Mayur Karwachauth Celebration - MY FIRST OS :)

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Mayur Karawachath Special:- GUYS We have allready got beuatiful karwachauth OS from Yamini and Nikhila ,I tried something tooo as i wanted long long time ago.. Holiday per hooo to i am using my time and wrote something very simple ( i m not good in expressing my views but tried ) ..Hope u like it agar like nahi bhee kiya to i will try harder next time. Please do not forget to leave honest opinion only if u want.😊

26th October Karwachauth Morning Scene:- Mayur house

Its early morning, Nupur woke up bit early , mayank was holding her so tight , she could not let her go, she tried but mayank was holding her more tight and atlast she managed and gave sweet morning kiss on mayanks forehead and looked at mayank ( he was sleeping peacefully with a smile ). Nupur looked at him smiling and said to herself that she is very lucky to have a husband like mayank and she will make today is as special as she can to make their life more beautiful.

Nupur got ready, went to the kitchen, made breakfast for mayank and came to say bye to mayank. Mayank was still sleeping, first time he did not hear alarm, Nupur came to their bedroom and saw mayank sleeping.

Nupur: Mayank wakeup.. college nahi jana hai

Mayank:- nahi.. aaj subah class nahi hai, der se jaoonga

Nupur :-kyon

Mayank:- Shukla sir wanted to take lecture in the morning so I gave him my slot

Nupur :- talking to herself.. Shukla ko ghar jana hai naa wife ke liye , karwachauth

Mayank:- Tumne kuch kaha

Nupur :- Tum kab aaoge ghar college se

Mayank:- aaj der se aaonga

Nupur:- jaldi aa jana please

Mayank:- Miss karti ho naa tu mujhehamehsa

Nupur:- yes , suno main college jaldi ja rahee kyonki shukla sir ka class hai , maine breakfast kar liye hai , tumhara table per rakh diya hai

Mayank:- Main drop kar deta hoo naa

Nupur :- Rules banyaa hai to nibhana bhee hain naa, i can go by taxi, tum breakfast kar lena..maine kar liya hai

Mayank:- Okay Mrs sharma.. and gave her kiss on her cheek

26th October Karwachauth :- Excel College Scene

Nupur n Gunjan are sitting in cafeteria and Gunjan asked her to have a juice or eat something.. Nupur made excuse again..

Gunjan-Di aap khana ke liye naa kar rahee ho

Nupur:- Subah se pet gadbad hai

Gunjan= doctor ke pass chale

Nupur-nahi .. breakfast kiya hai but ab nahi kha sakti

Gunjan- juice to pee lo

Nupur :- Get irritated and said nahi peena hai

Gunjan :- Okay ..Gunjan bit suspicious with Nupur behavoiur

Then they left for Classes Lekin Nupur kee halat kharab hai , she was hungry and thirsty but keep smiling . Mayank is at the college, busy with his lectures and when he got free around 3.00 PM after his classes , got SMS from Nupur saying Lunch kar lia hai Roash ke sath J aur tum bhee kha lena kuch , Sham ko milte hai Mr Sharma , he started looking for Nupur, he could not find her anywhere.. then he met Gunjan and asked her about Nupur,

Gunjan:- Di ka class finish ho gaya , ghar chali gaye

Mayank:- Mujhse mile bagair

Gunjan:- Oh .. didi aaj kuch kha pee bhee nahi rahe hai

Mayank- Bit surprised to hear because he just recieved sms from regarding having lunch with Roash.

Mayank met Roash in the corridor and asked them how was ur lunch with nupur and what did she eat ( Mayank was bit suspicious now after talking to Gunjan). Roash said they did not have lunch with Nupur today. Mayank is angry and thinking why did Nupur lie to him but he went to take his lecture. After lecture, everyone is sitting in the staffroom including Shukla Sir. Shukla Sir is smiling and ready to go home

Shukla Sir:-Mayank why r u not going home.. nupur bhushan sharma will be waiting for u specially today

Mayan:- Mujhe ek ghante ka bahut important kam hai

Shukla:- Aaj ke din bhee important

Mayank- aaj kya hai

Shukla- Saal main ek hee din aisa hai jab meri Biwi mera intejaar karti hai

Mayank-Aisa kyhon

Shukla- aapko to kuch bhee nahi pata , naye jamane ke log hai

Mayank:- Aaj kya hai

Shukla ' Aaaj her married ladkee ka special din hai apne pati ke liye

Mayank:- Aaj kya hai '. He is getting impatient

Shukla- Karwachauth

Mayank:- OMG .. isliye nupur subah se avoid kar rahee hai. Kuch nahi khaya hai

Shukla ' Kya hua

Mayank:- Mujhe apna important kam cancel karke abhee ghar jana hai .. bahut kuch karma hai aaj ke din

26th October Karwachauth Evening :- MAYUR HOUSE

Nupur is very hungry and looking pale but very excite to celebrate karwachauth for her husband after three years. She has been keeping fast for the past three without him but today is very special.. she wants to make it more special and has some plan.

She decorated thali, puja ghar and her bedroom and terrace where she can do her puja . She sticks notes for Mayank to get ready , put cloths for him, and direct him to come to the terrace. Nupur got ready, wearing red saree, backless blouse, wet hair and red bindi , bangles, jewellery and looking stunning on her special day. She did not put sindoor and mangalsutra..( do not know why ). She is waiting for her husband eagerly. Mayank came home exactly around 6.00 PM quietly, set the table for his wife quietly so they can have dinner together, went to their bedroom, saw it was decorated and looking beautiful, read the sticky note and instruction and followed his wife instruction happily.

