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Part
13: Saptapadi (saat phere)
The night was as beautiful as an artist's imagination. Some
heavenly artist was playing with color in his canvas and the earth was the only
witness of it. It was night but not a dark one. Silver moonlight was flooding
the universe. New stars were blooming like jasmine on the sky, as if they are
bringing some love message from an ancient world. River Bramhani's transparent water
was the mirror who was reflecting the whole sky along with two beautiful people
who were becoming one for seven births .. for ever.
In the solitude Maan's voice echoed, "Geet, in the witness of the
nature, The five ingredients of whole universe I accept you as my wife, my life
partner...my Ardhangini. Be mine ... I will be yours for ever.. give me the right of
your husband and establish your ownership on me... please."
Geet couldn't reply only a stream of tears come down from her
eyes. Maan had proposed her for marriage earlier in the morning but she never
knew this moment will come so soon.. the moment she never dared to dream about
still it felt like she was waiting only for this moment from ages ... as if each
and every second of her life was craving for those words. Maan hold her close,
his eyes so bright Geet closed her eyes ... in her world Sun can set beyond the
horizon for ever, moon can never rise but these two eyes are the source of
eternal glow. Today when she went to Maan's work place in afternoon Geet didn't
find anyone there but a letter with an unknown flower saying, "I want to see
you in the moon light ... shining more than moon itself".. there were a pair of
payel and the next line of the letter was, "let these poor pieces of gold kiss
your beautiful feet till you don't come in my life." She wore the payel not
knowing it will be there only for a little span. At night when she came wearing
a scarlet lehenga and golden gholi, she adored her head with a long red dupatta
and covered her upper body with it as usual she was oblivious of that fact that
she is wearing the color of suhag, which was sparkling more that the moon
itself under the moonlight. She found nobody there.. she was scared, she ran
from Maan's house to the bank of the river but couldn't find him. She felt
restless.. she couldn't take the anxiety and sat there.. is there anything wrong?
her heart cried and the moment her eyes was about to shed the tear she felt
soft petals are sliding down from her head. The river showed her that for whom
she was crying, he is smiling naughtily standing behind her, wearing a gorgeous
sherwani, a dress Geet has never seen but she wasn't in mood to ask him about
that. Geet stood up and snapped back in anger but before she could say
something Maan put a garland in her neck. Geet was shocked by his sudden move. "ye kya hai?" She asked.
"Gandharv
Vivah*' Jal (water),
Vayu(wind), Agni(fire), Bhumi(earth) aur Akash(sky) ko shakshi maanke mai tumhe
apna patni maanta hu' Geet, in the
witness of the nature, The five ingredients of whole universe' I accept you as
my wife, my life partner'my Ardhangini. Be mine ' I will be yours for ever'
give me the right of your husband and establish your ownership on me' please."
Geet stood motionless, still silent.. silent like the rest of
the world, amazed like the silver-blue layer above their head. Only the tune of
flowing water was getting mingled with the whisper of wind and creating a melody
..a melody which was feeling like heavenly chant of some pious 'Mantra'' a
melody that is only audible to this two people'
[play the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PV8-cLMUQ-o ]
In lamhon ke daaman meinPakiza se riste hainKoi kalma mohabat kaDohrate farishte hain
Khamosh si hai zameen hairaan sa falak hai
Ek noor hi noor sa ab aasman talak hai
Nagmein hi nagmein hai jagti soti fizaon mein
Husn hai sari adaon mein
Ishq hai jaise hawaon mein
Maan put forward another garland towards her, "Geet I am waiting' with this garland
welcome me in your life, bound me in an unbreakable bond."
Geet opened her eyes but couldn't look straight into his eyes..all
the weight of her coyness came on her eyelids.. she lowered her eyes and took
the garland from his hands..Her whole body was shaking when she put the garland
on his neck. He hold her hands but she didn't look at him. Maan wanted to meet
her eyes so badly, he wanted to see those shivering lips.. "Geet I want to see my wife" he said. He put his finger under
her chin and made her face him. Geet kept her eyes close but her lips was not
listening to her, it was shaking like leafs till they felt his warm breath on
it. She felt he is coming closer and closer .. at the end she hugged him, hide
herself in his embrace. Maan hold her tight ..as tight as possible .. it was
not their first hug but it was the first time Maan was embracing his wife and
Geet was finding her shelter in her husband's arms..both felt new.. both felt
content.
Kaise yeh ishq hai Kaisa yeh khwab hai
Kaise jazbaat ka umda salab hai
Din badle raatein badli, baathein badli
Jeene ke aandaz hi badlein
They didn't know for how long they were standing like that.
