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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Isn't it just too good?👏 You have a mature writing style.👍🏼Why don't you write an ff on SwaRon?

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ANTARA-2244
Isn't it just too good?👏 You have a mature writing style.👍🏼Why don't you write an ff on SwaRon?

She has doesnt she ? 😳

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Sakina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

*Bows*

And you choose to write on them,like,once in a blue moon.

This is CLASS stuff,Kanks-there's something really avante-garde about the way you write...pretty much satiric..Me likey.^_^

I loved the beginning.Thats what Sharon is,isn't she?She hurts herself in order to see who cares enough to come forward and protect her.

Though the write-up depicts Sharon,mainly...it reveals a lot about Swayam,indirectly,as to how well he knows the girl.How well he knows why she does the things she does.

That long-cherished desire of his,to be able to call Sharon as 'his' has been crushed long before..he's been hurt,time and again,to a point where he's almost reached this stage of plaintive reconciliation to the fact that he has no right over her.

But he can't help feeling for her,looking out for her,because he knows,that no one is ever going to ve able to understand,and love Sharon Rai Prakash like him-no one would see through the external,false layer of arrogance,no one would search for goodness even in the meanest of her actions,like he did.

But he's no God-he's very much human...because of whish there's still that tiny,precarious flicker of hope-precarious because it may fade away any moment.Yet,he tries.He tries to keep it alive.However,he's stopped letting it show.

Thats Swayam Shekhawat-poignant,plaintive,yet,ever-loving.

i loved how you expressed to much in such a concise way-it takes a great writer to do that.i'm wondering what you're gonna come up with after a few years,if this is what you're coming up with now.Masterpieces par excellence,i'd say.:)

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hkl75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

it felt as if swayam is sitting in the very same corridor where the chapter was closed, n talking his heart out when sharon said she is now with shivam!

dunno but strangely i saw swayam actually uttering these words in low voice as if he is afraid that some one might listen! as if he even dont wants his own heart, where shards of broken image lies... which once belonged to that girl whom he loved more than his life, unconditionally in the hope that one day she might understand they both r destined to be together!

HI5! U r a potterhead too! i loved when u compared hermione n swayam! both were always there for friends, gave them support, helped them whenever friends got into tight end, n moreover BOTH SUFFERED THE PAIN OF GETTING AVOIDED OR LOOSING THEIR SPECIAL ONE!

keep on writing! undoubtedly u wrote very precisely... not over exaggerated... simple n to the point n BULL'S EYE!!!