~*~SaVnI DiarieS~*~updtd*pg*53

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Posted: 15 years ago
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A stranger you were once.
Then, with a gentle look you took my hand.
As our lives engaged,
you lit my life and I held both your hands.
Now that decades have passed,
ours souls have indeed become one.
How fortunate we are
that we have found the love so true
that everyone dreams about.

so guysss there is no intro required for this lovely couple......here i go with my first chapter......
hope you will enoy my writingsss.......
luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part-1

(Avni enters in the room)

sun is peeping through the window its rays are approaching a face which is trying its best to hide under those covers!

Sameer is still on bed..........

And avni is not happy to see mr lazy still lying under covers wen its such a beautiful sunday morning out side!

Avni: (wid a raised eyebrow) toh mr.Saxena not in mood for getting up.......... haan!

She keeps his coffee near the bed and sits besides him

lovingly she caressess his hand........

And takes his finger and naughtyly dips it in coffee!!!

Ooooouuuuucccccchhhhh!!!!!!!!

Avniiiii!!!!!!

Sameer shouts at the top of his voice and starts shaking his finger

but all his frown lines dissolve the moment he sees that beautiful angelic face laughing naughtily at his childish actions.........

Sameer: (grining naughtily) you wait and watch..........Avni you wont be spared easily for this..........

sameer grabs her wrist.....

Avni: (struggling) chodo sameer koi dekhlega

sameer: (coming closer to avni who's now leaning against the wall) mrs.Saxena you are still scared to be with your husband!!!............ haan?

Avni:(who was shying and blushing before now making an eye contact with those sparkling eyes) sameer chodo mujhe aur bhi kaam hai..........

Sameer:(moving more closer and trying his best to not to fall for those eyes) jaise?

Avni:jaise.......Jais.......J........(sameer came more closer jus half a centimetre away)

seeing no escape avni moves towards sameer and kisses him gently!

He could feel the velvety touch of roses on his cheek..............

He slowly looses her wrist and clings his arms around her waist.........Both hug tightly!!!

sameer whispers in avni's ear

sameer: avni!!!! i love you...........

Avni: i love you too sameer...........

She hides herself in his arms surrendering to his love.............

Sameer gently kisses on her neck........She could feel the love he wanted to express.......................

Both stood there lost in each other for long..........Expressing their infinite love towards each other hugging each other.......................

😆your precious comments will make it more good so please don't hesitate to suggest and comment😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow di!!!!!tat was just sooo...umm....savnilicious...luved it 2 d core.....u just made m imagination run wild...😳..oh god...can't express how much i luved dis 1....do write mr......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow gunsi...it was so romantic and savnilicious
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved it Gun🤗 i wish we had such a scene in the show as well!!!!
You are an awesome writer.....waiting for part2😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaaaaaaaaa..............gunsi
it was soooooooooooo romantic and naughty please aur likhna........
kash aisa scene serial main bhi hota....😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey gunsi
will u do me a favor i want naughty champ also plase include the baby too plzzzzzzz u r very gud writer by god



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: prernahazra

hey gunsi

will u do me a favor i want naughty champ also plase include the baby too plzzzzzzz u r very gud writer by god




yaaaaaaa..............gunsi naughty champ bhi hona chahiye
u r fabulous writter
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow gunsi jaan....tha's soo totally romantic and sweet......please write more.i just luv my savni buddies for their awesome savnilicious sense........😳😳😳

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