Cool wind keep on blowing Geet's long hair and dupatta. Geet broke the silence
first. She spoke very softly, "I want to took seven vows with you.. I want to
have that seven steps before we step in our married life.. saptapadi(saat phere)
ke pavitra bandhan me humare rishtey ko bandhna chahti hu (want to start our
relationship with the pious ritual of saptapadi).
The holy fire flare up.. alighting the vicinity, alighting
the earth the light of blazing flame was reaching the heaven. Maan hold Geet's
palm in his and guided her around the fire. With every circle they were taking
one oath .. Oath to become each others'
and remain the same for the entire life, oath for standing by each other in the
good and bad time, to remain two bodies one soul for rest of the life. Maan
lead her and Geet only keep staring at him, her smile was making her eyes glow,
her tears were touching her lips.. If a blind get his eyesight back only for
few moment the way he look at the creation Geet's eyes was looking at her Maan with such emotion. In fifth phere Geet
stopped Maan and went in front of Maan, "If
death comes I will face it first ' it can't touch you in my lifetime."
Maan's heartbeat standstill for a moment hearing what her mouth blurt out.. her
words made him numb.. He wanted to kiss that mouth then and there but Geet had
taken his hand and started the fifth phere by then taking her fifth vow, "My lord, I share both
in your joys and sorrows. Your love will make me trust and honor you. I will
carry out your wishes."
"My beloved, as you walked the seven
steps with me, our Love and friendship became eternal. We experienced spiritual
union in God. Now you have become completely mine and I offer my life to you.
Our marriage will be for ever."' they completed there seventh phere. Saptapdi is done. Now
they belong to each other' the thought spellbound them' there was no Barmhin
pandit to bless them .. but where 'Brahman'**(supreme soul 'Param-Atma) was himself the priest .. none
other is needed. They stood still and Maan uttered the last chant,
"Managhumsi
-Samvrathaas smu Chiththaani -Aakaram 'Sathvamasi"
If you are the lyrics, I am the music. If you
are the music, I am the lyrics.
"Amooham -Amoohamasmi saa -Thvam
'dhyowraham"
If I am the heavenly body, you are the earthly
world.
"Pruthivee thvam -Retho' aham -retho'
Bhruthvam 'Manohamasmi"
While I am the life source, you are the carrier
of the same.
"vak thvam -Saamaa ham asmi -Rukthvam
'Saamaam"
I am the thoughts and you are the speech.
"Anuvradhaa -bhava Pumse' Pumse'
-Puthraaya- Veththavai"
While you are the words, I am the meaning.
Sriyai
-Puthraaya -Veththavai ehi -Soonrurute"
With your sweet words, come with me to lead a
prosperous life
Her maang became red
like rising sun as Maan put 'sindur' on her .. a drop of sindur dropped on her
nose, another drop sparkled in the corner of her eyes ' the red of 'sindur'
spreaded all over her face, her body she became scarlet.. Maan keep staring at
this new sunrise of his life ' 'midnight sun' he thought . he forgot to blink' he
whispered in her ears, "Geet I want to
make you mine.. Want to color myself bathing in the vermilion color of yours
..tan se man se tumhare saath ek hona chahta hu... may I Geet?"
Geet felt a chill ran
down her spine.. she felt Maan's eyes full of desire looking only towards her
but this time she was not worried .. she knew those eyes also has immense love
for her.. river of desire is also sugary when it forms from the fountain of
love. She tried to reply him but her voice didn't help her .. she could only
nod her head in yes. "Geet" Maan's
voice makes Geet's heavy breath heavier. She tried to run away but legs
betrayed her.. she found her trapped in her husband's arms. Maan cupped her
face preserved her lips with his. He sucked her lower lip softly then slowly
entered her mouth increasing his speed.. he tasted every corner of her mouth as
an eager bee sucks honey from flower, his tongue guided her inside ... like a bud
Geet gradually sheds her coyness and started to kiss him back. As much his grip
over her lower waist became stronger, her clutch on his shoulder also became
firmer. They parted as they also needed to breathe but this time Geet
approached Maan.. forgetting everything she kissed him. They kissed under the
open sky but still it was all hidden only the shameless moon continued to watch
them from the above Sky.
Samay ne yeh kya kiyaBadal di hai kaya
Tumhe mene paa liyeMujhe tumne paya
Mile dekho aise hai humke do sur ho jaise madham
koi jyada na koi kaamKise raag mein
Ke prem aag mein
Jalte dono hi the tan bhi hai maan bhi
Maan bhi hai tan bhi
Geet parted from Maan
and blushed heavily.. how can she became so bold.. she can't believe herself.
