sweet journey of love - prida epilogue p25

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello everyone, i couldn't resist anymore. like everyone, even i am not convinced with the current track, so out of frustration i thouht of writing few scenes and compiling them in a short story.
i am not reall a gud writer, and i know i am torturing everyone😆😆😆.........but sorry guys.....
well i am just giving it a shot, let me know what you think about it.
i am only gonna conutinue it if you guys want me to........
so, gud luck for reading😉
scene 1:
prithvi came home tired after hectic day at office and feels sad when he dint find damini in the room.

he gets freshen up and after changing his clothes he starts looking for damz everywhere, he went to

avni's room , rosh's room, ela's room but all in vain. then he thought lets check the stud farm but to

his surprise she wasnt even there. he feels annoyed and frustrated, even enquiring all the guards and

farm ppl wasnt worth. finally uhe went to masi's room and asked her " mausi ji aapne damini ko dekha

hai?" mausi " nahin gullu, lekin usey chod tu yeh bata tera din kaisa tha"
prithvi (lost in thoughts, trying to think where damz is ) " kucuh kaha aapne?"
mausi" beta maine poocha tera din kaisa tha" prithvi" ji mausi ji, thekh tha"
mausi" acha beta yeh bata...." before she could finish prithvi said"mausi ji mein appse baad mein milta

huun" nd left from there in order to continue his search for damz. mausi was irritated on this.

just as he was passing through the corridor, he heard noises coming from kitchen. he thought of going

there and checking it and found damz working in the kitchen and almost shouting at every single cook in

order to perform their respective duuties quickly.
prithvi " damini tum yaha?"
damz " haan prithvi, woh mausi chahti thi ki aaj raat ka khana mein banao, toh mein......"
thts it, at that time prithvi finally made up his mind nd thought " mein damini ko yun nahin dekh sakta"

he excused himself from the kitchen and damini resumed her cooking.
prithvi made a call to varun and reminded him to bring some papers to home before leaving office.

after 1 hour, varun came home and went straight to prithvi's room. he handed prithvi the required papers

and came downstairs for dinner. by that time everyone was already on the dinner table and waiting for

prithvi. prithvi intentionally kept those papers on the table where damz can easily encounter them and

came downstairs and everone started having dinner.
mausi " damini tumne khana pehli baar banaya hai kya beta? " damz " ji mausi ji, kyon khana acha nahin

bana kya ? " she looked at prithvi with an enquiring expressions. mausi " beta woh....." before mausi

can finish prithvi sweeped in and said " nahin damini khana toh bahut acha bana hai" seein sameer and

varun aggreing to what prithvi said, damz felt a lil satisfied. this again left munna, rani and mausi

annoyed.
afte dinner, everyon went to their rooms. as soon as damz came in she was surprised not to find prithvi

there. but her eyes fell on the papers and she was shocked to see what was written in them. just then

prithvi entered and saw disturbed and confused damini. he smiled a lil bit but then made a straight face

and approached her.
damini " prithvi, yeh kya hai? in papers mein, i mean, yeh sab jo likha hai....." damz was so disturbed

to even finish her sentence. prithvi " haan, damini, maine bahut koshish ki par its ok u know" on this

calm and not caring tone of prithvi, damz raised her voice nd continued " its ok, are u serious prithvi?

yeh project muumma ka dream project tha and you lost it. do you even understand the meaning of it? in

todays market, our investors are anyways not trusting us and on top of it you lost the main project"
prithvi " damini, if you feel so much about the damn project, then why did you leave it in the middle?

aise mein i tried my best but still i wasnt able to" damz realised that prithvi was right, somewhere on

line she left him alone in the office but she cant help it. she calmed herself down and continued

"prithvi, mr. mehta waale project ki presentation ki tayyari kaisi chal rahi hai"
prithvi " maine us project ke liye tender nahin bharne ka decision liya hai" damz couldnt control

herself now" what? how can you take such a decision"
prithvi " damini, i cant handle this pressure anymore, i think we should call it for today, i am tired

now" and he went to the couch to sleep.
damz thought " i think mughe kal office jaake sab kuch check karna hi hoga, dnt know prithvi office mein

kya kya kar raha hai?" she put her alarm for early in the morning and went to bed. prithvi thought if

his plan will be successful, then everything will be back to normal again.

so, here was the first episode of attyachaar, lemme knw with ur comments if you want me to do more damage or stop this attyachaar here itself.........😆
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Mru_bee thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wah sneha...👏👏

nice you got the mausi in too...

loved the scene betn Pri and Damz.... loved his plan...i hope, i really hope that they show this next week...

keep on writing...waiting for more,😃

-- Mru
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Attyachar jaari rakho please. 😃

Screen pe ho rahe attyachar ke saamne toh ye kitna pyara attyachar hai - ye attyachar tum hampe roz kiya karo 😃

Loved how Damini is cooking and how the guys supported her 😳 Loved Pri for how he planned to get Damzie to go back to the office 😳 Thanks for keeping Ila in the story along with the jokers. 😳

Please continue. 👏
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Jhan


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanks mru........i really wanted to do something against the current track......so thought instead of doin smethng destructive...lets do smethng constructive😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey jhan........agar aapko yeh attyachaar itna hi pasand aaya, toh mein kaise cheen sakti hun appse.........ill surely do more attyachaar😆
well jhan, i have decided not to include ila this time in my story......ila makes me sad and reminds of what CV's did to her........sorry😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Please continue the atyachaar sneha jee!
Prithvi's plan is too good....i just hope damini realises it soon too!
Im defo waiting for agla epi of atyachaar
Nicework sneha....do continue
Rach
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sneha that was very nice.....I want something on these lines to happen and happen fast....

Put Mausi in her place first - all the three brothers should do that...

Get Damz back to work....I mean cooking something for Pri is different - she cannot cook for Mausi and company and waste her time..

Loved Pri's plan - everything was going wrong....tenders being missed - Pri needed her at work and she has to get back.....

👏👏👏 Sneha pl continue lets get them to office fast.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sneha...that was rocking yaar👏👏👏...really after a terrible episode i m feeling soooo good reading this story...thanks a lot dear🤗🤗🤗..hmmm the best part was when prithvi and her devars supported her cooking👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼when that mausi was trying to criticize her cooking..hate that oldy😡😡😡.... but then aww..all pri, sam and var are sooo cute😳😳😳...and wow..prithvi's plan to bring damini in office...that was fab!!!...now she can spend more time with him...and the most important thing is that she won't be between those 3 dumbo's and idiots😡😡😡...soo glad that you came up with this story🥳🥳🥳. want to see how these 3 will react when they will come to know about prithvi's n damini's decision😈😈😈......continue soon plzz....will be waiting for more😉.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was awesome Sneha, liked it a lot!!! Loved how the guys all liked Damini's cooking!! i just find it too funny whenever mausi calls Prithvi gullu 😆!! Love how ur continuing w/ the current track and actually giving us some hope on PriDa through this whole Prithvi involvement with the business and all!!! Can't wait for the next part, PriDa together in office 😍!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww that Pri is a smart cookie hope his plan works!

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