Mayur Karwachauth Celebration - MY FIRST OS :) - Page 6

that was so simple n cute cute 😆 loved reading it :) keep writing :)

Diiiiiiiiiiiii yaar mujhe bhi nahi bataye ke aap itna accha likh leti hain???😡

Lols i read this yesterday through my phone but could not comment....so thought I should comment today...better late than never na??

Waise...aap bohot jhakas story likh leti hai, mein keh rahi hoon....😃😃

It was a beautiful OS Di and I believe you should write more...the emotions were so beautifully portrayed that i could actually see what was going on as i read this😃😃😃

You should definitely write more.....😃😃 Mein ek OS ki request karoon aapse??😃😃

wow

raman

finally on os from you

and i can't believe it's ur first attempt

truly magical yaar

loved it like anything

Originally posted by: myownarea

that was so simple n cute cute 😆 loved reading it :) keep writing :)

Thanks Divya for liking it .. it was just a little try but i am happy people r liking it ..but i do not think we r going to get Mayur Karwachauths.. CVs ka deemag dead body main laga hai..

Originally posted by: amyluvsmayur

Diiiiiiiiiiiii yaar mujhe bhi nahi bataye ke aap itna accha likh leti hain???😡

Lols i read this yesterday through my phone but could not comment....so thought I should comment today...better late than never na??

Waise...aap bohot jhakas story likh leti hai, mein keh rahi hoon....😃😃

It was a beautiful OS Di and I believe you should write more...the emotions were so beautifully portrayed that i could actually see what was going on as i read this😃😃😃

You should definitely write more.....😃😃 Mein ek OS ki request karoon aapse??😃😃

Hai Amy... u r the one who r known for writing good arti or mayur OS ... main to bas free thee likh diya.... I am glad u like it ... thanks a lot

Mein ek OS ki request karoon aapse??😃😃.. Kaun sa OS???

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

wow

raman

finally on os from you

and i can't believe it's ur first attempt

truly magical yaar

loved it like anything

Thanks yaar for liking it ... it was just an attempt... 😊😊

Originally posted by: Ritu.mjhtrv

Hai Amy... u r the one who r known for writing good arti or mayur OS ... main to bas free thee likh diya.... I am glad u like it ... thanks a lot

Mein ek OS ki request karoon aapse??😃😃.. Kaun sa OS???

Hmmmm soch ti hoon mujhe aapse kaun sa OS likhwana hai...phir bataungi...thik hai??

And yeah, Di, you write awesomely....never forget that😃😃

Originally posted by: sireeluvarti

Ritu i would have kept all the cv team under your supervision if i am the producer of mjht.

Cv's never will think such beautiful things for mayur.Hope we get this soon.Plz mail it to gautam hedge,fanmail,put it in starforum of miley jab hum tum,sushmithaji id etc etc

Thanks yaar for liking it ... i was just a simple try .... an attempt..