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I'm soooo sorryyyyy guys.....that i cudnt upload for a longggggggggggggg tymmm......but i will upload from may 20th...... so that i wont leave contact wid this..... sorryy agn!! 😆

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hi guyz i use to write a ff called do dil, and now the topic is closed, coz i lost connection wid india-forums, and now i'm continuing my ff, Here are the chapters 1-5 and the new chapter 6

Chapter 1

It was a nice day for the juneja family, they were in the hall with the whole family, they had 5 children, 2 girls and 3 boys. The oldest one was Gulraj juneja, she was 26 and married to karan , she was pretty, kind and loving. The second one was Harman juneja, 23 years old ,who is tall and short tempered. The third child was prem juneja,he was 22 years old ,who is lovin, handsome, caring and very responsible at times. The fourth child is Preet juneja,21 years old ,he was cute and a joker in the family he was the last boy in the family and as for veera juneja, 19 years old,who is the fifth child in the family, she was a modern typed girl she was a short tempered and aloved one at her house also she fights a lot. They were brought up by their parents, gayathri juneja and lalith juneja.

They were enjoyin their tea peacefully,they were making fun of each other and enjoying themselves. Gayathri was the best tea maker for lalith juneja, the head of the house. Everyone went after having tea.

Lalith: Isn't it time for harman to get married gayathri?

Gaya3: Lalith harman beta chota hai na.

Lalith: Gayathri he is 23 and still a baby c'mon

Gaya3: Nehi woe...............

Prem: (shouting from his room) Maa meri tie kahan hai?

Gaya3: Beta, wo apke cupboard mein hai.

Prem: (Shouting back) Tikke ma me check karthahu.

Lalith: Gayathri, thum kya khene wali thi

Gayathri: Kuch nehi, me apna kaam katham kar ke awoon gi

As gayathri went to work. Lalith was confused of wat gayathri was about to say. As prem was getting ready to go to college he didnt get his tie back as today was the 7th anniversary of the college. It was almost time and at last found his tie, inside his stylish side bag.

Prem: At last found it. (shouting) Me jaarahu.
😊
Chapter 2

The other family in this story was the, Maan family. The head of the family, Sanjay Maan and his wife, Teji maan with their 2 children named, Heer, the oldest who was 20 years old and Meher the second child , she was 18 years old. Heer had finished High school and now ready to go to college.

Sanjay: Heer beta aren't u going to your new college. Its your first day.

Heer: I cant, theres no bus to kalchana.

Sanjay: That's why I bought you a car beta, today u are going to drive this FERRARI to

College.

Heer: But bauji I don't drive.

Meher: But I drive , right ma.

Teji: MEHER!!! You are going to drive. Band karo yeh natak.

Heer: (mocking at meher) But I drive right ma.

Sanjay: Its ok Teji, Meher is very good at driving, trust me.

Teji: Lekin, lekin''''

Sanjay: Lekin, lekin kya hai teji. Meher you drop your sister in the Wester Indian

College and then go to your school. Tikke?

Meher: Tikke daddy.

Heer: Ma , bauji, alwida.

Meher: daddy, ma bye.

Teji: Be careful my little ones.

Meher was a modern typed girl but Heer was traditional. Heer and Meher left the house. Today Heer has to wear green coloured clothes because it was the 7th anniversary of the college. Hee wore a light green shalwar kameez and a 4 metre duppata on her neck. But as for Meher, as usual, she wore a tight jeans and a red coloured short kurta top with a large belt. Meher was a populap kid in school.

When Heer reached her college, she didn't know where to go, so she used a school map to find out. While she as looking into the map she bumped into someone and it was Prem. He was staring at her when he just turned to her.

Heer: Sorry ( looking at prem in his eyes for a moment)

Prem: ( Staring at heer for a long time) Its ok.

Heer smiled at prem and went away while prem was still staring at her. Prem attended his classes but he couldn't concentrate on any of his subjects after seeing heer. Prem was a popular kid and also a smart kid in school.

