||Abhi Nikki Writing Challenge 2|| - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
@khushboo: Yeah they both arent realising but they are falling for each other in their own ways :) If I am not wrong exams arent until feb/march right :) so i have enough time to stretch this drama :P kidding. Just one more part and then the part after that would reveal most of the stuff

@mitzi: You can still post nice comment again :) i am all game or nice comments :)

@Honey: When are you going to update? you need to make A and N love again right .. there isnt enough time :)

@Neha: Suspense would be revealed in 2nd part from now.

@Namy: Thank you for wonderful comment but more than that thanks because you are the only one seem to be appreciating the fact that i havent revealed suspense yet :) Rest all seem to be in hurry ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Pri...oh yes my exams are in March. But that's not the point, since I've my Pre-Tests from 8th August! :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
pri .. reveal or not , dont end it soon ... its really good and mysterious ! and will hopefuly get sweet and romantic soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello my friends sorry for doing this here 😊but wanted to invite u all in khushboo birthday celebration so friend plz do visit this thread and wish khush a very happy birthday 😉😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pri , Honey , update nahi deni .. to koi message to do !
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG. wow. I feel kinda brainless at the moment. I didn't even kknow about the second writing challenge😳 What world have I been living in since...February 🤣


Anywho! OMG. hehe I'm quite excited to read all these entries! Expecially cause that *tentative deadline* is the 1st ^_^

I shall be back with comments and so on.

Hehe just commenting now to have this in my My Posts section :)

Cheers!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mitzification

Pri , Honey , update nahi deni .. to koi message to do !

busy yaar...will try to update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey ppl me back with my second part
hope you all like it

Should I tell her( part 2)

Nikki struggled a lot with Abhi to leave her hand but Abhi was not ready to let go. Nikki ordered Abhi," Abhi, leave me ". Abhi didn't reply just kept holding her hand. Nikki again asked him angrily," leave". Drops of water were still falling on them. Abhi answered this time," Not till you listen to me ". Nikki got frustrated and pulled her hand away and shouted out loud" listen to what Abhi, what ". Abhi was totally shocked at her aggressive reaction. Nikki continued in her tender tone looking with pain into his eyes.," what ? …. to listen that you had someone in your life , I know that and I am ok with it . But why are you trying to explain it , what's the need of telling me that , how ever s your past relationship was, I don't want to listen, never ever." Abhi was regretting even starting this topic. " it kills me inside , I can't and I don't want to imagine you with any one else, it pierce me, it makes me mad that you had someone in your life ,still you want to tell me." she cried out saying this. " Why do you want me to know that you loved someone , you were close to her , you lived with her , you touched her , hugged her ……" Nikki's tone rose a few notches"….. kissed her……… I can't stand all this."

Abhi now wanted to kill himself for telling Nikki. How could he , he knew that she couldn't hide her emotions and still he told her. Nikki stopped crying and stepped ahead to cross Abhi. Abhi stopped her holding her from her waist. He was looking at Nikki but Nikki had averted her eyes. "Abhi, please I beg you, no more" Nikki pleaded. Abhi answered," something more needs to be said". Niki looked at Abhi and answered "I don't want to hear". She tried to move but Abhi engulfed her more strongly in his arms and with his angry, sexy and deep eyes he said" you have to" .Nikki could not open her mouth in front of her hot wet husband, he was killing her softly. " you have to listen " .As he observed that Nikki was ready to listen to him he started " Yes its true I had someone in my life …"Nikki closed her eyes and Abhi noticed that and continued "….but she was never near to my life" Nikki opened her eyes and looked at Abhi, Abhi slowly let her out of his embrace. Nikki kept on looking in those true deep brown sexy eyes." It's true I loved someone earlier…." Nikki lowered her eyes hearing this , trying to swallow this information.".. but when you came in my life I concluded that it was not love, as I had never felt for her the way I feel for you. He said coming more and more close to her, drops of water falling on their body were now failing to cool down their mutualdesire. "Yes its true I was close to her, but that closeness failed to bring her close to my heart , to connect her to my heart the way it is connected with you " Abhi said, his glittering eyes capturing her eyes. Thier closeness was making it difficult for both to stay a minute away from each other, their hearts now started beating fast, faster than ever before. They were able to hear each others heart beat,, making them realize that their hearts are connected. Before Nikki shed down she turned. Abhi continued" Yes I had touched her…" he came close to her making Nikki feel his proximity, her breath got fast with every passing second. " But it was feeling less, but when I touch you it fascinates me towards you" .Saying this Abhi moved his hand at Nikki back from left side to right side moving her hairs to her right side and with his hand moving on her body her heart started beating more rapidly." Hugging her never gave me happiness ,as I get when I hug you" saying that he placed his arms around her waist and rested his face on her shoulder . That made Nikki to take a deep breath." Yes I had kissed her…"Nikki closed her already closed eyes tighter."..but it never gave me the unbeatable pleasure and love when I kiss you Nikki" saying this he slowly put his lips on her neck .Nikki got mesmerize by his kiss as someone had given her all she wants. Abhi pulled back " yes it's true, I had loved someone but when you came in my life ,you made me realized that I was wrong as I had never loved her the way I love you ,what I feel for you is totally different from what I used to feel for her. And now after spending about an year with you, I can say that what I feel for you is true love and just love" he said with all emotions poured into it. A tear from her closed eyes fell down her cheek. As Abhi saw that he wiped that tear with his lips. Water came to his eyes too" Please Nikki, don't punish me like this." Abhi's emotional voice made Nikki open her eyes. Abhi cupped her face in his hands and asked" Nikki I love you…" saying this a tear fall from their eyes and they rested their forehead on each other's"… I belong to you and that I know."

