer Please And Please PM Me Too When U Continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Loved the update!
Can't believe their families are watchinh them! 😆
Wonder what virat did!
And why are they acting so comftable in each others arms? 😳
I guess I will have to wait for the next update.
Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

Tina
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
😊I want to keep you guys in suspence but i cant help myself anymore i am posting whatever i have done ... EXCITED! 😃

Recap- Virat- Ohh who mein really sorry please bura mat mana

Virat looks down feeling guilty not sure if Maanvi feels the same.

Maanvi- Ek bar firsei bolo jho tumne kal bola tha (Maanvi says this while doing his eyebrow expressions)

Virat- Okay I LOVE YOU! Abb kya? Kal jab mein neh kal kaha tho phir … blushes … tume gussa ho keh cahli gayi thi tho firse kyun suna?

Maanvi-Tum neh mudje moka nahi diya bolnehi keliya lekin … I love you too! (really big Maanvi style smile) aur ek aur bath abb tum bina permission kei mudje kiss karsak thi ho

Maanvi winks at him.

Virat pulls her a little closer and the next thing he feels is Maanvi's soft lips against his. Virat couldn't help himself this time it wasn't just him who was showing passion it was Maanvi too, so I deepened the kiss and it lasted for a good few minutes we broke apart when we needed air.

Maanvi- Sorry

Virat pretends to be angry turns his back and says- Maanvi yeh tumneh kya kiya ko dehka laga tho???

Maanvi now feels bad

Maanvi- Sorry baba agey si nahi karongi

Virat is still facing backwards and is smiling at Maanvi's cuteness while slightly blushing; Maanvi quickly sneaks a look at his face to see him smile and decides to play along.

Maanvi- Sahad mein galat thi tum such mein assli sher nahi ho tumhe hain kiss narneh mein bhi shram ati hain. Bilkul ek larki ki tarha mudje bhi nahi lagta kei Di(Jeevika) bhi inta shramati hogi aur wasi bhi mudje aasa boyfriend nahi chayeh jo ek chotti si kiss nahi sambal payehga shad koi aur doodna paraga Virat kya tum meri help karogayi?

Virat was filled with anger how could she think that I am not capable of handling a kiss?

Virat- Maanvi is that a challenge?

Maanvi- Mein tumhe apni nahi boyfriend doodneh ki madad mang rahi hoon aur tum abhi yeh bath kar lekei behati ho ki tum kiss ko nahi sambal payen?

Maanvi was enjoying this to the fullest she could see the confusion then shock then anger then possessiveness in his eyes the next thing she saw was anger and love lots of love.

Virat couldn't take it anymore he walks up to her and hugs his head is on her neck near the crook of her shoulder. He hugged her tighter and slowly moved his head closer to her neck and kissed the area lightly slowly rubbed his lips up her neck following her veins which made her shudder then they kissed passionately .Virat didn't want to let go but he knew Maanvi needed the break so he left her lips and turned her in his arms while doing this his lips had gone from hers to now behind her ear where he only whispered one thing.

Virat- Maan badal diya ya firse tumhai convince karna paraiga? Kyun ki mudje pata hain asa kiss tumnehi life mein kabi nahi ki.

This is all i have done for now Sorry i know my hindi is horrible 😭 but i hope you guys are enjoying this😊 i wont be posting for a while becuz i am buzy and i hope this keeps you guys happy comment, compliments,and critisisum is welcome! Thanks for reading and likeing my story love you guys!❤️ This parts specially for my beshram gang!😉

love:

-princess-

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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
that was totally hott
i'm thinking are all the family members watching them while they were ...😳
abkiya hoga

please please please continu soon
its v interesting

Edited by samko - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
im loving it
but is the family there ? lol they are kissing in front of everyone
fulltooo virman style
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Update soon!!! this is agony...i can't wait longer 😭
But i loved, so involving!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Omg!!! That was really beshram Virman!!!
I mean...they r kissing two times in front of the whole family!!!
Continue soon...waiting fr the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Woahhh !! 😲 😲 😲
That was my exact expression after reading that ? 😆
Mind blowing !!👏
Were they kissing in front of their whole family!?!? 😲
Can't wait till the next update ! 😛
Continue soon and do PM me..😉

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