Mahesh: Prem, kya hua yaar?

Prem: kuch nehi.

Mahesh: Prem, boloh na yaar me thum hara dost hoon henna?

Prem: ( thinking for himself, not a good friend though) Are kuch nehi yaar.

Mahesh: If you say so. Aur ha, did you see a new girl?

Prem: Kohn? Kyu?

Mahesh: A beautiful young lady, she was wearing a light green shalwar kameez but still

Even in shalwar kameez she looks HOT!!

Prem: (angrily staring at Mahesh, and prem angrily answered) NEHI!

Prem doesn't like, Mahesh much because Mahesh is always into girls and as for Heer, prem was so angry of wat Mahesh said.

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Chapter 3
As for meher, as usual, shes the popular kid in school.
Sangeetha: Meher, u goin to go to the prom?
Meher: didnt decide yet. kyu?
sangeetha: no its ok. nothin
Meher: c,mon wats up?
Sangeetha: well i didnt get a partner.
meher: You are going to go to the prom.
Sangeetha: Is there a problem.
Meher: No, its just dat the first tym iv heard a brainiac going 2 go to the prom.
Sangeetha:just for fun.
meher: ok, u wanna partner huh?
sangeetha: ya
meher: Why dont u ask Shyam.
Sangeetha: SHYAM!!!! him hes not my type his a cool type guy.
meher: so you wanna a partner whos a brainiac like u huh?
Sangeetha: kinda.
meher: u joking ryt?
sangeetha: i wud like to but no im not joking.
meher: oh man!
sangeetha: ill try to find a person whos cool....
meher: there u go.
sangeetha: ...... and a GEEK.
meher: wat!!!!! god plz save me.
Sangeetha was mehers close frend. Sangeetha liked to hang out with meher since they were frends from grade 3 and now until grade 11.
Shyam was a popular kid in scool too but he knows his limit.
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That afternoon at the western indian college, (prems and heers college), heer was going around her new college finding for the gym becoz the girls had P.E now. But heer didnt know where the gym was?
While she was looking for the gym prem appeared from somewhere. Heer was still looking for the gym. Then prem knew that she was finding for something, so he went to heer.
Prem: Are you looking for something?
heer: (without giving an answer just looking down)
Prem: where do you want to go?
Heer: The gym for P.E.
Prem: you just go straight and turn left
Heer: (looking down) Thank you.
Prem: your welcome
Heer was going on the path prem told her to go. While she was a light wind blew and her 4 metre dupatta flew right past prems face but then mahesh came to talk to prem about something and her dupatta flew right past mahesh's face. Prem was furious that he just left without saying a single word. Mahesh had a crush on heer,but heer didnt like mahesh because he was not her type. decent, smart and caring was her type but mahesh was too much into girls. Heer liked prem comparing to mahesh.
When Heer reached the gym for P.E. she went insideand took a seat in a bench but her new, good friends forced her to change and join them. She changed into her P.E attire and sat on a nearby bench again till her friends start a new game. Heer was good at sports, singing and studies. She was a talentedgirl.
Sneha: Heer, cmon join us, we are playing basketball.
Heer: Oh, ok.
kasak: Heer, wud u join our team please, we have less ppl in our team.
Heer: yea, sure.
Kasak: Thankyou so much.
Heer: thats ok.
Last year, tina was the vice captain of sports team, hawks and the captain was Arjun. Priyanka the vice captain of the sports team falcon and Harman the captain. Sonia, the vice captain of the team, eagles and Iqbal the captain. Shivangi the vice captain of the team, Krestels and abishek the captain.
These people, were the captains last year, and they are not in college now. So this year the CAPTAINCY VOTING DAY will be coming soon.
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Chapter 4
At, the Juneja's place, Gayathri and her daughter Gulraj wre getting ready for breakfast. While they were having breakfast,

Harman: Baujee, Ma I'll pick Veera and Preet from school today

Lalith:tikke,Harman

Gayatri:ha beta,you go pick them up today, its been a very long time since u went to there school.

