What, why, how(poem) Added: Pri's pov - Dawn Idol

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I agree with you Dawnie, Dams' pov and Pri's pov belong together.... 😊
Damini's PoV
Prithvi's PoV by Dawn Idol

What makes him so special,
that I can't look away?
What gives him the right to fill
my thoughts, night and day?
Why does he have the power,
to make me cry and hurt?
Why is he the only one,
who can give me comfort?
Why do I feel so much for a man,
who doesn't care for me?
Why can't I stay away from him?
He doesn't like me, clearly.
How am I supposed to deal with this,
and how much more can I take?
How exactly did I end up here?
It feels like my heart will break...
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What's wrong with me ?
She's just another girl, can't you see?
Why does her entry
Put me in such a tizzy .....

How does she do it?
Make my heart skip a beat
Just a look, just a glance
Leaves me in such a trance ....

Does my day have to start
With her radiant smile
Is she aware of what
She's doing to me all the while ?

I know she's strong
I know she's capable
Then why do I long
That she finds me dependable

Why the need ?
To be her shield
To wipe her tears
To remove her fears ....

Will she ever read my mind ?
How do I tell her, how will she find
How much I need her
Love her & cherish her forever and ever .....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rambling, Diya? Nothing that comes out of your keyboard is a rambling..It was gold, pure gold..⭐️

LOVED it, and it's so apt..You know, it's kinda spooky that whenever I read something written by you, I feel like you voiced my thoughts too, cent percent, along with your own..
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Diya...
your ramble was mighty fine 👏👏👏
Yep ..right now Damini is running from the biggest truth in her life..that she is in love....
Face it Damini...and spare yourself the cash for a new BG
Ghar ki Murghi daal barabar...Pri is soo good at multitasking...
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aha im first to reply!!😃😃😃 very nice diya! you understand da well!!! loved the poem!!! it describes her current condition realy well....! well done as always!!!👏

Cheerx,
Maham
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Originally posted by: rankanrock

very nice diya! you understand da well!!! loved the poem!!! it describes her current condition realy well....! well done as always!!!👏oh im choosing to ignore the rambling part.. apparently someone conked you on the head when you were typing i think...!

Cheerx,
Maham

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right so apparently something went wrong with the browser... ignore my first comment!!😕😕
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Hi Sarah! 🤗
Thought you wouldn't post today. And I was actually scared that you'd given up on the show... Then I realised that you'd commented on leaves' post so I have my Sarah post fix after all! Now I can sleep in peace 😃
Thanks for the kind words, sweets.
@ spooky mind-reading - Funny, that's exactly what I feel about your posts too... So this one's right back at ya, babe!
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Zain!
Thanks a lot for reading and replying, pal.
@ Dams needing to realise she's in love - SOOO true! Will someone go and give PriDa a good shake (and the creatives too!). These two need to accept their love at least to themselves, and then show us all that adorable, angsty in-love-but-can't-be-with-him/her stuff...
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Awesome awesome stuff as usual Diya!!! Loved it!!

So apt...the true state of Damini's mind!!

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Maham, thanks so much, sweetie!
@ me understanding Dams - It's difficult not to... she's so much like me! As I said on Sarah's post a while ago, Dams is a much prettier, wealthier, luckier version of me! 😃
@ Someone conking me on the head - 😆 I feel like someone has too... Terrible day at work!
@ something going wrong with the browser - Never mind. Happens a lot to me too...
Thanks for replying!

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