Maan smirked.. he so much wanted to tease her, "Geet you are a good learner .. you learned art ok kissing so fast." Geet was so embarrassed she tried to ran
away but Geet didn't noticed Maan was holding a corner of her dupatta
unconsciously.. she ran away but her dupata remain in Maan's hand. she could
take two or three steps when she realized her dupatta is gone .. her upper body is almost naked to his eyes
only her assets was covered in her choli. Geet tried to cover herself with her
hands but her poor hands couldn't understand what to cover and what to not. She
just turned away. Maan covered the distance between them .. went closer and
closer until her back touches his chest. He removed her hairs from her back.. his
fingers taped on her back like he is playing a musical instrument.. she arched
her back under his sensuous touch... his hands slide down brushing her hands.. her body felt an unknown pleasure
in his lightest touch..Maan folded her hand on her tummy.. the realization that
she is save in her husband's hand gives her a peace she never felt before. Maan
planted a kiss her neck .. next moment his lips found its place on her
shoulder. Maan rubbed his face on her skin.. she sighed as his breath on her ear
was giving her a tickling sensation. He murmured,
"Mere khwaabon ke is gulistaan mein Tumse hi to bahar chai hai
Phoolon mein rang mere the lekin
In mein khusboon tumhi se aaye hai"
He bends down and
scooped Geet in his arms. He carried her away.. only the dim fire and Geet's
dupatta left behind.
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After sometime when
Geet found soil under her feet she opened her eyes only to see the most
beautiful sight.. a outside of Maan's home bed of their Suhag Raat was
decorated.. blankets on the blankets and a whote duvet at the top and it was
decorated with some red flowers and petals of the same unknown to Geet.. whole
surroundings was scented with its fragrance. Four temporary pillars was
carrying a red curtain around the bed. Geet forgot everything else and danced
like a kid, "what is this flower' I have
never seen in the temple.. its aroma makes me crazy."
Maan smiled, "this is
called rose' as red as your lips and as aromatic as you are" he replied in a
romantic way but Geet has lots of question to ask, "who did all this decor?"
"The beggar you have seen some days before.."
Geet didn't let him
complete and asked, "The beggar did it?"
"Heis not a beggar he is my loyal guard I have
told you about."
"Oh where does he live?"
Now it was too much
for Maan.. in his first night after wedding he is answering his wife about his
guard.. frustrated he thought about how to stop her. Geet was about to ask
another question when she felt Maan's finger between the knot of her choli and
her skin.. she gasped .. there was only one knot of her choli' she knew a strong
pull of his finger and she will lose the last bit of fabric from her upper
body. But Maan didn't unknotted it.. he moved his finger there for a little span
then dragged her close holding her choli, "shhh"
he hissed "tonight its only you and me.. no
third person can come here between us." Geet nodded and closed her eyes in
submission. Time passed but Maan didn't touch her' she opened her eyes and saw
he has enlightened diyas.. the place looked more beautiful She turned and
discovered him dragging the curtain "I
don't like the interference of moonlight either ' it is touching you and I
won't let it happen"
The place is covered
by the curtains now. Maan again took her in his arms and placed her on the bed
covered with rose petals. Geet lied there like a mermaid there.. her lehenga
was looking like a bloomed lotus.. her long hair was touching the floor.. her
heavy breast was moving upside down in anxiety .. her perfectly curved belly
was moving along with it. For a long time Maan only devoured her beauty with his
eyes' silently he keep on staring at the flawless creation of the creator. He
mumbled,,
"Her hair dense as darkness,
Her face rich as the full moon:
Unbelievable contrasts
Couched in a seat of love.
Her eyes rival lotuses.
Seeing that girl today,
My eager heart
Is driven by Desire.
Innocence and beauty
Adore her fair skin
Her gold necklace
Is lightning.
On the twin hills,
Her breasts'"
Maan's verse was only
to made Geet a little more nervous' he smirked in her rection' she tried to
cover her nudity but nothing helped her. Maan wanted to drown himself in her
soul in that moment but he decided to drag this moment for a little longer. Maan
looked at her face.. eyes are closed tightly.. lips are shivering lightly .. he
smiled seeing she has clutched the sheet from the start. Geet opened her eyes
for a little. Maan kissed a rose and placed it on her lips' it was not Maan's
lips still she trembled in its touch .. Maan moved it down' lips to chin then
it went down on her neck ' her cleavage, the valley of her bosoms ' Maan keep
on moving it' it touched her belly her navel .. it went down touching her everywhere
over her lehenga.
