*GOa GAmBLe for Love* -KriYaansh SS Part 2- 2/3/12

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Posted: 14 years ago

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plzz pmmewhen update and awesome update and loved it plzz post the next part faster

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Posted: 14 years ago

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it was awesome dear and plz pm me whenever u update

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesum story plz update asap and also pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey dear . . . . . Plz continue nd pm me . . . . . . . We really wanna know-- agar kriya vahan jati to kya hota...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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dear r u forgetting thsi ss u said u will finish before indiafest it over and it is already started and now count down begins and hurry

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: The007Shivani
dear r u forgetting thsi ss u said u will finish before indiafest it over and it is already started and now count down begins and hurry

Sorry Dear , will update by tomorrow, I have already started writing it ...😊

Edited by kriyansh117 - 14 years ago

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Rishita Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Likh Likh Meri Romu.. Jaldi!!! 😆

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Himani

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Next update -

(Finally the bus started off with a jerk !! And everyone started screaming with exitement and enthu !! Each and everyone had a special colgate smile on their face !! They finally got a chance to sit near their partner and drown in their eyes again ...Everyone was enjoying this blissful moment EXCEPT our KriYaansh ... Kria was in full mood of stabbing Rey !!! Rey was sitting with Nicole Mam and due to him she had to sit besides a dazzler Bimbo called Rina , that was the last option left !!!Rey looked at Kria with pleading eyes but she had decided !! She was NOT going to give him a second chance )

Rey (To Kria through his eyes )- Baatcutter !! Please forgive me !! I didnt invite Nicole mam to sit besides me !! I had reserved that seat for you ...but how Nicole Mam sat over that !! How can I tell her NO !!!

Kria (She gives him a scornful look ) (Speaks with her eyes) - Ohh ACCHA !!! Mr. LINE-CUTTER !! You sit with your dearest Nicole and I will try to enjoy My BOOK (She takes a book from her bag and starts pretending to read it with her full dedication ... After some minutes , She peeped through her book to see what was Rey doing . To her surprise , he was cheerfully talking to Nicole Mam !! She felt like getting off the seat and Screaming !! ) Kria , stay calm !! Why are you getting bothered let him do whatever he wants ...(Starts reading again )

Rina - ( In a fast pace) Ohhh My !!! Kitna Dashing hai woh !!! Hayyyee iske jaise Hotties Goa ayenge toh enjoyment double Ho jayegi !!!!!!

Kria - kya kaun ?? (She noticed Rina looking at Rey . She hits her head with her book and nods in disbelief ) Tum CHUP karogi !! Dikh nahi raha mein padh rahi hoon ...

Rina - (in a high intensity) Padhne aana tha toh Trip pe kyun aayi !!!! Tumhare jaisi ladki ko HOTNESS ka meaning bhii nahi pta hoga !! LOOSER !!! (Everyone including Rey notices that )

(Kria was about to retort but suddenly a voice spoke in )

Neha -(Sitting behind Kria with her diwana ) Looser who telling you are , Neha kii Best friend she is (looks at Kria and gives her a friendly side-hug ) Chup Chap apna kaam karo aur Kaam nhi hai toh toh Koi kaam dhundo .(Rina knew that she wont win , so she choose to silently drool over the guys in the bus )

Kria (Smiles at Neha ) - Thanks Neah , I was in No mood to fight , I am having a bad day since morning!!! (looks at Rey with a scoul on her face ) Pta nahi kiski Shakal dekhli subah subah (Rey was still looking at her helplessly thinking "Mein toh GAYA ")
(Everyone was Busy in their own world . Barkha were dicussing the new Jive moves whereas Amar was telling Rinni the new recipe of making delicious Diet cupcakes to which rinni was carefully listening , Kria and Neha were constantly Chirping around and NiCky were busy counting on the hot girls in the bus and Simmi was constantly shouting at them ...)

(Rey with a fade smile , was talking to with Nicole Mam about his passion in dancing with Nicole Mam but his eyes were still stuck on Kria )

Nicole - So , Rey , Were you intersted in dancing from your childhood ?
Rey - (eyes stuck on Kria )
Nicole - HELLO REY ????
Rey - ( Looks at Nicole Mam) ye ...Ye...YES Mam , I love dancing since my childhood ...Dance has brought me closer to the real me , no matter how much others opposed it(his smile disappears) (He remembers how his Dad always used to be against his dance and never used to support him ... It was only and only his mom who used to stand by him and help him fulfill his desire of getting trained ...No matter however affluent the "Ranvijay Singhania was , Rey never actually found a Father in him ...)
Nicole Mam - (Notices his sudden change in mood ) - You seemed to have fought a tough battle for dance ...I can understand , You always get opposed when you want to do the one thing you love ... No one supports you ...
Rey - (Rey didnt agree with this, He nods in disagreement and starts remembering what had dance gifted him ... He may have suffered alot but Dance was the one thing which brought him close to the most precious and worthy person of his life ...Kria...Rey had never seen anyone more passionate about dance ...The way Kria fights a new battle everyday just to dance off a few moments makes rey fall for her all over again ...Dance , for Kria is more important than oxygen ... He remembers the way Kria used to dance in the corridors just after the exams used to get over and a suddenly all his worries disappears ...He still couldnt decide ...what was more important to him ...Kria or DANCE ... He was soo In love with His Baat-cutter that he forgot that Nicole Mam was still waiting for his reply )

(Suddenly the tour-guide emerged from the seats bringing Rey back to earth

The tour Guide (Raghav) - (A young , dashing guy with a husky voice in his late twenties got off his seat . He was young and charming and the girls couldnt stop but drool over him . This was bothering the guys alot .) Heyya Pals , Are you guys enjoying the Trip ??

