*GOa GAmBLe for Love* -KriYaansh SS Part 2- 2/3/12

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Hey guys , I m writing an SS on the Goa Track !!! This SS will have Maximum 4-5 parts and I cant promise for the timely updates but i will surely finish this SS before the actual Goa sequence is aired !!!





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(At the Atrium)

[The louians or should be primarily the Dazzlers and Weaklings were busy waiting for RDX sir who told had mentioned them earlier that he had to make some important announcement , The respective teams had gathered but there was no sign of Kria and Reyaansh )

Bharat - (to swayam ) - Hey Swayam , Kria kidhar hai re , Where is she stuck ??

Swayam - pata nahi re , Subah se nakk phulaye hue behti thi , I hope she isnt involved in some fight again with Rey...

(RDX sir was busy discussing something with the peon but his eyes fell on Bharat and Swayam )

RDX - Bharat , Swayam , Just Shut up , Cant you 2 Manitain some DISCIPLINE !!!!!!

Sharon - They should be TAUGHT to behave sir , God knows from where did they land up in this college...

Neha -(Pushed Sharon) Talking what you are !!!Discipline se zaruri hoti hai performance jo Humare paas hai ...(keeps her hand on Amar"S Shoulders and Rinni notices it )

Rinni - (pushes Neha"S hands) HAA HAAN !!! we all know about your standards Miss. VErBaL DiaRrhoEA !!!!!!!!

Vicky ( in anger ) - Oyye Ms. 15th century kii chimpanzee , Mind your ...(He was trying to complete his sentence but suddenly Nil pushes him and whispers in his ears)

Nil , Simmi and everyone joins the fight and create a huge chaos in the atrium . RDX sir gets stunned seeing the condition of the college due yo the divide )

RDX - Enough !!!!! I SAID ENOUGH !!!! I thought after Mr. Malik"S councilling , you all would IMprove !!!!! But NO !!!! GOSH !!!!!!!!! JUST SHUT UP !!!

(RDX was lecturing the whole gang on discipline , in the meanwhile , Kria and Rey enter from the side
entrance of the atrium , pushing one another )

Rey - (Following Kria) Kria , BAAT-CUTTER !!! Atleast listen to me once !!! I didnt spill water on your dress !!!! its just that peon pushed me in the corridor and coincidently u were passing By...

Kria - (Walking Ahead ) HAHAHA !!!!!! I m a wealing THAT DOESNT mean I have less brains than u !!!!! And Stop following Me MR. LiNeCuTter
(RDX sir was horrified at the sight of KriYaansh . If I dont take some action , these people are going to make a MESS of Foot-Loose , I Got to do something)

RDX Sir - (enters in the middle of Kria and Reyaansh ) Guys !!!! Please for God sakes PLEASE stop arguing !!!! I m Fed up !!!!! If not for yourself , please think of the reputation of our College !!!I I was going to announce for a small Goa vacation for the Louians as you all have performed quite well in your exams , BUT NO !!! There are no Louians present over here !! And let me Remind you
Dazzlers and Weakling are NOT ALLOWED !!!!

All in a unison - TRIP TO GOA ??

RDX - but Dazzlers and weaklings are not allowed , so that means u all cannot go...

Vicky (putting his hands on Amar and Bharat"S shoulders ) - Who Dazzlers , what weakling ??

Rey (Grabbing Kria"S arms and smiling to which Kria makes a shocked Expression) - we are (All in a unison) LOusIANS!!!!!

(Kria removes her hand)

RDX - Okay then , Get ready to go to Goa , Get your baggage done by tomorrow and reach the college by 7 in the morning AND here"S A short notice , If I see anyone ffighting in Goa on the Grounds of Dazzlers and Weaklings ...FORGET FOOT-LOOSE

RDX sir Leaves . Everyone in pin-drop silence , Trying to think what to say next . NiCky , unable to digest the silece start yelling and jumping around everyone

Vicky -(hopping) Aee Kya bolti tu ??
Nil -(in a feminish tone) Aee , kya mein bolun ?? (Claps his hands with Vicky)

