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gud start..looking forward..
the enemies u refferred is maneet hai kya?
gud start..looking forward..
the enemies u refferred is maneet hai kya?
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Character sketch:
MAAN SINGH KHURANA:
a sweet guy. 24 years old. Always smiling n wants people around him to be happy n will do anything for that. He works for an NGO. He has a cute sis priya. He loves her to the core. He loves his mom,dad, daadi to the core.
PRIYA SINGH KHURANA:
very sweet girl. Loves her bro maan to the core. A very good friend of geet n treats her as her own sis. She is doing her engineering 3rd year.
RISHI SINGH KHURANA:
father of maan n priya. A very big business tycoon but down to earth. Loves his children to the core. But sometimes he will be strict.
POOJA SINGH KHURANA:
mother of maan n priya. She is so sweet. Loves her children to the core. She is a house wife. She pampers maan n priya a lot. Sometimes rishi has to control pooja rather than maan n priya.
SAVITRI SINGH KHURANA:
daadi of maan n priya. She is a sweet heart. Same as serial.
GEET HANDA:
very sweet, bubbly girl. Completed her achitecture. She is a sweet heart in her family. She loves her bro to the core. She annoys her mom by her pagalpan. Her father n brother pampers her.
YASH HANDA:
brother of geet. Loves geet to the core. He treats her as a princess. Completed his architecture n looking after his dad's business HANDA CONSTRUCTIONS. He loves his classmate meera. But no one knows about it other than geet.
MOHINDER HANDA:
father of geet n yash. He is the owner of HC. He treats geet as a princess. He is a jolly type person always smiling.
RANO HANDA:
mother of geet n yash. She is a house wife. Loves her children to the core. She is strict but a sweet heart.
Friends of maan n geet:
Adithya(adi) : a sweet person. He explains every thing in detail. All his friends call him as Mr. thesis.
Pari:she is a cool girl but she gets excited for small small things.
Sameera (sam): she is rich n full of attitude but a very nice girl.
Pinky : she is a sweet girl but a bit reserved. She dont talk much.
Rahul: he is a big big flirt but good by heart.
Dev : he is a tom boy. Always changing girl friends now n then. (not a brother of maan)
so friends this is the character sketch. guys u can imagine maan n geet's friends according to their attitude.
Chapter 1:
Maan came down with her mom n saw priys n rishi (dad) waiting for then near dining area.
Priya saw them n told to her dad
Lo dad aagaye dono maa aur bete. Dekho na dad maa kabhi bhi muje itni pyaar nahi karti. See how they r coming.
Maan rolled his eyes seeing his drama sis.
Y u bother about them dear I am there na. U r my princess told dad.
Maan n mom settled. Priya hugged dad sideways n sticked her tongue out.
Maan hugged maa sideways n did the same.
They both broke the hug n had breakfast.
So maan all ready to go to office asked dad.
Yes dad told maan.
Waise maan I know that for internship u wont join KC but why not HC asked dad.
Dad plzz dont talk about it now. I am in very good mood now told maan.
Dad rolled his eyes n continued eating but priya wanted to tease him so asked
but y maan bhai y dont u join HC.
Priya chup chap khalo told maan.
Nahi boliye na asked priya.
I dont want join HC because there PG will be there told maan.
PG?? all 3 shouted in unison.
Ha PG that pagal handa, geet.
Bhai she is so nice dont call her pagal told priya.
Oh plzz priya stop it now. See her nautanki always doing some mischief. Huh!!! told maan.
Waise I know she will be doing her intern in HC only so I dont want to see her face. Thats y I applied in other company.
Ha ha... aap tho koi mischief hi nahi karte. Agar hum iss age mein nahi kare tho kya old age mein karte hain retorded priya.
Priya I dont want to argue more about her told maan.
Ufff stop it u 2 chup chap khalo told dad.
Aap kyun dhante ho meri bachon ko asked maa.
Bhai let daadi come I will complain about u told priya making cute face.
Ha bolo waise daadi will only listen to me told maan.
Both glared at each other n ate their breakfast silently.
Ok maa I will leave now its getting late told maan.
Bye maan beta. All the best told maa.
Bye dad.
Bye son.
Bhai plzz drop me to college na asked priya.
Acha? I should drop u. really? Asked maan.
Plzz bhai pleeejjj asked priya cutely.
Maan smiled at her n told chalo.
Thanku bhai shuoted priya.
Bye maa, bye dad.
Maan n priya left from there. Maan took his bike out n started.
When priya was about to sit someone shouted
priya baby..
priya turned back n saw ramu kaka (driver) coming.
Priya baby main aapko drop kaata hu.
Nahi kaka main bhai ke saath chalti hu. Aapko aaj chutti enjoy kijiye told priya.
Acha thik hain agar aapko kuch chahiye muje call kijiye told ramu.
Thik hain kaka. Bye.
Maan n priya left from there.
