While Heaven Kissed the Earth.......... - Page 3

Lovely and beautifully expressed... and you are never late to show RadhDev love..... Though the track may go this way and that way... we know that we watch it only because we know that RadhDev love will win and they will unite...

wow superb written👍🏼👏

I loved the poem...keep writing more😉

Originally posted by: n_sinha

Wow beautifully expressed. thanks yaar

Thank you so much my dear!

Originally posted by: billo77

BEautiful poem radev_forever 👏

It was very touchingThank you so much for sharing such wonderful poem 😊

Thank you so much Yamuna! Glad to know that you enjoyed it!

Originally posted by: Sandeepa108

Wow, this is just amazing and beautifully written! Be sure to copyright it somehow because there are a lot of thieves out there waiting to pounce on people's creations and claim them as their own! You are an exceptional writer, radev_forever, please keep it up!

Thank you so much Sandeepa!!! It means a lot!!! I never knew I had the ability to write in a creative way! 😊
Would take your warning into consideration! Thank you once again!

Originally posted by: evasumi

Lovely and beautifully expressed... and you are never late to show RadhDev love..... Though the track may go this way and that way... we know that we watch it only because we know that RadhDev love will win and they will unite...

So this was awesome... cannot wait when Abhay really will get smack by Kanha and remember...

Thank you so much for the inspiration Eva!!!

Originally posted by: MadhuraSDLuv

wow superb written👍🏼👏

I loved the poem...keep writing more😉

Thanks Madhura! Will try to write more but RaDev should give us more lovey-dovey moments to write on! 😆 😉

Originally posted by: radev_forever

Earth..........


Two souls drenched in heaven's outburst
As if to spell out their torment of being apart
Entwined together as one
Just as heaven and earth
Amidst of the beauty of nature..........


Fire of passion outwitted the chill that encircled ...........

The yearning........
The need.............
The overflowing love..........
Made the two souls one.....
With dazzling stars witness their zeal...........

The ecstasy of love.............
Escorted the two lovers to a world of their own.........
While the heaven kissed the earth...............

Beautiful..beautiful and beautifully written... loved it... just loved your poem... so much.... it is holding more emotions than those simple words and it is surely carrying the depth.... love it...

Originally posted by: DEVIKA8

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Beautiful..beautiful and beautifully written... loved it... just loved your poem... so much.... it is holding more emotions than those simple words and it is surely carrying the depth.... love it...

Thanks for sharing... " while the heaven kissed the earth".. wow! what an imagination.... you are amazing dear... wow!...👏

Thank you so...................................... much Devika!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: hotie

thankyou! It is wonderful!

Thank you dear!