Maan stopped at her
feet' Geet left a breath which she was holding for a long time but it was just
the beginning of her misery. He slides up her lehenga a little and remover her
payel, "your companionship with her feet
was till now only" he said and threw it far away. Maan's finger started
doing mischief under her feet' he tickled her there' Geet crawled her feet ..
tried to pull it up to get rid of his teasing but Maan hold her feet tight and
kissed it' Maan's voice became husky, "Geet you know It was your feet what I saw first in our first meeting." Geet felt restless as her husband was
touching her feet .. she tried to stop him but it only made his kiss more
passionate.
He came up to her
abdomen, "then I saw your belly" He
covered her belly button with rose petals and kissed it more passionately. Geet bites her own lips to take its sensuality.
"and then"' Maan didn't end his
lines and planted a wait kiss on Geet's cleavage. Geet unable to take it turned
her body making Maan to face her back. Maan was enjoying her reaction. He
stroke her back with the back of his palm very gently' his hand was replaced by
his lips soon.. his hand rested on her waist band and removed it slowly. He
kissed her skin, left his bite mark on her flesh and at the end opened the knot
of hr choli' her back fully exposed now' he nuzzled there naughtily, followed
by wet kisses .. He turned her again. Her choli was still
covering her bosoms.. her eyes were still closed. He kissed on her eyes, "Geet open your eyes.. look at me.. I want to
see myself in your eyes.. I want to see how your eyes speak when I love you." Oh how devilish her husband is Geet thought when
she is feeling like covering her face with her hands he is asking her to see.. but she couldn't refuse.. Maan's voice is having such a command over her
tonight that she can't deny him. She opened her eyes and saw herself in his
eyes.. mirror has lied her till date.. she is far much beautiful than she knew
she is' his eyes made her beautiful. They were so close that there eyes could
only reflect each other in it' there was nothing left in the rest of the world.
Maan removed his kurta and came on her top.. slowly stretched her hands and slides his fingers with her.. pinning her with
his body he again took her lips in his and this time it was not a tender one.. he kissed her soft lips, bite them, sucked them.. his tongue danced inside her
mouth invading every inch of her mouth .. Geet tried to match his passion but he was kissing her like he has to satisfy his ages old thirst.. the kiss left them breathless still it breathed a
new life in them. Maan went down from her chin to neck to her shoulder.. He
flooded her with his kisses, he nuzzled her bare skin, rubbed it with his cheek
on the fabric .. there was mad passion in his love but no aggression .. it was
not like a hungry animal pouncing on its pray but it was like a thirsty bird
quenching her thirst in a cool lake .. drowning itself in the water. He wanted
to drown himself in her soul, entirely.. He wanted her to take him somewhere
from where there will be no come back.
Geet wanted to touch
him but her hand was entwined with Maan's. Maan slowly took the loose piece of
cloth in his teeth and threw it down. Finally her womanly possessions were
exposed .. for some time he only adored them with his eyes.. Geet wriggled feeling
her nudity but Maan didn't let her move.. his hands on her hands his legs on her
limbs confined her .. Maan Kissed on the tip of her breast .. his tongue played
with her buds.."Maan" Geet moaned.. Maan pity on her.. left her hands and cupping her breast he took her nipple in
her mouth.. She dug her nails on his scalp.. her touch made him crazier .. he
sucked her breasts like a dying man licking the last drop of elixir. His tongue
was soft with her asset where his teeth was harsh with it.. he filled his mouth
his heart and soul with it.. his hand crushed them like the girls smash the
leaf of hina to bring out the color.. Geet moaned in pain, smiled in pleasure, she wriggled she sighed.. she cupped
his face and bring him up. Maan looked at her smiled.. pecked her lips and again
dug his head on another bud to suck its nectar. Geet's breasts which got Maan's
tender touch once, Maan made them swollen and red tonight.. Geet only let him do what
he wanted with her possessions and arched her one leg to reduce the havoc in
her.
After a long time Maan
left his twin lovers and want down to kiss Geet's nave deeply. This time no
rose petal was to cover it.. Maan's kiss creates a wave on her body.. she
giggled feeling ticklish. "So it tickles
you here?" Maan asked mischievously. "umm
hmm" Geet agreed.. and her acceptance proved fatal to her as Maan keep on
kissing her there making her stir upside down.. he pressed her belly harshly "Ahh" Geet moaned pulling Maan's head "Maan please stop this.. not any
more.. now I want to touch you, kiss you .. please." Maan's lips curved in a
beautiful smile. He was waiting so long for this.. at last his coy- mistress has
uttered it. He rolled in the bed and let the woman come on his top. Geet imitate
her husband in holding his hands while kissing.. Maan smiled in her antics..