(A huge Roar from the Girls ) - YESSS !!!! ( The boys stared at the girls who were busy drooling over him , the guy was getting on their Nerves )

Raghav - So Guys are you Hungry ?? Its almost 6 hours since the trip started !!! Lets Hault at the nearby restaurant so that you guys can freshen up ...

(Everyone gets off the bus , Kria was the last one to get down ... Rey started walking to the restaurant and something suddenly striked him . He hadnt seen his baat-cutter get off the bus ...He goes to the bus Again to have a look ... Kria was climbing down the steps and SUDDENLY Rey came on the Door and Shouted BAAT-CUTTER . Kria Suffered a mini-heart-attack and was about to fall down !!! But someone"S Strong grip help her tight ... It didnt take her more than a second to realize who that was ...Who else could miss her even when it is only a matter of seconds , who else could call her Baat-cutter , who else could lov...Than suddenly she got down frtom her train of thoughts and Realized she was in Rey"S arms ... She held herslef straight in embarrassment and caressed her hair and Started walking )

Rey - (With a HUGE grin ) YEAH BABE !!!

Kria started moving towards the washroom . She opened the door , stood by the Mirror , opened the tap and splashed some water on her face ... She stood there watching herself in the mirror for about 10 seconds ...

Kria (to her reflection ) Why the hell do you loose on yourself when he is around !! He doesnt cares a damn for you !!! GROW UP GIRL !!! YOU NEED A BREAK !!! Its all over !!! He is still messed up with his SO-CALLED EGO !!!!!! Get a life !!! You have your Gang nbe with them and stay away from his addictive eyes ...Thats not gonna help ...She finally got out of the washroom and headed to the restaurant ...Rey was standing over there ... A few steps away ...

Rey - kria...KRIA ...

(To his surprise , She didnt look and started heading off )

Rey (Ran behind her , He held her hand and pulled her to his side , tightening the grip of his body to hers ) Look Kria ...This silence isnt heling a bit !! we need to talk !!! I am sorry Kria ...I never meant to hurt you ... There is No weakling , No dazzling for me ...Its only and only Louisans !!!! We havent talked properly since a freaking week ... I cant see you get away ...Please Kria , scold me , Hit me , Kill me !! But please talk to me

Kria - (Struggling over his tough grip ...His warm breath was making it difficult to ignore him )

Rey - Kria Please , PLEASE dont do this to me !!! PLEASE !!!

Kria - (Tears buliding up in her eyes ) Rey (In a stern Voice ) LEAVE MY HAND

Rey noticed a teardrop fall off her eyes which were once filled with Joy and Glee ...He couldnt help but curse himself ...He , very well knew that he was the reason for her awful condition ...He knew it very well how much He meant to her ... And it was killing him from within that She was Hurt ...He held her free and let her go ...She ran off the restaurant ...

(She reached the door and wiped of the tears and sat besides Neha ...After a few minutes Rey entered ...It didnt take kria much time to realize that he had broken off into tears , His red-swollen eyes were conveying everything ... He was trying his best to hide his thunder-striken face from his friends ... Everyone was enjoying the lunch except 2 people ...Who were cursing themselves for the crime they never commited ... The silently pretended to eat ...And headed back to the bus ...They both occupied their seats ... They both had lost the strength to do anything further .,...They silently tried to divert their minds with the direction of the wind and tried to supress their dry tears and enjoy the atmosphere...

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Heyya Guys I am awfully sorry for this late update ... The recent depressive days made me shatter and I was not in a condition to continue . please ignore if you find any grammatical mistake , I was in a hurry and had to complete it in one go.. I have finally updated ...Hope you guys like it ...

Hit the LIKE button if you want pmz

Pm"s on the way 😊

Love yaa all 🤗

Edited by kriyansh117 - 14 years ago

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Rishita Singh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#69

RES...first one YAY!!!

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Wow...Romu simply wow!!! I was so eagerly waiting for this update and you did it..!!! Voh bhi us din jis din mere net ne mera saath diya..😆

but seriously hats Off..!!!

Kya likha..Muaahz!!!

The eye-to-eye talk was so real..I am sure reality mein bhi KriYaansh aise hi baat karte..!! this FF was so damn real!!!😳

And These lines so emotion filled expressed rey's emotions so hard!!!!

Rey noticed a teardrop fall off her eyes which were once filled with Joy and Glee ...He couldnt help but curse himself ...He , very well knew that he was the reason for her awful condition ...He knew it very well how much He meant to her ... And it was killing him from within that She was Hurt ...He held her free and let her go ...She ran off the restaurant ...

(She reached the door and wiped of the tears and sat besides Neha ...After a few minutes Rey entered ...It didnt take kria much time to realize that he had broken off into tears , His red-swollen eyes were conveying everything ... He was trying his best to hide his thunder-striken face from his friends ... Everyone was enjoying the lunch except 2 people ...Who were cursing themselves for the crime they never commited ... The silently pretended to eat ...And headed back to the bus ...They both occupied their seats ... They both had lost the strength to do anything further .,...They silently tried to divert their minds with the direction of the wind and forget everyting that they had suffered ...

You expressed his feelings for Kria in such a beautiful way!!!! Your writing skills are super awesome Romu! Love you so so so so much!!!!

Update Asap..

And Love you!!!!! 🤗

Edited by Kriyaansh0311 - 14 years ago

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chsripriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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awesome awesome awesome amazing fantastic mindblowing update kriyaansh crying i had tears in my eyes after reading the lasr very heart touching yaar anf thnx for pm me