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ArshForEver

@ArshForEver

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

omg, loved it, plz make a ff from os. it is lovely, plzzzzzz continue and if u do the add me in ur pm list for this or any other os or ff taht u rite😊

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Nikki

@dmgmjht4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

@Red: I couldn't think of anything better but I'm so happy, you pinpointed it. I like criticism. Really! 😃

Thanks a LOT, Nikki. I mean, you remember our conversation and what I said, it's nice that you gave it a thought and came up with this, thanks!! 😉

And about your OS - don't say that, gal. Unless readers don't state it bad, you cannot! 😆 And hey, I haven't gone through it yet. I read them all this weekend. 😳

You're welcome dear, I love getting criticisim too, so from now on, I'll be your critic 😆

And Kanky, of course I'm going to give it a thought, I mean, being friends (and a having a good memory [of convos not homework 😆]) I would have to see what you want to see from a reader.

And my OS, the readers won't state it bad because they'll think it will hurt my feelings. 😆

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saraaa.

@saraaa.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Kanky, Kanky, KANKY! What can I say? I have been reading all your FF's today. I just finished with your P&P FF with MayUr....By god I must say that your an outrageously GREAT writer.

Once again keep up the good work

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Hannah

@nondescript

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Kanky this was simply beautiful. Poignant at the beginning but you managed to shine that ray of hope through the piece without going for the cliche OTT sappy I loves yous.... Twas BRILLIANT in its own way and definitely a fave on my list! I liked the whole concept, the wandering lovelorn returns home to a sweet letter from Ms Heart Broken.... I guess his love will no longer be unilateral <3

It's quite ironic as I read this piece the music floating in my ears was 'Pal Mein Mila Jahan' from Aashayein

Pal me umeed thi, Armaan pal mein.... Ahh I love iPOD shuffle hehe!! <3

Hannah.

Edited by Hannah. - 15 years ago

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Hannah

@nondescript

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

P.S Post this in the FF section 😊

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Sonia Sharma

@Sony_1234

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

nice one. really nice. i loved the last line

Take care of yourself and remember you are not the only heartbroken person around. Ha!

Love, Ms. Heartbroken

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Anushka

@princess.anu

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

mast hai re KANKY...very emotional kinda...:(...

main toh ro hi di thi..:(

yew have gotcha a great writing skills..WELL DONE

aage bhi aise hi likhti rahiyo..:P

Love,
Anushka

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Kunal Chakraborty

@kunal071

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

😛

Edited by kunal071 - 15 years ago

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Kunal Chakraborty

@kunal071

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

Thanks, S! 😳 I am glad you liked it and no - the problem isn't migraine. The problem is that who I dedicated this was a lovelorn.

are u sure that the person to whom u dedicated this OS was a lovelorn??😆
newayx,endings lyk dese have no existence in real lyf😊..
btw,would surely want to meet Mr Lovelorn😛 & Miss Heartbroken😉
btw,nice OS sis 😊

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Why do I write in the first place when it always has to be real, brother? Sometimes, you just have seek answers out of imagination and satisfy yourself. 😳

Edited by -Kanky- - 15 years ago