Premeer One Shot: Phir Milenge

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Posted: 16 years ago
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After watching today's episode, this has been in my mind all day. This just picks up from where today's episode ended when Heer locks herself in her bedroom and Chahat is worried.

So here we go, I hope you like it:

Phir Milenge

The little girl knocked on the door, crying, "Mama, please open the door! Mama please please! Mama open the door!!!" But her cries were falling on deaf ears. Inside the room, Heer was sitting under her window and cursing her destiny. Ever since she was born, she loved only him. How many times did she think she was going to lose him? First when she was geting married to Manmeet and Prem to someone else. Than the Ajmar storm happened. After that when she thought she lost him forever when the Delhi bomb blast happened but he always came back. Even after the whole Ashlesha/Sameer thing happened, deep in her heart, she knew he would come back one day because they are meant to be together. But this time, this time she was sure she was going to lose him and it's all her fault. Why couldn't see his love earlier? Why couldn't she realize her mistake for keeping herself and Chahat away from him for 6 years, earlier? When she finally did realize it, it was too late. It is too late. Prem is now going to belong to someone else and she is going to lose him forever.

"Mama, PLEASE open the door, mama!!" Chahat cried loudly. What happened to her mom? Why was she acting like this? Her mom never ever acted like this before. What happened today? Did she make a mistake mentioning Prem Juneja again? What should she do now? Chahat ran downstairs to the phone and dialed the only number she knew apart from her mother's.

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Prem was with his family in the living room enjoying the return of his bauji from Canada after so many weeks. Preet as usual was making fun of Lalit while Kulraj and Meher and the kids were cracking jokes at him. Maya looked like she rather be somewhere else while Harman was provoking Lalit to slap Preet. Gayatri was sitting there smiling at everything. "After so many days, we are all together! If only she was here than our family would be complete." Everyone looked up at her in shock. "Haan Ma, I was thinking the same thing. If Heer...." But before Prem could finish, Gayatri quickly said, "Geet...if Geet was here, our family would be complete." Prem should have known she was talking about Geet. Why would she talk about Heer anyways? It was only him that thinks about her all the time. Just than his phone started to ring. He checked the number. It was Heer's. She must be calling for the custody case. