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arhilover55

@arhilover55

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice ss...will be interesting to see how arnav will trust her..thanks for the pm

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Good start.. Very nicely written.. I can't wait for the remorse when he realises she was telling the truth.. Love the way you've kept Khushi's pride intact. Made me want to stand up and cheer!

Thanks for the PM, and I'm looking forward to the next part.. :)

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Don't get me wrong I love Arnav but I really want him to suffer when he finds out the truth!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!! OH and thank you for the PM!!!!!!!

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asrcraze

@asrcraze

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nazibah
Don't get me wrong I love Arnav but I really want him to suffer when he finds out the truth!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!! OH and thank you for the PM!!!!!!!

Hey nothing to get you wrong. You can say anything you want !

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey amazing beginning..would love to see where it goes from here..plz do continue..and thanks for the PM

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devsum

@devsum

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

ASR is a jerk. He is always think the worst of Khushi. My heart constantly aches for Khushi. She represents the eternally misunderstood "WOMAN". Somehow someone must make him see the truth. Thanks for the PM.

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meradil

@meradil

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

can't wait to read how he finds out the truth

and as much as i liked the easy forgiving from your previous story, i am much excited for the alter grovelling! thanks for the pm!