OS :MISHAL KA RAAZ PICHLE JANAM KA ...lCOMPLETE

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OS : MISHAL KA RAAZ PICHLE JANAM KA....

DISCLAIMER : friends this update is purely fictional?.a piece of my imagination?so plz don't take it seriously.

Well as we all know that during the 2nd season of Raaz pichle janam ka mishal will be one of the participants so thought of writing an OS on that. I was not fond of the show so don't know its exact format ?if u find anything unusual kindly excuse me.

Mishal comes to the set of the show and is introduced to the therapist

Dr ? hi mishal welcome to the show

Mishal ? thanks so much pleasure is all mine.

Dr ? so to begin with I must say u have a very interesting name

Mishal ? (smiles) well when I was born I used to resemble my late uncle a lot so my grandmother named me after him

Dr- so mishal tell me about ur fears and why would u like to back to ur past life

Mishal- dr ..to begin with I fear heights a lot and then there is a dream which disturbs me often?its like someone is screaming my name and asking for my help but I am not able to help out that person

Dr ? we will definitely try to find a reason for ur fear of heights and also know a lot more about ur dream through this session?is there anything else that u would like to share

Mishal takes out a payal (anklet) from his pocket

Mishal ? few years back I was trying to find some old documents in my store room when I came across this anklet ?since then I feel a strange connection with it?I hope we can find something about this as well

Then mishal is made to lay down on the easy chair and soon his session starts. After some time mishal moves back to his previous birth?with his eyes closed he starts describing about past life

Dr ? mishal what do u see ? where are u and what are u doing ?

Mishal ? I am in a village ?.sitting on a mountain?.sun is setting in?the river is flowing down smoothly?I think I am waiting for someone

Dr ? are u alone ? is there someone around ?

Mishal ? there is a girl who comes from behind and shuts my eyes with her hands

Dr- do u know her ? whats her name? how is she related to u ?

Mishal ? she is PINKY ?my closest friend

Then the scene shifts completely to the past i.e. mishals previous birth

Mishal ? pinky tumne aane mein kitni der laga di ?main kabse yahan tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon.

Pinky sits besides him and says " main kya karti ghar mein itna kaam tha?aur waise bhi jabse tumne job karni shuru ki hai mere liye toh tumhare pass time he nahin hai "

Mishal gives her a sweet smile and says " main janta hoon main kafi busy raha lekin aaghe aisa nahin hoga ?sorry?dekh main apne kan pakadta hoon?.ab apni aankhen bandh kar main apni pehli kamayee (earnings) se tere kuch laya hoon

Pinky ? sach (closes her eyes excitedly)

Mishal takes out a pair of anklets and ties them around her ankle?.pinky opens her eyes and gets emotional on seeing these anklets " mishal yeh toh wahi payal hain jo maine uss din shop mein tumhare saath dekhi thi?.aur tum inhe mere liye le aaye " ?.tears well up in her eyes on seeing this mishal wipes off her tears and hugs her

Mishal ? main yeh payal tujhe khush karne ke liye laya tha?rulane ke liye nahin?ab rona bandh kar?aur dekh sunset hone wala hai?tujhe bahut pasand hain nah

Pinky- haan bahut pasand hai?waise toh aasmaan aur dharti (earth) alag alag hote hain lekin door (far away) kahin woh ek dusre se mil jaate ?dono ek ho jaate hain?.usi tarah do log jo ek dusre ke liye bane hote hain kabhi na kabhi ek dusre se milte hain aur ek ho jaate hain?yeh dekh kar aisa lagta hai kahin na kahin koi aapke liye bana hai aur ek din woh aapse zaroor milega

Both of them look at each other understanding completely the hidden meaning behind pinkys words.

Pinky ? ab main chalti hoon ?bahut late ho gaya hai

Mishal ? kya yaar abhi toh aayee thi ?khair phir kab milegi ?

