Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan (RTMC ff) Part 9 Pg27

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Hey guys, this is my first fan fiction... hope you'll like it...😊

**** I really want to thank my first friend on IF "sweetsanyo" a.k.a Rashmi for gifting me such a beautiful banner for my ff "Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan"😊 Love ya lots😊

Note : the previous name of this ff was " Mohabattein"... which has now be changed to "Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan"...😊


Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )









Aryanagar and Rajpur are two neighboring Kingdoms and are very friendly towards each other. Both these Kingdoms have very good relations with Kingdom of Sumaina, a very powerful kingdom.


Main characters (rest will be added as story proceeds) :


Rajkumar Veer (Rajat Tokas)
He is the price of Rajpur and he very handsome, brave and rebellious. He is extremely skilled at horse riding, Swordsmanship and Archery. He always follows his heart rather than his head. He is a happy go lucky man of 19. He is Maharani Nivriti's and Maharaj Virendraprataps's Son and Dharam's Cousin. ( Veer and Dharam keep on moving from Aryanagar and Rajpur and vice versa as their palaces are very close and they are inseparable)




Rajkumar Dharam (Vikrant)
He is the prince of Aryanagar and Maharani Kamalawati and Majaraj Aryawardhan's Son. He is also Veer's cousin.He is handsome and brave. He always follows his head rather than his heart and also goes by the rules.He is 19.


Maharani Nivriti
She is a widow of Maharaj Virendrapratap and Veer's mother. She is also Maharaj Aryavardhan's sister. She took over the responsibility of Rajpur after her husband's death and is successful in keeping her praja happy.Although she encourages Veer to to follow his heart and instincts but at times she has to use her head since she's the queen of Rajpur. She is a broadminded woman compared to other women of her time.



Maharani Kamlawati
She is Dharam's Mother and Maharaj Aryavardhan's wife.She is a kindhearted and responsible woman.

Maharaj Aryavardhan
He is Dharam's father and king of Aryanagar. He is a good king but is somewhat orthodox. He always sticks to rules.




Rajkumari Sia ( First Sia in serial DV )
She is a beautiful 19 year old princess of Sumaina. She is Maharaj Rudrapratap's daughter and Ananya's sister. She is a kind girl and always dreams of meeting her price charming. She loves her sister the most and supports her most of the time.



Rajkumari Ananya ( Mugdha )
She is the princess of Sumaina. She is 18 and hates being a princess. She is very beautiful, brave, rebellious and free spirited.She is very stubborn and always sticks to her beliefs.She believes in the equality of men and women and believes that there is nothing that men can do women cant do. She doesn't believe in love or marriage. She feels that if she ever decides to marry ( very unlikely acc. to her) at some point of time, it would with someone she chooses and he would definitely not be a royal as royalty comes with restrictions. She is very skilled at horse riding, swordsmanship, archery and martial arts.




Samar ( Ashish Sharma )

Ananya's best friend since childhood. He is 21. He is the son of a blacksmith and has inherited his fathers profession. At times he also serves as a body guard to the rich and famous. He is brave and extremely skilled at sword fighting.




Maharaj Rudrapratap

King of Sumaina and Ananya and Sia's father. He is a good and just king but a little orthodox.He loves his daughters a lot but disapproves of Ananya's beliefs and stubbornness


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Thats all for now, lemme know if you like the characters and concept ;) Any suggestion or criticism is welcome :).


For pm updates press like.


Index:

Character Sketch : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27


Part 1: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=2


Part 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=2

Part 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/56897884

Part 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=6

Part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=6

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=9

Part 7: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57290107

Part 8 (a)
: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/57419194

Part 8 (b)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27?pn=21

Part (9)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2965379/yeh-hai-prem-kahaniyan-rtmc-ff-part-9-pg27


Hey Guys,

Some of you want me to change the current Sia, so I have created a poll... So plz cast your votes below :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2981202/change-actress-who-plays-sia



The ones who want me to change Sia,plz suggest the names of the actresses you think will look best as Sia and will look good with Vikrant Massey...😊

I'll be waiting for your response😊 and plz dont forget to vote!!!!

Love ya all
Tc😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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reso jii.

will comment very soon...