They stood like that for around five minutes with their closed eyes and then hugged each other. Like thye had met after a long sepration. After sometime they faced each other. Nikki saw drops of tears in Abhi's eyes. She wiped it with her face. And Abhi smiled on that. Seeing him smiling a smile captured her face. And both loved this moment. " I am sorry" Nikki said in her cute baby voice . Abhi smiled. and said," shah...". and hugged her . " well, for troubling me so much ,you should get some punishment " Abhi poked her.Nikki came out of his arms and confused asked" punishment"." yup" Abhi answered .Nikki got stern " what " . Abhi in his most romantic manner." well to be with me now and forever ." Nikki smiled and they kissed each other passionately. And they were lost in the moment without realizing that both were under shower from last half hour. No one was ready to break their kiss but when the oxygen demand alarmed them Nikki pushed Abhi and said," stop" and she smiled and turned to move but Abhi tried to stop her and held the open end of towel wrapped on her body . Nikki got shocked by that. she turned her face to Abhi holding her towel," Abhi , Abhi ,leave me " . " aacha ," sorry that I can'tdo" in a naughty mannner.Nikki warned him" Abhi don't you dare" ." challenging huh, poor you " Abhi said with his never going down attitude. Abhi pulled Nikki's towel and Nikki in try to saving her towel landed in his arms. Nikki closed her eyes." never dare me you know,I always win" Abhi said in his husky voice. Nikki opened her eyes. Abhi brought Nikki close to him looking in her eyes, she was helpless in front of those killing eyes and surrendered herself to him . Abhi picked her in his arms and took her to their bedroom. Abhi put Nikki down on the bed and climbed in himself, he come to Nikki , drawn by her dazzling big eyes, her wet hair ,her glowing skin. looking in her eyes Abhi said" love you thank you for being mine". " Love you too, thanks for coming in my life " and they kissed each other and the night continued for them.

do comment and like if you do.

next part to come , but don't ask me when 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow richa awesome part loved it cont soon
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Part 7

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Part 8

It was time for the meeting to discuss the new Sanjivani project and yet Niki had not come. This girl is never going to learn value of time. He thought as he closed his laptop and relaxed in his chair. As he closed his eyes the Panchgani memories came rushing back. Since morning he had been trying to focus on work but all he thought about was the time spent with Niki. His heart felt happiness that his head was forbidding. In this battle between heart and head no one was winning. He wondered if the decision to take Niki in this project is right one or just a desire that his head was somehow tricked into approving. Shaking his head and convincing himself that it was in best interest of project and nothing else, he opened his eyes hastily.

***

She rushed to Abhimanyu's cabin. She was late. Atul had informed her about the New Sanjivani project and the meeting with Modi but she had been too busy looking at goodies in the basket. And when everyone reminded her of the time, it was way past the meeting time. Around half an hour back when she had learnt about the project she was happy that Abhimanyu had chosen her. Atleast he felt that she was worthy of something. But now all that was in jeopardy. It wouldn't take a minute for him to pounce on her and tell how she is irresponsible and what not. She knocked and entered his cabin.

I know I am late and I am sorry.

She didn't let him talk at all. Playing with her own fingers and looking at them she almost whispered

Thanks for choosing me.

He saw her cheeks turning red as she thanked. Her face radiated happiness and satisfaction that she felt for being chosen for this project but he was not ready to let go his anger. Probably that was the only way to keep his emotions in line. Keeping his face devoid of any emotions he said in little harsh tone:

As usual you are late.

She looked up and anger taking over whatever she had felt a moment ago, she retorted

If you see so many mistakes in me why did you choose me for this project?

He was taken aback for a second but he covered that up easily:

I am wondering same thing, probably'

Before he could say anything further his cellphone ring took his attention. She saw a glimpse of panic on his face. Wondering what it could be she kept her ears sharp.

Ok I am coming right now.

That was all she heard him speak into the phone and he was already taking strides towards his cabin door.

What was it that the other person on the phone told him that he even forgot that he was in the meeting? The usual professional Modi, asking everyone to switch off mobile phones on duty, not only attended this call but was stepping out of his cabin without speaking a word as if he has forgotten world around him. As she saw him rush out of his office, she decided to follow him and see what was going on.

***

The sight in front of her was shocking. She even felt a pang in her heart when she saw Abhimanyu with tears rolling down his face, holding hands of a young beautiful woman who seemed really sick and unconscious.

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Part 9

Edited by anotheranfan - 14 years ago

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