AR MFF: Love Rekindled: Updt Ep.4 (5/10), Pg.15 :) - Page 14

@Soph...heyy...thanks soooo much...!! It's really, really sweet of you...and I know, secrets are always thrilling, for the writer as much as for the reader...hehe...and that conversation with the Higher Power...thank you so soo much for understanding whwas trying to convey through it...that's the only thing that could have brought you close to tears...and it's a huge compliment for me...thank youu...!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Enigma_Swati

Hey Nandini!

I just shuffled through all the pages to see if I put up a comment, coz I probably read it yesterday and unfortunately didn't comment... I dunno what thingy I was busy in? Anyways... here goes...

(First, sorry for not commenting yesterday and your rePM, I think you Pmed me the first time itself! 😃)

you know the starting part is the one which I love the most. The way you described the surroundings, the environment and the feelings they are just so good! I love reading that part of any FF maybe because I myself lack at it somehow. And please don't say that I don't, I know I do... It takes me ages to think of appropriate words at how describe something!!! Ridhima's desperation and cries for help for her love really stirred me within. 👏

And Atul came as no surprise! You beautifully used his character in the story.. I have always thought that his character has always been made some kind of scapegoat in the series and didn't actually like that part where he was portrayed as a joker even though he is such a mature person inside (yes, I think so!) Both Ridhima's and Atul's behaviour were very normal and obvious.. The sympathetic glances from people are pathetic! (😆 symathy is pathetic! omg! i have gone mad!!)

To be very honest with you, I found Ridhima's outburst over God a little filmy... Not that it wasn't written well, but it kinda doesn't go with her image. But yeah! things change and this probably the reason for it... she was desperate to see her beloved alive and out of danger, it make sense.. and yes, I understand her position completely.. i know you are confused with the irony in this but my take is not very clear on this matter, sorta confused... but yes i liked it!

Atul and Ridhima's conversation was beautifully penned... I loved that part too! Like I said the series never showed this side of to much extent although this should have been there... He's a true friend and I really like this side of him...

I loved the she was beside him every moment.. i completely adored it!

Gosh! Long comment? You deserve it.. might have been longer but I got an exam tomorrow and two fics to update.. will try and make it longer next time..!

Update super soon!
Thanks for the PM and the rePM!

Love ya!
Swati 😃

Heyy Swati...!! 🤗

Hey Nandu!! That was a shot emotional part.. I loved the way you are taking the story wrt riddhima's childhood and present armaan's condition. Atul is always a sweetheart... hope to see Armaan back to action soon. thanks for the pm and continue soon.

Thanks for d pm n sorry for d late feedback...too much was going on.😆..nice part...Atul n Ridz interaction was very touching...I love d way u deal with d other characters apart from AR...first billy n now Atul...looking forward 2 some AR moments in d next part...😊

Nandy Your Inbox is Full!! I cannot send anymore- I will be pasting this same topic on all your posts to ensure you see hehe :P

Love Ya Bananaxx