He got ready and went upstairs ( terrace ) and was stunned to see his wife , nupur was looking at moon and keep thanking God to her a life partner like Mayank said Bhagwan mujhe her janam mai aisa pati dena ,

Nupur was looking at moon and tears were coming , she was feeling very lucky to be with her husband today, Nupur Moon ko dekh rahee so mayank could not see her face but quietly went and hugged her from back and gave her kiss.

Nupur:- mayank tum aa gaye

Mayank- main to yahi thaa

Nupur- han tum yahi raho, kahin nahi jane doongi aaj, 3 saal baad aisa din aaya hai, tears were coming

Mayank:- Nupur main hoo naa ab aur hamesha rahoonga and hugged her tightly.

Nupur:- I love u mayank

Mayank- I love u more mrs sharma

Nupur ' Okay ' aaj ke din tum jo bolo woh main maoongi and getting shy

Mayank:- You r looking stunning, mujhe nahi malooom thaa fasting main koi itna khoobsurat kaise lag sakta hai

Nupur:- Puja suru karte hai nahi to main faint hone waliee hoo

Mayank:- Ek minute. Kuch missing hai, tum 2 min wait karo

Nupur :- Kya

Mayank:- Wait karo

Mayank went inside and came back quickly and told Nupur to close her eyes

Mayank:- Nupur apnee aankhe band karo

Nupur :- Kyon

Mayank:- Karo yaar

Nupur :- OK

Mayank opens sindoor box and put sindoor on Nupur and then magalsutra tooo and and asked her to open her eyes.

Terrace per mirror bhe hai ' mera imaginations

And took Nupur infront of Mirror and told her, you are looking complete now..and more prettier ..and I want to see u like this

Nupur :- Surprised and smiling with tears hugged him again and bola bhookh lagi hai , Puja kare

Then she started all karwachauth Ritual and did puja, mayank ne pani peelaya and she broke her fast and they hugged each other . Mayank promised to Nupur that next time he will fast for her too. He has lost three precisous years without her not do not want to take any risk, Nupur was looking at him and said Hai Mere Raaj.

Last Surprise :- Mayank bring Nupur downstairs.. Dinner table is ready and mayank lighten the candle and ask his wife to sit down as he is going to feed her. She does it as it was instructed and mayank sat with her and fed her and it was very special dinner.

After dinner, Nupur went to change , Mayank is waiting in the bedroom, bedroom was decorated nicely by Nupur, Nupur in her pink nighty but today she is looking very pretty with sindoor, mangalsutra and bangles with open hair, she is looking like a newly married bride and mayank could not take his eyes off from her and her beauty. Both of them lying on the bed and holding each other and Mayank is admiring his wife and her beauty

Mayank:-Nupur u r the most beautiful girl I have married and I m very lucky to have u.Mere liye puja rakha.. thank you nahi boloonga..yeh bahut kam hai but i am very lucky ,.... be with me always

Nupur- Shy as usual and said aaj mere married life complete ho gayee.. i always wanted to do this 😊

Mayank:- Meri ankho main dekho

Nupur: - Nupur is shy but lookingat mayank

Mayank:- Ek promise karo

Nupur ;- kya mayank

Mayank:- you will neverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr stop loving me and will never leave me again.. 3 saal main tumse kaise door raha hoo main hee janta hoo..Please never leave me again.. i m nothing without u ...u complete me

Nupur ' never ever .. sapno main bhee pyar karna nahi chodoongi tumhe mr sharma.. Mayank main tumse kaise door rah sakti hoo...

Mayank- I love u Nupur and will always....

Nupur hugged mayank and kissed him and karwachauth night became more beautiful with thier togetherness and that how our Mr & Mrs Sharma 😛celebrated their first karwachauth together.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG OMG .. this is one of the best OS i have ever read... I just loved the last section.. it is so beautiful ... Ritu r u kidding.. u have expressed everything so beautifully .. and most impoetant used shukla sir too, Send it to gautam hegde.. they need to read it ... mjht cvs ka pass brain nahi hai they spoiled dandia and if they r going to karwachauth then i do not want to see nyone around mayur on that day.. it is their special day
Edited by mjht-geet-dmg - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ritu-where was THIS scriptwriter since like SO LONG???????!!!!!! 😲
Miss.Chuppi rustam-why cudn't u come out earlier ..girl-this is AMAZING!!👏👏
d last bit,d decorations,d way Nupur got ready n all-it was awesome.....
and i loved ur takes in between-Terrace mein mirrror hai,Nupur ne mangalsutra n sindoor nahi pehnaa.(pata nahi kyu)..🤣-d way u put them.....i know why she didn't put them-Mayank karega naa dat for her.....😍
itz Lovely Ritu..............🤗 Do write more............
Edited by Deblina_ArTi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really awesome!
totally mayurish.......
hope cvz bhi karwachauth dikhaye for mayur!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ritu its beautiful os ..........wonderful written.......

its simple & touching !!😍
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awwwwww........😍😍😍
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Wow sis..thts was beautifully written⭐️⭐️....u r so chup rustam sis... u've got sch gooood writing skills nd u were hiding frm us... amzaing yet so touching..... loved it...👏👏do write more sis....a full fledge MN love story 😍😳 .... gr8 job sis doesnt luks like tht u wrote 1st time... 😳😳

Edited by -Sidra- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aww.. Ritu..
Chuppi... rustam.. never knew .. ki u write soo well!!😲
👏i sooo luvd d OS!😍👏
wish cv's show sumthng lyk dis.. diein 2 watch it!😍😍
do .. keep writin more & more!


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aw awesome OS Ritu! Love it! 👏

Do write more! =]
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ritu nice OS..do write more and u definitely improve a lot....

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