Pinky ? hmm do din baad mele (fun n fair) main ?thekh sham ko 4 baje

Mishal and pinky attend the mela and have a blast together?after sometime pinky sees a bangle stall and goes towards it?.mishal was busy having paani ? puri and doesn't notice her absence

Pinky ? bhaiya woh green wali chooriyaan (bangles) dikhana?achchi hain zara mere size ki dena

Mishal finds her at the bangle stall ?.the man was about to hold pinkys hand to make her wear those bangles when mishal immediately stops him and says possessively " rehne do?main pehna doonga ise' and holds pinkys hand gently to make her wear those bangles " jab ek ladka ek ladki ko hari (green) kanch ki chooriyaan pehnata hai toh iska matlab samajhti hai ?"

Pinky ? nahin kya matlab hota hai?

Mishal hits his forehead gently with his hand and says " rehne de tu nahin samjhegi"

Pinky ? mishal ab humein chlna chaiye

Both of them start walking towards their respective homes when pinkys payal slips from her ankle and falls down?mishal notices this picks it up?"iska hook lagta hai toot (broken) gaya hai?main ise theekh karwa kar kal tujhe phir sun set point par lauta doonga?tu aana zaroor ?sham ko tera intezaar karoonga

Next day it rains heavily but still pinky manages to reach the sun set point. Enjoying the rain she stands at the edge of the cliff when her leg slips and she fall down the cliff ?she manages to hold on to an edge of a rock and starts screaming mishal for help?.just then mishal reaches the sun set point and hears pinkys screams?he gets worried?tries to pull her up but fails to do so and in the process falls down himself in the river flowing below?pinky on seeing this is so shocked that when her she loses her hold on the rock even she doesn't know as a result she also falls down not in the river but on the rocks down

END OF FLASHBACK

TO BE CONTD?..

LOVE 😊 ROSE

BACK TO THE SHOW (LAST PART)

Mishals session gets over and he discusses about his past life with the doctor

Dr ? so mishal from ur session we come to know that u fell from a very high cliff while trying to save ur friend who was asking for ur help?I think u blame urself for her death and in this process u have developed a phobia of heights?as a dr . I would suggest that plz . don't feel guilty ?u tried ur best to save her but what happened was destiny?it was bound to happen u couldn't change it even if u tried.try leading a normal life and let bygones be bygones

Mishal looks at the anklet in his hand and nods his head thinking that this anklet probably belonged to his girlfriend of his previous birth

Mishal ? ur right dr. I should now move forward in life and not look back at my past?thanks so much for ur help?I feel very relieved now and hopefully will not fear heights anymore.

The show Raaz pichle janam ka was being shot at shimla?so after completing the shoot mishal leaves the studio and goes to the sun set point. On reaching there he feels much more calm and composed?looking at the setting sun and recalling the events that took place during his session. All of a sudden he hears someone screaming for help?he moves towards the edge of the cliff when he sees a girl hanging down and holding a piece of rock to save herself from falling. Mishal gets nervous and has flash back of his previous birth?fearing the girl would fall down again he moves his hand forward shakily to pull her up. As soon as the girl holds his hand his fears take a back seat and with full force he manages to pull the girl up.

The girl is so scared that on coming up safely she just blindly hugs the person who saved her. Mishal wraps his arms around her lightly and calm her down. The girl breaks the hug and looks up to find a concerned mishal looking back at her.

Mishal ? hi I am mishal?.hope ur fine

Girl is shocked to see her favourite actor so close to her but manages to reply " hi I am DIBYA?thanks a lot for saving?had u not been here I would have been dead for sure" on hearing this mishal immediately shuts her mouth by placing his finger on her lips and says " plz don't use the word death?I don't like it"

Dibya surprised by his reaction lowers her head

Dibya ? I think I should leave now ?my parents must be waiting for me.

She starts to move back but cries in pain and is about to lose her balance when mishal comes from behind and holds her thereby preventing her from falling.

Mishal ? I think u have sprained ur ankle

Mishal helps her and makes her sit on a nearby rock and starts inspecting her ankle. Dibya closes her eyes in pain on seeing this mishal gently massages her ankle leaving dibya breathless and restless. Unaware of the effect he was having on her he starts conversing with her so as to divert her mind

Mishal ? what were u doing here ?

