FF:DO DIL UPDT!!! PG 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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And tanx for pressing the 'LIKE' button!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry guys i had to go to my hometown which had no internet but i came yesterday so i uploaded it today and sorry again for the delay!!😊
So here it is!!:

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Chapter 7

At around 7:00 evening, Heer was ready and was waiting for Prem to come and pick her up, she was wearing a pink shalwar kameez and she had very little make up on her, yet she looked like an angel.

She was wearing something similar to this:

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At around 7:30p.m someone rung the door bell. Heer knew it was Prem so she went and opened the door and shouted a goodbye to her mom, dad and Meher. She also told them that she will be back home soon. She turned around to talk to Prem, when she turned she found him staring at her with his mouth open. She giggled looking at his state and her giggle brought Prem back out of his dream world. He just smiled shyly.

Prem : You look beautiful!! He blurted.

Heer: Thank you.

That's when she noticed that Prem was looking dashing!! J He looked exactly how her dream boy should look like. Except that Prem was much better than her dream boy.

Heer : You look good too - - she smiled.

Prem : Thanks.

Her smile made Prem melt down and before he lost his control he quickly opened the door for Heer. He handed a bouquet full of red and white roses mixed.

Heer : Oh my god!! How did you know?!

Prem : Know what?

Heer : That roses were my favourite especially red and white!!

Prem : Well, I didn't really know they were your favourite and that you loved it. I bought it on my favourite choices and was worried that you might not like it.

Heer : Are you crazy, i love them, thank you sooo much Prem.

She gave him a slight hug and Prem returned it too, which made Prem's inner body to jump in joy.

Prem : I can't believe it we have so much in common, maybe that's why I like you. He blurted out unintentionally.

Prem was afraid that he might have hurt Heer by saying that but to his surprise Heer looked down and blushed. He quickly recovered and made Heer sit in the car. While driving Prem was over the moon that Heer didn't get angry or anything when he blurted it out, she jut blushed... which made him really happy. But he was still confused if Heer liked him or not but he decided to ask help from Preet.

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Later, they watched the movie and while they were returning there was a heavy thunderstorm rain. This heavy rain made Prem's car stop in a place where he couldn't even find a single garage. It was a deserted place so he couldn't find anyone. Heer was enjoying herself in the rain and suddenly there was a thunder at that very moment she hugged Prem and there was only a few inches between prem and heer. Heer and Prem quickly dispersed to find someone around.

Heer: What time is it?

Prem : It's 10:45p.m.

Heer : I'm supposed to be at 9:00 and I've never been out of the house after 9. Oh my god, I'm gonna be in big trouble!!

Prem : No Heer!! You won't be in any trouble.

Heer was really impressed about his possessiveness. She became really calm. They were walking and they found this little cottage after walking for about an hour and Heer was having a fever and Prem was getting really worried now. They knocked the cottage and then an old lady came out of the little cottage.

Old lady: Yes? May I know how I can help you?

Prem : Marci, can we please have a night in your house.

Old Lady : Are you two married? She asked softly.

Prem: Yes, Yes we are.

Heer was really confused.

Then the lady told them that she has only one room. So she leaded Prem and Heer to the spare room she had. She left Prem and Heer alone.

Heer: Why did you tell her that we were married?

She asked very softly and calmly but confused. Prem looked sharp into her eyes that Heer could see her reflection in his chocolate brown eyes which love, care and told her more.

Prem : Because then only she will let us stay. Now you take some rest in the bed, I'll sleep on the floor.

Heer : But Prem '

Prem cut her off by saying that she is sick so she takes rest on the bed and said that it was final so Heer stopped arguing with him. The whole night passed by for Prem taking care of the sick Heer who slept peacefully not knowing that Prem took care of her the whole night sacrificing his precious sleep.

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Sorry for the short update, i just had to to do something so this is it.. comment, critics and likes appreciated...😃


Edited by zehra7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
awsum update........
luved prem n heer scenes...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
awesome update!
Premeer were great!
Pllzz do pm me when u updae!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
hey...i m a new reader.....luvd it...premeeer scenes wer awesme.....plzz add ne to ur pm lisr
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
hey i am a new reader to ur ff
i loved all parts
add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
nice update!
premeer scenes were great......wonder what happens when heer wakes up!
continue soon.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
premeer scene was awsome..................

plz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
hey its amazing
love premeer
plzzzzzzz pm me next tym dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Prem is such a sweet heart

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