What, why, how(poem) Added: Pri's pov - Dawn Idol - Page 5

@ a2zahid Thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: diya86

Loved your poem! Perfectly put... You've brought out Pri VERY well!

@ bold - *swoons* Don't expext me to give you coherent comments now... I'm in PriDa wonderland!!!

@ usurping my post - Love this so ya, you're welcome to do all the usurping you want!

Originally posted by: Ektaj

@ Dawnie (like Maham said is your new nick .. hope you don't mind! 😳) of course I dont 😃 ...... nick names mean I've earned myself some great pals ..... so no probs !!! 😉

Loooooooooved your poem! OMG .. its breathtaking beautiful!! Brilliant how you brought out Prithvi and his feelings ... feelings he's hiding behind the rough n tough exterior!! Awesome!!! ........ Thanks amillion for the sweet words dear ...... !!! 😳😳😳

Boyyy ... you guys are sooooo talented! We should compile all these poems and make a LNMDJ Fans' Poems Diary or something! 👏 👏 👏 👏 ...... A poem / article diary would be a great idea ......... 👏👏

Originally posted by: mridhu

@ Dawn - FAB!! WOW!! like Diya am off to Pridaland!!. but just know that this was just pridabulous!!

@ Diya - Thanks bunches for the encouragement!! 🤗

Dawn

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Diya ....... this I hope will complement your poem .... very feeble attempt ,....

but am braving on nonetheless ...

Taking a deep breath ...........

Prithvi's POV ........

What's wrong with me ?
She's just another girl, cant you see?
Why does her entry
Put me in such a tizzy .....

How does she do it?
Make my heart skip a beat
Just a look, just a glance
Leaves me in such a trance ....

Does my day have to start
With her radiant smile
Is she aware of what
She's doing to me all the while ?

I know she's strong
I know she's capable
Then why do I long
That she finds me dependable

Why the need ?
To be her shield
To wipe her tears
To remove her fears ....

Will she ever read my mind ?
How do I tell her, how will she find
How much I need her
Love her & cherish her forever and ever .....

Dawn..That was an absoulte beauty, so well written..⭐️Awww, Prithvi + your work = dope..

I have a problem with you..Why don't you write more? Why don't you make your own posts? Like Zain said, this piece of art deserved a post of its own..

All thanks to Diya, we got to read two beauties in this thread, hers and yours..

Originally posted by: current

Dawn

Will she ever read my mind ?
How do I tell her, how will she find
How much I need her
Love her & cherish her forever and ever .....

Dawn that was beautiful...you need to make a separate post..

As long as you write..there is hope for all the egoistical and proud people out there to find true love... that is soooooo sweet 😳

and You have Beautifully summed it all up...

That was as awesome as Diya's //FAB

Make this a separate post..

Originally posted by: Who-I-Used-2-Be

Dawn..That was an absoulte beauty, so well written..⭐️Awww, Prithvi + your work = dope.. ..... I am honored ..... this is gold for me !!!!

I have a problem with you..Why don't you write more? Why don't you make your own posts? ......... One valid reason is work 😭 ........ and nother one is ..... er ...... I suppose ...... *ducking* ..... laziness ..... I'm always prodded by other's posts ...... they kinda get me kick-started ....... Welll .... seriously I promise .... I'll try .......😃 Like Zain said, this piece of art deserved a post of its own.. ........ wellllll ..... like I told Zain ...... I feel Damini's POV & Prithvi's POV belong together !!!! 😳

All thanks to Diya, we got to read two beauties in this thread, hers and yours.. ....... I am thankful to Diya tooo ..... it was her poem which inspired me !!!!!