Gulraj: I'm also coming with you,tikke

At Meher's school

Meher was asked to the prom by so many guys, but she was not impressed by any of them as they did not know to respect ladies just then a boy walked to meher,his name was Shyam, he was a cool and well mannered guy but Meher was not interested in him.

Shyam: would you go 2 the prom wid me?

Meher:me?

Shyam:yes,u

Meher:no, im not going(meher lied), sorry

Shyam: no problem, bye

At college

Heer was going home alone today as none of her friends had come to college. When she walking out of the college gates she had a weird feeling someone was following her, all of a sudden someone pulled her by her arm it was Mahesh, heer had disliked Mahesh from the time she saw him but she did not ever think he would do something like this. All this was seen by prem he had a strange feeling his blood was boiling he never had this kind of feeling before, he went up to Mahesh and started to beat him up, he could not control his anger until heer pulled him away from there.

Heer: why did u beat him up like that,who do you think you are?

Prem:me, I'm Prem Juneja, and that guy does not no to behave with a girl and don't try to pretend I saw the fear in your eyes, btw instead of thanking me

your scolding me, anyway what's your name?

Heer: thankyou ,but don't ever do that again and im heer

(her name sounded like music to his ears)

Prem: nice name,friends?

Heer: ok, friends ,btw u also have a very nice name(blushing),anywayz bye I have 2 get home by bus today and I don't want to be late, so bye,thank you again.

Prem:can I ask you something if u don't mind?

Heer: yes, bolo

Prem: I can give u a ride home in my car, pls don't refuse my offer

Heer: ok, just because u saved me and you're my friend .

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Chapter 5

Prem and heer were going in the car when suddenly,

Heer shouted out: ICE CREAM

Prem stopped the car and told her he would be back in a minute he went to the ice cream seller and bought one chocolate ice cream,he went back to the car and handed the ice cream to heer,

Prem:do you like chocolate ice cream?

Heer:no,I just love it,how did u know that I loved chocolate icecream?

Prem:chocolate is sweet just like you he blurted out(heer was blushing)

Heer:anyway didn't u get one for you, we can share one ice cream if you don't mind

prem was surprised by what she had asked but he quickly agreed to her offer as he did not want to miss this opportunity(again he was thinking why he was feeling this way he had never felt like this before,and he wasn't the type of guy who was interested in girls)

prem:sure,why not after all we are friends aren't we

while heer was passing the icecream to prem, bymistake prem kept his hand on heer's hand she felt as though an electric current had passed through her,after finishing the ice cream prem drove heer to her house by which time they had got know almost everything about each other.After dropping heer at her house prem felt that he was something(but little did he know that he was falling in love with heer)

At the juneja house:

Prem was sitting on his bed and smiling alone, preet came into his room,

Preet:what happened bhai, why are you smiling alone?

Prem didn't seem to hear what preet had asked,he was in his own dreamworld,Preet snapped his fingers in front of Prem ,prem came back to his senses

Prem:what are you doing here,preet?

Preet: you tell me bhai,why are you smiling alone?do you know when people smile alone? Don't try to hide anything from me bhai, is it about any girl? come on tell me I'll help you?

Prem: no,it isn't about any girl

Preet: don't lie plssssssssssssssssssssss tell me

Prem: no no no

Preet: yes yes yes

Prem: no no no

Preet: no no no

Prem:yes yes yes
Preet: see you agreed to it,it is about some girl,come tell me about my bhabi?

Prem: I will kill you for tricking me

Prem chased preet around the room in the end he caught preet byhis ears, preet started making faces as though prem was hurting him,

Preet: ouch, prem bhaiyya leave me plssssssssssssss I wont tell anyone

Then prem let go of him

Preet: come on bhaiyya at least tell me her name

Prem: her name name is heer, now leave me alone, I'll tell you about her later,but for now I want to be alone.

