Letting You Go. //Arnav&Khushi OS.

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Sunaina Mitra

@sunaina02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Very well-written - very touching - a sad ending to a happy love-story

👏👏👏👏

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Jahnvi

@-Jahnvi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Marvelous. Simply marvelous.
The emotions of the characters were very well written, Sabi. You've done a great job and I would love to see you write more OS'.

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

That was tooo sad🥺
I love that song from Dosti but at the same time, I hate watching it😆
I suppose it is because of the heartbreaking element.
Can u continue this OS and somehow...turn it into a positive ending😆
I loved your writing...u captured the very essence of what it feels like to lose the one you love...now I will always recall this story when I hear that song😃

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

finally edited 🥳

firstly here's one jadooki juppi for my lil giggly girl

oh man wat an os omg i ws constantly starin at da lappy screen in disbelief of da twist u'v brought in. shyam & kushi?!?!? not in my wildest dreams i expected dese two get hitched!!! it ws always arnav & kushi plus even if shyam liked her, i didn't expect kushi to forget arnav and move on. dat's pretty huge and too huge to sink in my heart for sure 😕 i felt really very bad for my angry arnav babu 😭

dis bit really made me senti...

- He wasn't meant to be standing there watching, he was meant to beparticipating. This was meant to be his wedding, she was meant to be his bride -

- She was meant to be his bride, she was meant to be sitting next to him at the mandap. He was meant to be rolling his eyes at all the mantras, but smiling all the same. She was meant to be blushing when he looked her way, his heart reflecting in his eyes -

u'v grasped da subconscious of dese two dreadful souls beautifully. i felt like i watched a maha epi of ipkknd 😳 it ws dat good... in fact good is such an understatement for dis os, i must use da word 'greatestESTestEST'...

ur interpretation and descriptions were out of dis world sabi 😍 im still very much in awe of wat i grasped from ur wonderful os. i kept thinkin wat could'v happened for arnav to let kushi slip away from his life like dis 😕 and then i realized it's just an os...

u'v got me spell bound here giggly... im totally doomed on dis side wanderin wat happened and wat could'v happened vice versa. im anyway tensed abt da show as to wat'l happen next and now da tension has reached a whole new level tnx to ur splendid os...

do write more and keep me informed pls...

mwaaah

jalebi 😉

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AnotherAdmirer

@AnotherAdmirer

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Heyy Sabi..Luvly OS!

I really liked the narration...u portrayed it all so well, i could imagine everythin, the picture was so clear..more importantly it was all so subtle n painful..not much angst..just hints..that added to the beauty of it, Everything was so still, yet their hearts were raging and opposing their minds. Luvly piece of work! Do write more =)

Love

Zee 😳

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

This is so sad yet so beautiful .. I will come back and edit

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OMGG first of all you need to write more OS's Khushi bhabhi because you write well .. and maybe OS's that you read and make you Khush🤔😆 But I love tragic & sad stories like these😆😆 The title itself is very sad😒 Reminds me of this quote that just makes me even more sad

"If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they're yours. If they don't, they weren't never yours" or something like that😆 And the reason I feel more sad is because Khushi is leaving Arnav, but she never returns to him .. so it's like they were never meant to be😳 And WHY? Why Shyam🤢 Like you could have made up a character

Alright so like I said, I would read this OS again but listening to the song 'Ishq na Ishq ho kisi se' .. what a SAD song .. I never listen to it because just makes me feel terrible

"I'm sorry I didn't get to you in time. I'm sorry I didn't tell you I loved you more than anything. But most of all, I'm sorry that I didn't fight for you the way I promised." 🥺

The way you expressed their feelings was perfect .. you could actually feel their pain! The most difficult part for me to read was when Arnav was watching Khushi get married😵 It was soo painful ..

"I'm sorry I didn't wait for you. I'm sorry that I didn't give you a chance to tell me how you felt. But more than anything, I'm sorry that I let you go so easily." 🥺🥺

Can you write more?😳 You write sooo beautifully😍

Lots of love

Akash🤗

Edited by KaShBaarish..xx - 14 years ago

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

edited my comment...

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: itstheclimb
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Gharwali if your letting him go yourself, and marrying Shyam i have no problem, Ahh finally Arnav is all MINE☺️

Jokes aside, A very painful OS, but i guess its just preperation for what is yet to come, I'm sure it'll alot more painful. Sabi what have you done yaar, made me all tearful through this OS of yours. His silent love and her going away, its all so hard isn't it to watch the one you love walk away.