~~**EDITED**~~
so as i told u i will give u a comments shower on sunday,
so as i promised
i m here for ma buddy!

intro main se mujhe dv ki khusboo aa rhi h
besaakh mujhe abhi cold h
but mujhe dv ki khusboo phirr bhi aa rhi h, coz dv ki khosbo h hi itni strng

ananya, ek dum perfect h veer k liye, n veer bhi anu k liye, to the point

lekin, inka ego n jhagda, pata nhi kitna chalega...

lekin voh lovestry thodi na hoi jahan takrar na ho!./

lovely strt, ...
now next part...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey, samy.neva like ma res...
plzz...

u like only ma edited comments ok...

so dat i noe dat u hav read ma edited comment..

lov u
reading d ff nw...

wil try to make a banner for this for sure...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay, i have read..
but wud edit ma comment very soon,, actually kinda busy wid sony tv, as rtmc cn cm on chradra gupta maurya

i liked the plot..but, bit confused aba kingship n gaes, plz mention them properly
lov u

plz dont feel bad for late cooment.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thz for starting a new RTMC FF

Liked the character sketch😃

But I have a doubt...if King of Awadhi is father of Ananya and Sia then how is Sia princess of Sumaina? I'm confused😕

And if u r mentioning Veer's and Sia's age...then plz mention Ananya's and Dharam's also
Waiting for 1st part
Plz Pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: glossyglassy

thz for starting a new RTMC FF

Liked the character sketch😃

But I have a doubt...if King of Awadhi is father of Ananya and Sia then how is Sia princess of Sumaina? I'm confused😕

And if u r mentioning Veer's and Sia's age...then plz mention Ananya's and Dharam's also
Waiting for 1st part
Plz Pm me 😊

Hey thanks a ton for pointing out, I have edited it along with the ages of D,V, A and S😊

Will update soon😊

Love ya too😊
Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys, I am thinking of changing the title, do you think "Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan" or "Prem Kahaniyan" are better than the original one... plz give some suggestions😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

reso jii.


will comment very soon...

unliked😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

okay, i have read..

but wud edit ma comment very soon,, actually kinda busy wid sony tv, as rtmc cn cm on chradra gupta maurya

i liked the plot..but, bit confused aba kingship n gaes, plz mention them properly
lov u

plz dont feel bad for late cooment.

Great yaar, I really wana see him in CGM, hope everything goes well...😊

I have edited it, actually I got confused ... hope you can make out the difference bw the kingdoms now...
😊
Will wait for your comment😊
Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )



Part 1

In Aryanagar :

(Maharani Nivriti has come to Aryanagar along with Veer to visit her brother, Maharaj Aryavardhan.)

Sainink: Rajkumar Dharam, Rajkumar Veer aap dono ko Maharaj Aryavardhan ne apne kaksh me bulaya hai.

Dharam Veer: theek hai, tum jao.

(Both Dharam and Veer enter Aryavardhan's chambers. Maharani Kamlawati and Maharani Nivriti are also present there)

Dhram Veer: Maharaj apne bulaya?

Aryavardhan: haan, hum ne tum dono se kuch zaroori baat karni hai.
Humne tum dono ka vivah tei kar diya hai Sumaina ki Rajkumarion ke saath. Dharam tumharah vivah Rajkumari Siya se hoga aur Veer tumhara Rajkumari Ananya se.

(Dharam Veer are shocked. )

Dharam: (composes himself) Jaisa aap uchit samjhe Maharaj.

( Veer turns in shock towards Dharam and then angrily storms out of the room )

Everyone : Veer ruko!!!!

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In Veers room :
(Veer is pacing to and fro angrily. Nivriti enters)

Nivriti : Veer beta suno

Veer: Maa mujhe apse koi baat nahi karni!

Nivriti: par beta ( veer cuts in )

Veer: par kya maa? apne mujhe bina bataye meri zindagi ka itna bada faisala kar liya? Kyon maa? Aap hi to kahtin hai mujhe apne dil ki sunane ke liye aur mera dil kehta hai ki main abhi iss sab ke liye taiyaar nahi hoon... mere par dabav mat daliye maa...

(Nivriti has tears in her eyes)

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WILL UPDATE SOON. PLZ LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS AND SUGGESTIONS...😊

Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago

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