Dibya- I had come here to watch the sun set ?the view here is just so spectacular?if u look far away u feel that the sky and the earth are meeting at some point?just like 2 persons who are meant for each other meet at some point of time in life?this kind of reinforces my belief that someone somewhere is made for u

Mishal thinks that he had heard the same thing somewhere before ?after a few secs. He realizes that in his previous birth pinky had said the same thing to him. He gets surprised at the strange coincidence and asks further " how did u fall down from the cliff?"

Dibya ? actually I had dropped something really precious and was trying to pick it up when I lost my balance and fell down

Mishal ? what was so precious that u risked ur life for it?

Dibya opens her palm and shows him a piece of anklet. Mishal is shocked to see the other piece in her hand and asks her "where did u get this from "

Dibya ? this single piece of anklet belongs to my late aunt?when she died she had it on her ankle?my mom was very close to her so she kept it with her as my aunts last memory?.my mom says that I talk and behave a lot like my deceased aunt ?.she gave me this payal on my birthday ?since then its too precious for me. Mishal picks up the payal and ties it around her ankle giving dibya a heart attack for the second time in a row. Dibya is still trying to recover herself from his actions when mishal takes out the other piece from his pocket and ties it around her other ankle which goes completely unnoticed by her

Dibya ? I think my ankle is feeling a lot better now?so I should leave for my hotel

Mishal ? do u mind if I drop u to ur hotel ?

After leaving dibya mishal returns to his room and thinks about the whole days events. He closes his eyes when scenes from his previous birth and events after his session got over flash in his mind and feels how closely they were related to each other making him think that " pyaar kabhie marta nahin?hum tum marte hain?hote hain woh log amar pyaar jo karte hain"

Dibya also hugs her pillow tightly thinking about her encounter with mishal.

Both are in their own world where sleep is far away

LOVE 😳
ROSE
so guys do tell me what u think of the last part
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Roseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
u made my day girl..............love uuuuuuuuuuuuu..................🤗🤗🤗🤗
Mishal ne khud ki kamai se mere liye gift leke aaya woh bhi Payal......😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
Im going to faint yaar.........stupendously fantabulous..............👏👏👏👏👏👏........
I cant stop dreaming yaar ki peechle janam mein Mishal ki GF thi...Oh goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.................wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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🤪😍🤪
& Mishal got possessive for me....🥳🤪
waiting for ur next part ............Eagerly......................😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkyk

Roseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

u made my day girl...THANK god u finally read it...........love uuuuuuuuuuuuu....me too..............🤗🤗🤗🤗
Mishal ne khud ki kamai se mere liye gift leke aaya woh bhi Payal..isnt he a sweetheart....😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
Im going to faint yaar.........stupendously fantabulous..glad u liked it............👏👏👏👏👏👏........
I cant stop dreaming yaar ki peechle janam mein Mishal ki GF thi...Oh goddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd.....dekha meri imagination...that is why i was telling u just wait and watch for the right time............wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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& Mishal got possessive for me....🥳🤪god sweetheart u dont know this idea was at the back of my mind for so long but was finding it difficult to put it on paper..phew..this time i had to crack my mind really hard..i am tired
waiting for ur next part ............Eagerly......................😍😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Rose ur superb...just osammmmmmmmmmmm...
Really SABAR KA FAL MEETHA HOTA HAI...now i got the meaning of the phrase..........🤪👍🏼
wowwwwwwwwwww...im too happy....................😃😃😛😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i am happy to see u happy...it feels great when ur efforts are appreciated by those who matter to u
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome dear......u r so creative.......just loved it.........update soon.........
n sorry.......kaan pakraing.......for not replying last time......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very intresting nice one to read just in the morning....u made my day !



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Posted: 15 years ago
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wah yar ....😊 interesting story.....
well me also dnt know abt 'raaz pichle janam ka'.whts the program is abt?
well dear continue soon!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow rose awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeee……………Loved every bit of it………..detail reply asap……….and pinkky u r really lucky yaar!..............Outstanding rose!.............




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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: newbe

very intresting nice one to read just in the morning....u made my day !




Really this girl has made everyone's day.............



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