And the name what can i say its perfect for this, but i have to say letting go is not something you do one day and forget its a everyday process and very hard to erase...!😳😳

Anyway Beautiful OS, &&thankyou for sharing it with us. I hope to see alot more of there wonderful suprises.

Takecareee :))

LY

ROFL. Keep dreaming. This was only because Arnav made me mad when I wrote it. So I stuck my tongue out at him, and wrote this. You know I hate Shyam more than anyone else does. LOLL.
So you can stay a baharwali, alright baharwali? :P

I definitely agree it was painful.. I was a bit shocked at the end product. But how could I resist?
I made you tearful? *shocked face* F***! I'm so going to have to make a happier, fluffier one now. :)
I've watched the one I love walk away, so I know exactly how it feels. & it's something that beats at you for almost forever.

Thanks so much for commenting Sanam, means a lot coming from you. :D I will write more as I feel emotional.

LYmore. <33

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -AdiYalicious-
OMG :( !! I told u How i Feel :( !!
Hate u :( !! im Still cryin <3 !!

Even tho i love Sad stuff buh Not completely :( !!! tho u r right ! ArHi r a sad couple ! so We cant xpect sumfin Happy so quick :/ !!
Loved it <3

Buaaa, mat ro na!

ArHi are a sad couple.. and right now all they do is argue.. yeh pyaar kab hoga? Hmph. *sigh*

Thanks so much beautiful. ILY. <33

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: deepti_mohit
res :(🤗

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wat to say im speechless🤔 regarding this os ...okie putting on my thinking cap🤓 ..it was beautful...the way u wrote it was amazing ..i could actually see everything happening in my mind's eye ..u portrayed n described the emotions really well 😍 though it was a sad os i couldn't stop drooling over the way of ur writing😍..i was amazed by the way u used ur words ...everything was perfect ...while reading i could feel the emotions , feelings n the pain the main characters are going through , some words that caught my eye the most are involuntary shudder, broken look😍...it really touched my heart❤️...u expressed the feelings way better than the actual characters would do😳...amazing , beautfiul ..i am out of words to describe this os ..all i can say is i hope this doesn't happen in the show :(..that to not too quick :( this mite ruin the stryline...

okie enough of my thinking cap 👎🏼...back to crazy mode ..tune aise kyun kiya mere saath
😭mein us os mein dance bhi nahi karsakti 😭...aur mere shyam ko tune khushi ko dedi 😈😭..mujhe nahi pata tha tu usse shaadi karna chahthi hai😭<---- i know im being crazy😆 chill mazaak karrahithi ..actually apne character mein serious hogayi thi😆 ...but seriously beautiful os😍...ur an amazing writer keep writing more warna dhamki deti rahoongi😈..n acha kiya tune post kiya warna😈 ...😆... oye itna lamba hogaya😲.mein bhi na pagal hoon😆..bore karrahi hoon tujhe😆...keep smiling :) n giggling😆
i love you🤗❤️

-Anjali Di😳❤️

You are so cute Anju Di!! ❤️

Okay, thinking cap comment: Thanksss so much beautiful. I pictured everything as well. Almost started crying. Picturising Arnav crying was definitely hard.. but I could see it.
What I love about writing is that you can go in-depth with how someone's feeling.. it's harder to capture it on-screen for sure.. and sometimes the conveyed emotion isn't what you'd expect. With writing, you know what to capture.. and it was all memories I wanted to capture.
I doubt the s/l would move that quickly.. if this OS does happen, it shouldn't be for another yr at the very least. Arnav doesn't even know Khushi's name yet! & there is no way I will allow Shyam to take off with Khushi. Like EWWW. *shudders*

Non-thinking cap comment: Arrey Di, hamari jo next OS hogi na, aap khub dance karna. *giggles*
Haye Devi Maiya, aise kaisi soch sakti hai Di? Shyam ke saath shaadi = hamari barbadi.

Aur yeh dhamki yahan nahi chalti. *rolls eyes* Acha, chalti hai. Lekin ek shart par.. aap ko bhi likna padega. :D

ILYjaana!!

Tumhari Khushi. <33 🤗