FF: My Maid (ArHi) Chapter 17- Pg.105

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~My Maid~

Character sketch:

Arnav Singh Raizada


Age: 25

He is the son of one of the most known entrepreneur and business in the U.K. He has lifestyle of a British citizen, but does have some Indian beliefs due to his parents. Arnav has everything he could have asked for, friends, family, money. However, he felt that there was something missing, something that he was unaware of.

Khushi Kumari Gupta


Age: 20

She is the daughter of one of the employees that worked at the Raizada house. Her family has served them for many years and now she is there to do the same. However, she does have her own dreams of being successful. Will she succeed? Or will she get distracted, by something or someone.

Arnav's friends:

Armaan Malik


Age: 24

He has the looks, and does get a lot of attention from girls. He is one of the hottest bachelors in town. However he still hasn't found someone special.

Akash Raizada


Age: 25

He is Arnav's cousin and usually is known as the most caring out of all of them. He is still single but doesn't really believe in love.

Karan Kapoor


Age: 24

This guy is the life of parties. He is the son of Ms. Archana Kapoor, one of the most known designers around. Karan loves his friends. You wonder what about family? Well the only love he gets from his family is money.

Vishal Singh


Age: 25

He is the one who doesn't run a family business. Vishal has been independent, and is the youngest businessman in town. This man has done all the work to create the business that he successfully runs.

I will be adding more characters later, but that depends on how you like the story.

*This fanfic will have mature content as it progresses so don't tell me I didn't warn you. 😛

If you want PMs then add me as your buddy. Thanks.

HAPPY READING 😃

Chapter Links:

Chapter 1 -Pg. 1

Chapter 2 -Pg. 3

Chapter 3 -Pg. 7

Chapter 4 -Pg. 10

Chapter 5 -Pg. 13

Chapter 6 -Pg. 17

Chapter 7 -Pg. 22

Chapter 8 -Pg. 27

Chapter 9 -Pg. 34

Chapter 10 -Pg. 41

Chapter 11 -Pg. 48

Chapter 12 -Pg. 55

Chapter 13 -Pg. 67

Chapter 14 -Pg. 76

Chapter 15 -Pg. 85

Chapter 16 -Pg. 92

Chapter 17 -Pg. 105


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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Prologue~

Arnav's parents called for a meeting in their living room, so they gathered all their employees (maids, butler, chauffeurs, guards, gardeners, cooks, etc.) to announce something.

"Okay since you're all here now, I would like to introduce Ms .Khushi Gupta to all of you" Arnav's dad said to them in a generous yet a deep tone. Arnav's dad was a business man but not the stereotypical one. He always had time for the family and made sure that their child had the right upbringing.

"She is the daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Gupta. They worked here before for 15 years so they are like family to us." said Mrs. Raizada who seemed to be delighted to have Khushi in the house.

Once Mrs. Raizada introduced Khushi to everyone, Khushi decided to introduce herself in her usual bubbly tone. "Hey I'm Khushi Gupta, but you can all just call me Khushi". This was Khushi Kumari Gupta, the person that was about to change the lives of the Raizada family.

Suddenly the main door of the house opened and then entered the most handsome looking males in the town. I mean who didn't know them? They were the sons of the top five Indian businessmen in the United Kingdom.

As they all stepped in Arnav asked "What's going on here?" in his usual calm tone. He was the son of Mr. and Mrs. Raizada, and probably the most good looking of all his other friends (well that depends on what kind of man you like :P )

"Oh finally you're here. Khushi darling come here, Erm I would like you to meet my only son Arnav" said Arnav's mom.

"Y-You!!!?." Khushi said shocked pointing her index finger to him, as if she had seen a ghost. However after a few moment she just looked at him and was completely lost. "WOW he is so damn hot, only if his personality was as nice as his face. Oh well his friends are quite hot too. Arghhh just shut up Khushi Kumari Gupta, and stop talking to yourself!"

"Huh? What? Do I even know you?! "Arnav replied grumpily raising an eyebrow at Khushi.

"You guys know each other?" Arnav's mum confusedly asked.

"No." Arnav immediately answered. "Tsk."

Khushi sighed, irritated at his attitude. "Aargh this jerk!" She whispered to herself.

"Okay' well, this is Khushi Gupta, and she is going to start working here from today onwards. So please be nice to her." said Mrs. Raizada in the softest tone possible.

"Yea, okay whatever.. guys come on let's go to my room" Arnav said as he commanded his mates to follow him walking away from them and everyone else sitting in the living room.


Please guys do tell me what you think. This is the first time I'm writing a story on this forum. So I really want to know if you would like me to continue. 😊

Edited by isha_95 - 14 years ago
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Aww a nice start and an interesting concept liking the characters and looks like arnaav has his asr attitude in this ff too lol 😉 but I'm sure khushi's charm will have some effect on him and hmm looks like she knows him from before but typical arnaav doesn't remember anyways great start looking forward to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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love the start please pm interesting concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting start.👏 You have got me curious to read more. Please make KHushi intelligent, because you said that she has dreams of being successful so she needs a good head on her shoulders too.Update soon.😃 Thanks.😉 Please PM me when you update.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~Chapter 1~


The boys walked away and went upstairs to Arnav's room hearing the maids softly whooping and gaping at their charms as the four pass through them.