Preet: okay,bhai but don't think I'll forget this subject

Preet left the room and prem was back in his dreamworld

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Chapter 6
At Heer's house
Early Morning
Prem had called Heer early in the morning to know whether she would be able to go out with him at night to watch a movie,she told him that she would need her parents' permission but somehow she had convinced her parents' about going to the movie,Heer was in her room thinking about what she was going to wear tonight for the movie, she was talking to herself
Heer:I have to look good today(she normally wasn't the type of girl who worried about how she looked,but today she felt that she had to look good)😉😉.As she was talking to herself,Meher entered the room
Meher:Didi,you never care about looking good even wen going to a party,today you are just going to watch a movie and you want to look good,Is something going on between you and that guy, prem ha?Do you like him? but i thought u said you guys were only friends .Didi plsssssssss tell me,you never hide anything from me right?
Heer:I am in a a really good mood today that's why I want to look good,anyway help me pick a shalwar kameez to wear tonight.
Meher:You want to look good right,you look good in most shades of pink,so she picked the shalwar kameez (like the one aditti wore for SPA awards)
Juneja House
Prem was looking for Preet all over the house as he was one who was extremely talented in impressing girls.After a while Prem found him in the garden talking to one of his 'latest' girlfriends'
Prem:Preet,I need you're help it's urgent.
Preet:Bhai,first tell me what i should help you with
Prem:I am going out tonight to watch a movie with Heer.What should I wear?
Preet:Wear the white shirt you bought recently and your dark blue jeans,you'll look like a prince.
Prem:Thank You Preet.
Preet:Don't think you can get away that easily what is the movie your going to watch?and is it an official date?
Prem:the movie is Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani btw its not an official date
Just then Gayathri came to the garden,
Gayathri:Kya baath karra ho tum dono?
Preet:You know something ma,Prem Bhaiyya is going to watch a movie with Heer Bhabi today,he blurted out unintentionally
Gayathri:Heer?Bhabi? who is that?Prem can you explain to me also about Preet's Bhabi,Do you like her?
Prem never hid anything from Gayathri,so he decided to tell her the truth.
Prem:Yes,she goes to the same college as me,she's very well mannered,pretty,good at heart and mainly she does not wear exposing clothes like most girls these days,I do like her a lot but I don't think she feels the same about me.
Gayathri:of course she will feel the same way for you,after all, who will not fall in love our 'raja' Prem.
Preet shouted out:PREM BHAIYYA IS IN LOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!
Prem:Shutup Preet,If anyone else gets to know this before I confess to Heer I will kill you(Gayathri laughs at the way both her sons' argue)
Preet:Bhai,but if you kill me,you will go to jail and you won't be able to confess to my Heer Bhabi,he joked.
Prem:Shall I tell Bauji that you found yourself a new girlfriend who doesn't even have enough clothes to cover herself properly.,Bauji he pretended to shout.
Preet:No Bhai,don't call the chaand,I'm sorry for teasing you.(holding his ears)
Preet stopped teasing Prem and went from the garden
Next update will be abt Premeer going to watch the movie.😊😊
Plsssssssssssssss comment and let me know whether this FF is good enough so that I can continue.

CHAPTER 1-6 --- PG 1
CHAPTER 7 --- PG 3

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wow.....heer bhabhi already.....😆
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gr8......luv preet in here as much as premeer....nd ya ga3 too...its nice little bt cute prt.....so hes already falling for her....
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hey just read ur FF.........really loved it.......preet calling heer bhabhi now itself.......loved the premeer scenes.........pls add me to ur pm list..........pls do cont asap....
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I'm soooo sorryyyyy guys.....that i cudnt upload for a longggggggggggggg tymmm......but i will upload from may 20th...... so that i wont leave contact wid this..... sorryy agn!! 😆
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Yes, i will... soon!! on may 20th sharp!!!
And thanx for commenting 😃

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