Waise priya y u r not going by car today asked maan.
Kuch nahi bhai ramu kaka's wife is not well. I asked u to drop so that he can go home told priya.
oh... ok.
Maan dropped priya in her college n went towards office.
In handa mansion:
geet got ready n came down for breakfast. She is in a hurry she dont want to be late on the 1st day. She came running
arey princess slow told geet's dad.
Papa its ok. I am running late told geet.
Geet still time is there. Come sit n eat told yash.
Her mom served her breakfast. All started eating.
Geet y dont u join our company for intern asked papa.
Papa if I join our company then I will get special treatment I wont like that. I want to be myself told geet.
Papa felt proud of her.
But geet y not KC asked yash.
After seeing her reaction he literally slapped his head.
Veerji aapko pata hain na waha woo MK rahega told geet.
Thanku god for the first time u mentioned him as MK told yash.
Veerji dont be so happy MK ka matla maan khurana nahi hain told geet.
Yash frowned n asked then?
MK ka matlab MONKEY KHURANA hain told geet.
Yash sighed uff geet I dont understand y u fight so much.
Veerji kya main jhagda karti hu, main kuch bhi kaam karu always he will find faults. I just hate him. Grrr told geet.
Ok ok calm down told papa.
Geet, maan itna bhi bura nahi hain. He is a sweet boy tola mom.
Sweet boy?? my foot. Aapko uss monkey kis angle ke sweet lagta hain retorted geet.
Now all decided noy yo argue with her further about him. Geet peacefully ate breakfast.
Ok bye mom, bye dad, bye veerji told geet.
Bye princess in unison.
Yash hugged her n wished her
All the best princess. Agar tumko kuch problem hua tho muje call karna. Thik hain?
Ok veerji aap chinta mat karo. Bye.
Bye.
Geet left to office on her bike.
Outside the office:
all the friends r waiting for maan n geet n adi. Just then adi came
adi y u r late asked rahul.
Thats it adi started
kya karu yaar. When I started from home bike ka petrol katam ho chuka tha. Muje bike ke saath walking karna pada aur main petrol bunk gaya. I filled the tank n started. But ghar se office bohot durr hain na aur yeh traffic ja...
bas bas told rahul.
Yaar rahul ne kya poocha aur tum itna lamba explanation de rahe ho told sam.
Guys I am very excited. Yeh maan n geet abi tak nahi aya. I want to go inside told pari.
Pari cool yaar they will come n we can go inside told dev.
Waise do they know that, they both r in the same office asked pinky.
NOOO all shouted in unison.
Agar usko pata chala hum sab tho gaya told pari.
Ha yaar pata nahi ab kya hota. I think we have to watch other world war 14 ya 15 told pinky. (guya unn logon ka world war 3,4 '. katam ho chuka hain.. lolll)
guys dont worry u r creating scene before they come said sam annoyed.
All rolled their eyes.
Just then fortunately or unfortunately both maan n geet arrived at the same time on their respetive bikes.
Others r just praying to god.
They both parked the bike but didnt see each other still.
Maan came first n wished the gang.
Hii guys.
Just then geet came there n heard very unpleasant voice its none other than maan.
Geet(st) : yeh monkey khurana(MK) yaha kya kar raha hain. Shayad sabko wish karne ke liye aya hoga. Waise he is doing internship in his own company ek time wime nahi.
Geet too wished the gang.
Hii guys.
Even maan too heard very unpleasant voice. He closed his eyes in frustation.
maan(st): yeh pagal handa yaha kya kar rahi hain. Mera 1st day aur iska chehra dekhna padh raha hain. God plz save me. Shayad yeh sab ko wish karne ke liya ayi hogi. Waise she is doing internship in her own company ek time wime nahi.
He opened his eyes n both glared at each other.
Guys chalo andar chalte hain. Its getting late told maan n geet at the same time.
Thats it reality struck them. They rewined the voice which they heard.
Their eyes r widened in shock. Others closed their eyes in horror.
TUM YAHA KAAM KAR RAHE HO? Both maan n geet shouted on top of their lungs.
Precap:
maan n geet'a reaction.
hii friends here s part 1 of this FF. Hope u liked it. Waiting for ur response. Plz plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.
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-jyothi
Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams
Yayyy...me first 🥳Finally u updated this 😛Loved the Update Jyo 👏It was awesomeMonkey Khurana , Paagal Handa , WW 14 ya 15..you cracked me up!! 😆Aww...Priya is such a sweet heart!! 😊Both have such sweet families!😃Maaneet are each other's dushmans from the bottom of their heart 😆Waiting for their reaction...war of words 😆
Originally posted by: jyothikrish
aww.. thanks a lot nam dear...
loved ur comment.. hahaha.. kaisa laga maan aur geet ka naam...
ya ya they r dushmans... 😆
wait for word war... 😆
Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams
Haila world war??😲I hope they don't todo-phodo each other's heads during their MG war😆
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