When they're all in the room, they start to talk about the new maid at the mansion. "Dude, your new maid is so damn beautiful" Vishal said with a huge grin on his face.

"Hmm not really." Arnav replied while looking through a file.

"But I think she knows you, I mean bhai did you see the way she reacted when she saw you?" said Akash.

"Of course she knows us! Guys we're on the news and magazines all the time. She is probably just one of our fans." Arnav said and then smirked greedily.

"Arnav bro, I'm starving is there something we could eat here?" Armaan asked whilst rubbing his tummy.

"Seriously?? Hungry again? What kind of stomach do you have Armaan? You're always hungry!" Karan wailed.

"Wait I'll call someone, to get us something to eat." Arnav said grabbing the phone, and once he called there was someone talking on the other side straightaway. "Hey you're the new girl right? Can you come here upstairs to my room, quickly!" He demanded to Khushi with a small smile on his face.

As soon as the phone was put down, Khushi obliged and hurriedly went upstairs Arnav's room. Once she entered the huge room she straightaway said "Yes young master, what how can I help?"

"Get us something to eat!" Arnav demanded.

"What would you like to eat?" Khushi asked.

"Food! Food of course. Just get us anything okay." Khushi stood still and he started talking once again. "Well? What are you waiting for get it now, we are starving here'" Arnav said as grumpily as ever.

"Okay' Young Master." Khushi said then rolled her eyes and went to the kitchen. After ten minutes, she went back to his room with a tray on her hand.

"Why did you take so long??" Arnav said. "Are you a turtle, snail or something?"

"Here's your food..." Khushi said whilst putting the tray on the table.

"Wait! Hmm somehow you look very familiar have we met before?" Arnav suddenly asked, acting as if he was clueless.

"Err. Actually yes, you bumped into me at the shopping mall and just ignored me and walk away without saying sorry!" This time Khushi was annoyed, as he just reminded her of the incident, and this made her more furious at him.

"Oh cool' so? What's the problem with that?" Arnav asked acting like he didn't care.

Khushi was instantly annoyed at this and question him. "Aren't you going to apologise to me?" Getting no reply from him she spoke again. "Hello??? Are you dumb?"

"Why would I apologise? It was just an accident." Arnav said coolly and then continued eating the piece of cake Khushi had brought earlier.

"Arghhh! You stupid arrogant jerk!!" Khushi shouted at him, finally losing her cool.

"Excuse me? What did you just called me?" Arnav asked with his anger raging too.

"Are you deaf??? I said you are an arrogant jerk! Oh wait.. An asshole to be exact!" She glared at him.

The four men in the same room exchanged looks to each other and then looked at the couple arguing in front them. This was war.

"Youuu!!!" Arnav shouted glaring at her and this time he had really lost his temper.

"Arnav bro calm down'"Vishal said trying to sort out this stupid situation.

"No! this girl is really irritating me, and she is just a freaking maid." Arnav said while giving Khushi a dirty look.

"What? Are you going to hit me?... Oh come on! I'm not scared of you! JERK!" Khushi said smiling.

That's it. This is the first time a girl mocked him, and he was pissed off to the core. His blood was boiling and if she wasn't a girl, she would have been punched about 50 times by now.

Unaware of what to do in this situation Arnav just pulled her close to him and suddenly kissed her on the lips, without realizing what he was doing. When their lips touched both of their eyes widened in a horror. All of Arnav's friends stood up from their seats in complete shock as to what Arnav had just done.

"Oh noo. This is bad'" Armaan said looking at all his other mates

"Y-Yea" Vishal, Karan and Akash replied while staring at the two who had stopped kissing by now.

Chapter 2

Please guys really do need your opinion on this. Hope you people liked the 1st chapter. If you want me to continue then you know what to do. 😊

Edited by arhi01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -shamima-

Aww a nice start and an interesting concept liking the characters and looks like arnaav has his asr attitude in this ff too lol 😉 but I'm sure khushi's charm will have some effect on him and hmm looks like she knows him from before but typical arnaav doesn't remember anyways great start looking forward to read more 😊


Hey Im glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comments. lets see what happens next! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: zafi

Interesting start.👏 You have got me curious to read more. Please make KHushi intelligent, because you said that she has dreams of being successful so she needs a good head on her shoulders too.Update soon.😃 Thanks.😉 Please PM me when you update.😊


Yep I think Khushi is going to be intelligent but lets see :) I shall write more when more people want to read, so you might have to wait hehe. but hey 1st chapter is up hope you enjoy :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

love the start please pm interesting concept

Aww thanks. I'm glad you liked it! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story 😊
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Wow, He kissed her.👏👏👏👏👏 You are too nice.😃 Thanks for that. I was looking for rabba ve but a kiss is better.OMG get Khushi to slap him. I always wanted her to do that in the serial after all the nasty things he says to her. This is so exciting.Update soon thanks.😉

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