Everyone started staring at each other in disbelief !!!
They broke the silence and suddenly burst out laughing !!! For a moment they forget about the divide and start laughing loudly Kria and sharon , Bharat and Nilesh , Simmi and Vishakha everyone . It felt like the same old happiness is back on the sets !!!! No more fights , No more Divide !!!! After sometime they came back to their senses , realized what they just did and Marched home



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(Next day at 6 :30 am )

Kria - (Running on the streets in search of an auto ) AUTO AUTO !!! (An auto passed by without stopping ) HELL !!!! What is happening over here !!!! How will I reach College on time !!!! It will atleast take me 20 minutes to reach their !!! Meri Papaya (Her Nano) ko bhii aaj hii kharab hona tha !!!!! HELL !!!! (Sees the time , it was 6:32 ) 2 MINUTE HO GAYE !!! (Hyper mode ) Auto Auto !!!!

(Luckily , Rey was passing by the same streets on his Bike as of Kria , He saw kria tryping to stop an auto but in no success . He thought this was the chance to talk to Kria and clear all the misunderstandings )

Rey drove his bike and stopped next to Kria . Kria saw him and Pretended that he didnt see him and continued shouting AUTO AUTO .

Rey - Kria , lets forget our misunderstandings !! At this movement , you are getting late . If you dont reach on time , you will miss the bus and not only you , me too because you know I wont go without you

Kria - (still ignorant , walked a bit Ahead) Agge wale Taxi stand se I will take a Taxi (Started walking )

Rey - (Smiled at her kiddish reaction ) Meri Ziddi Baat-cutter(He murmured ) (Again drives to Kria ) Kria , Please listen to me and Sit !!! I promise not to utter a single word about us !!

Kria - (Looked at him ) How do I trust you ?? Trust karne ke liye Honesty honi chahiye jo aap Dazzlers mein hai nahi (flips her head )HUH

Rey - (hits his head )PHIR SE !!! kria DANCE KII KASAM !!!! Ab toh baith Jao !!!

Kria looks at her watch . it was 6:45 . Kria was like abhi nahi nilki toh nahi paunchungi !!! Kria Baith jaa !!! 15 min ka hii toh sawaal hai !! She makes a straight face and sits to which Rey smiles and nods his head . He puts on the Gear and starts driving in a jiffy . The sudden jerk pushes Kria forward and for a second she gets wrapped on Rey"S shoulders . Rey was enjoying each and every moment . He was purposely altering the speed so that Kria was pushed toward him . Finally Kria , in hesitation , Puts her right hand on his shoulders .

Kria - I took your lift that doesnt means that I forgave you...Dont misunderstand it ...

Rey - (smirks) Me ?? U mean MEIN ?? Nahi Nahi ...mEIN AISA NAHI KARunga ...
(Kria doesnt understands what is he trying to speak , she ignores and He continues Driving . Kria was enjoying the Bike -ride to the fullest . Who wouldn"t !!! Early moroning , cool winds , chirping birds and A handsome guy driving for her (LOL) Rey suddenly stops the bike

Kria - (Astonished) Why did u stop the bike?

Rey - Kyun , Goa nahi jaana (smirks)

Kria - Haan haan thik hai thik hai (Gets of the bike and starts walking and turns back to see why isnt Rey coming , she sees him leaning against his bike and looking at her . She turns forward , blushes and starts walking towards the bus with an unknown smile on her lips)

Rey - (leans on his Bike and keeps admiring her smile ) My Jhalli ...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was really nice.
Small fight between kraiyaansh and the bike ride ,i loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part. Pm me when you update it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ss continue soon and please pm me when you will update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nebu

It was really nice.

Small fight between kraiyaansh and the bike ride ,i loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next part. Pm me when you update it😊



Thanks a lot sweetheart 😳 !!!! Glad u liked it !!! 😃 !!! Pm pakka !!!
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Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome ss continue soon and please pm me when you will update



Thanks dear !!1 Wil surely Pm u 😃 !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice nice!!!pls pm me next tym u update!!!!loved d bike ride!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing ss and plzzz pm me when you will update
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GUD ONE DO PM ME FOR UR NXT UPDATE

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😃this is really good and please pm me when u update 👏
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Originally posted by: medha16

nice nice!!!pls pm me next tym u update!!!!loved d bike ride!!!!



Thanks sweets 😃 !!! Pm pakka 😊

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