~*~SaVnI DiarieS~*~updtd*pg*53 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sofsunmannee

hey gunsi i think i can call u tht i really love savni inthis update even more together they really make a very cute & hot couple love it really love ur work dear😛😛



Yup surely di u can call me wateva u want

And thanks so much for appreciation
Nd agree they r meant for each other
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kate-85

the last scene was WOW!!!!!....i just go crazy imagining the last scene....KASh...if i cud see karneet dng such a scene!!!!



I agree i want them to host deepti bhatnagars new travel show together

Ah it wud be a treat wat say lynne di
Beautiful locales wid beautiful jodi

Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: gk_fan

nice update

avni lazzzzyy🤣


cont soon



Thanks buddy
Wil update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum guns...luved it
nowadays waiting eagerly 4 ur updates...samer is so romantic yaar..!!!!!

btw guns would lik 2 c a scene where avni gives sameer a HUGE surprise
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Preeths609

awesum guns...luved it
nowadays waiting eagerly 4 ur updates...samer is so romantic yaar..!!!!!

btw guns would lik 2 c a scene where avni gives sameer a HUGE surprise



Ummm...........lets see if i cud make up

Wait up for next part

Thanks a lot for appreciating
Come at DH
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Gunseerat



I agree i want them to host deepti bhatnagars new travel show together

Ah it wud be a treat wat say lynne di
Beautiful locales wid beautiful jodi

Thanks




Muaaaaah fr saying that....Lev you....hehe..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kate-85




Muaaaaah fr saying that....Lev you....hehe..



Lov u too lynne di
Waisey bhi if u didnt liked my work i wud not hav made the thread

Lolz
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Posted: 15 years ago
@lynne di-I wish i dont run out of ideas

Hmmmm
I want karneet back
Miss them
Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago


Tired they reach back to their room............

"Hey!! What is this?" sameer grabs a red envelope lying on the floor as he opens the door............

Avni comes in...........looking at the envelope

"I don't know!!............it doesn't belong to me!!"

They both share a suspicious look at each other................

"Open it" avni orders

Sameer follows............

"It says we are invited to the evening cruise party!"

"Wow isn't that amazing & exciting avni!!!........." sameer excitedly asks her

"Yeah!! Loads of people, partying and dancing or in your language loads of girls to flirt around............

Looks fantastic............(sameer's smile broadening with every word avni spoke)...........Great..........Simply not interested......Sorry sameer"

(His smile fainted even faster than it came)

"What??........Why??" he asked with his jaw dropped down

"Yes! Hubby you heard it correct!!" she answered lifting his chin with her finger.........

"Avni!!..........You can't do this to me!..........It says 'couples only'........" sameer pleads her

"Sorry!! Sameer and you can't change my decision like last time" she replied and sat on the couch..........

"Okay!! I'll go there alone! "He sadly announces to her.....

And she didn't even bother to ask how?........why?.......

He was a bit sad because she didn't reply to it as he was expecting............

........in evening.........

She was taking a nap when he left..........she got up and was surprised he really meant it!!!!!

"He went away without me.........." she mumbled to herself sadly

But......suddenly her eyes met a strange packet near the bed................

"What it could be????"..............

She opened it.....................

...............at the cruise...............

Mild romantic music was playing...............couples were enjoying themselves talking, giggling and looking at each other..........

some publicly expressing their........others finding a niche for themselves..........some enjoying those love games........others.............ah too

Much now.........let them do whatever they want.............

Sameer was feeling bored at the cruise though the love journey didn't even start yet it............but he was feeling lonely and left

Out..........probably he was missing his better half.............

But just minutes before the cruise was about to leave he felt something strange.............as if a floral mist blew across him and he was lost

In its aroma

He felt something................someone placed a hand at his shoulder..............his smile broadened............his eyes sparkling.............his heart as if

Dancing with joy.............

"Missing me!!!!" a soft voice reached his ears.............

He turned around................she stood right behind him........smiling in a floral dress.............looking stunningly beautiful...........

"Looking good!!!! It suits you!!!!"............... Sameer addressed her.............coming closer to her

"Someone special's choice"............avni replied

And both shared a laugh............

"Plans changed!!!!............how come????" he asked

"They were always the same............I was just testing someone!!!!" she replied

"And what are the results????" he asked her coming closer to her........... She blushed.............

"Close your eyes…" he said

"Why???".... She asked

"Just do as I say!!!"...... He sweetly moved his hand over her face instructing her to do what he said.........

He then took out a beautiful ring with pearls and went back on his knees........placed it on her finger........

"How's it???" he asked her..........she happily looked at it.......

"Ah!!! It's so beautiful!!!!!!!!"

"Less than you............"............she hugged him...............

..................later....................

"Dance???"

"Sure" she placed her hand on his..............

And they.................enjoy their special evening!!!!!!!!!!!



.................Tonight we dance
I leave my life in your hands
We take the floor
Nothing is forbidden anymore

Don't let the world in outside
Don't let a moment go by
Nothing can stop us tonight……………




Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww di soo cuteeeeeeeeeee
and hehe sameer calling her lazy😆

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