First Take - 5th September - Page 4

Tanths, replied to your post...🤣

Quite proud as I made no sense but enjoyed the freedom to express an opinion...😎 😆

As usual loved how u wrote it...🤗

Originally posted by: tanthya

But that is the point, Sharu..La does not even know what aarathi is but knows Nidhrmagan ...that did not go well with what she is supposed to be ..


**fervently ** N I want ASR to be ASr and not turn into love sick puppy with no brains..they have to keep him the same old strong, aloof self with a dash of softness

@bold , thats will not happen at least till 2nd anniversary.
but he can still be in love with brains na 😆
he will be old strong , aloof self and dash of softness 😲 you explained Arnav in these words
he will be all this confusing and troubling Kushi 😭

Originally posted by: starlight123

Tanths, replied to your post...🤣

Quite proud as I made no sense but enjoyed the freedom to express an opinion...😎 😆

As usual loved how u wrote it...🤗

Sheens,

welcome for bravely venturing here...wil read ur post in a moment..enjoy urself..😃

Originally posted by: tanthya

Sheens,

welcome for bravely venturing here...wil read ur post in a moment..enjoy urself..😃

as long as there is high tea..I'll get comfy...No Sax but Aman for me..😉

Do u want me to post it here as well??

Originally posted by: starlight123

as long as there is high tea..I'll get comfy...No Sax but Aman for me..😉

Do u want me to post it here as well??

NP...Sure do !!

Here is the masterpiece...🤣




I was actually glad that it picked up from right where it left off.. ..Continuity was there !!...Epi began with Khushi narrating the the origin of Janmashtami to a baffled n clueless La ..This whole thing eats up almost 3-4 mins ...


My gripe : Did the story telling really need such a long duration, could not it be shortened and quicken the pace...La could not even understand a simple 'Aathwa' but she was right at home with Nidra magan, nishchith etc ..Second what is with khushi jumping atop a coffee table and then jumping on to the couch with Jhoothi on ...Simply not done esp when Nani approves her bec she is the cultured girl...


Blooper ... The channa disappeared when Khushi was narrating but re-appeared after the recital when she goes to attend the phone !!


Loved , loved the nok-jhok of ARHI thru the Phone convo, his curt rejoinders to her sharp bites ...but I could not fathom why Nani has to leave at the same time as Anjali, La [ ofc so that Khushi gets to pick that phone ] ..could have been better handled..


The second scene I loved was the Makkan Scene .. The wary,cautious, haunted look of Arnav to the awareness in Khushi , the puzzlement in her eyes at the 'Awareness" ..the fortunate slipping and Arnav clasping her securely by his arms, not wanting to let go... the return of reality, Khuhsi sliding away from his grasp...well executed !!

Arnav's embarrassment when Anjali queries the reason for the scattered flowers ..Superb ! The walking away without answering, his abrupt stop and glancing back when Khushi says that she needs to speak to Anjali..wondering whether Khushi Kumari Gupta will be narrating the Phoolwala Hug .. barun was good !!

Blooper : The Mysterious case of appearing and disappearing Mobile


His return to needle Khushi , to get a rise out of her ,to provoke her ..his intention completely blocked by Nani .. Just loved this segment..


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Question is why is La-----[dont know her full name...😆] a typical airhead who is clueless on all matters cultural related..Does an outfit reflect your conduct and upbringing???

My explaination is that she was not teaching her student but teaching the audience what Janmashtami means..We are her students and not just that girly..

Rest I have to take your word on because without watching the secret nnok jhok, I cant comment...But my question is for how long will the viewers tolerate it and would like the love story to progress between the two leads..The viewers are an impatient lot and they would want some more than hidden glances..

As a relative new serial such bloppers are uncalled for...Its at the start the CVs take care of details but as the serial progresses, they become careless..The focus should not be on bloppers but context..They need to heed and rectify the matter

I still maintain ASR will be a shadow of himself in the near future..I think he is as good as a love interest and that what attracts the audience to him..

I loved the phone convo too.. and so funny of Khushi telling Arnav that see.. i told you. but Arnav cuts the phone ;))