Geet kissed his bare chest .. his God like body with immense love and passion..
leaving all her shame, all her hesitation behind. He kissed her Godlike physic
like she is worshiping him.. Maan freed his hands easily and snaked her waist
firmly.. she got glued with his body helplessly , "Kiss me Geet' my mouth is thirsty again... It wants your love"' Geet kissed him.. with
all her capability she kissed him.. showered her love... it was not a kiss it was her submission her
devotion for him.. she kept her head on his chest .. Geet keep mum but her heart
spoke,
"All doubts are gone
The birds may sing a million songs,
A million moons may shine now.
When he is close to me,
My heart sings and my body shines.
Lift my dress, beautiful lover,
And fill me with pure gold.
You are my shelter in the rain,
My ferry-boat across the river,
My warm fire in the cold weather,
My southern breeze in the summer heat.
Nobody else I need
Only you."
Maan again rolled her and took her beneath
his. Maan freed her as well as himself from the last piece of their clothing.. her
lehenga took its refuge on the ground with his dress..Geet clutched Maan by his
shoulder in agony.. Maan observed her marble like body which has become pink in
shame now.. Geet was unable to take Maan's eyes on her naked body but she
couldn't stop herself from stilling a glace of her handsome husband.
"love you Geet.. thanks for coming in my life' you broke all
the blockages of my mind, you cleared my blurred vision with your love.. now
complete me with your love." with this Maan entered her body.. Geet moaned
in pain and a yet undiscovered pleasure took over her.. Geet's smile reached her eyes,
her tears flooded her cheeks.. Maan kissed her forehead.. they became one.. their
soul united for eternity.
Maan collapsed beside
Geet after hitting the climax .. they hugged each other tight and drifted into
sleep in each other's embrace .. most peaceful sleep that one can ever have
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The night was over.. a
night for which they dreamed every night in their life.. a night in which they
leaved their life.. a night more brighter than daylight. With the frst ray of
sun light Geet woke up'her fead was still resting on Maan's broad chest. She
smiled and left the place. When Maan found her she was coming back after taking
her bath in the river, covering her only in a blue shawl of his.. She was uncomfortable
with her dress as she wasn't wearing any choli then..Her wait hair was resting
on her bare back.. her still alive smudged sindoor was bearing the memory of
last night.. he forgot blinking seeing her sun kissed beauty.
"What are you doing?" asked Geet shyly.
"watching my goddess.. my beloved wife."
Geet didn't find
anything to reply but blushed profusely. Maan hold her hand and went inside his
room, "Geet now you have the right to
see the deity along with me... so here it is."
Maan slowly removed
the veil from Radha-Krishna's deity. Geet saw it in amusement, "par ye toh'"
"as beautiful as our love.. isn't it?" Maan asked holding her from beside. A droplet
from her hair fall on her shoulder .. Maan leaked it .. his lips became active
in touch of her bare skin.. his hands made their grip stronger on her lower
abdomen.
Geet winched,"Maan .. what are you doing.. we are in front
of God"
"So what we have established our relationship in God's
witness na .. to phir inse kaisa sharmana?" Maan smirked. The sparkle of his eyes told Geet
he is after some mischief. She tried to free herself but before that she found
her lying on Maan's bed and Maan has blocked her way with his body. Maan
started kissing her. Geet couldn't move under his toned body.. she could only stretch
her one hand and drag the veil on Radha-Krishna's face while Maan unveiled
her slowly removing the only material she had on her body.
All my inhibition left me in a flash,
When he
robbed me of my clothes,
But his
body became my new dress.
Like a
bee hovering on a lotus leaf
He was
there in my night, on me!
True, the god of love never
hesitates!
He is free and determined like a bird
Winging toward the clouds it loves.
Yet I remember the mad tricks he played,
My heart restlessly burning with desire
Was yet filled with fear!
[*There is eight kaindda marriage in Ved... Gandharv Vivah is one of them... here no custom is needed only exchanging garland ... if couple didn't get support of their family they used to do so.. it was acknowledged by society then]
[**Brahman: means the the one supreme, universal Spirit that is the origin and support of the phenomenal universe. Bahmin or Brahmana means a cast ... they are not same]
[another thing just to inform you roses was not that common in India then... it was not used in Hindu temples as it is actually a foreign flower come here in India with the Muslim emperors, same as the dress Sherwani]
[The Verses are the translation of Vidyapati's verses.. he was a poet of medieval India]
[song is taken from Jodha Akbar]
hei friends please comment on this update... I am a little nervous this time as its very difficult writing such intimate scene.. n if I don't get long comments for this update I am not gonna write any romantic update any more
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