One Shot - The Lovelorn *Do Read* =) - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Kanks =]]

This was a truly beautiful piece. Though I don't watch DMG but this was just exquisite. I really loved it.

The words really pulled at my heartstrings and brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully written Kanky. Especially the very last line, I loved it <3<3

Please do write more =]

-Daania

Originally posted by: dmgmjht4ever

Wow it's amazing Kanky, you mixed in so many emotions into the os, and it's brillliant. I love your word choice and each sequence tied into the story. I love how you don't make it totally predictable, I was guessing something else would happen at the end but you changed it around and made it your own. And when I meant "made it your own", I mean that I saw the originality in the story, there's so many stories where I read that "the girl fell into two strong arms..." It's sometimes word for word the same and I love how you keep it your own. Only one thing I was revise is this sentence: He had a heart of gold and his hunky looks used to leave girls in awe and guys in envy. Could've put it into different words. But loved it dear. Too good!!

Now you may be wondering why I gave you such a long paragraph, well when we were talking at the CC that one day, I remember how you said you hate it when nobody appreciates your writing, just the characters, so I did exactly what you would like. =)

By the way, your os is wayyyy better than the one I wrote 😳

Originally posted by: JPRules

That. Was. BEAUTIFUL.

So subtle, so simple, and so sweet. Absolutely loved it!! One of the best one shots I've read! 👏

Would LOVE to see a full fledged fanfic on this... 😃

Originally posted by: bhavana92

sweet OS Candy....🤗
this time, i read this OS jus coz i cudn't afford 2 miss ur writing! [i'm not an ArShian actually, tho i adore KaSh....itz kinda complicated!😆]
beautifully written! though not the typical happily-ever-after type...jus aptly concluded, with a small ray of hope in the lovelorn's life....
loved it! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mjht_Forever

Hey Kanky! 😊

I saw ur reply saying that you would be continuing this if you have time....
Plzzz Plzzzz do make it a full fledged OS yaar!...
It would surely make a beautiful FF...😳
Agar tu mahine mein ek baar bhi UD karegi na... I wouldn't mind!...😆
It'll be worth the wait dear!!!....😍
No pressure.. But do try!...

-Sharmila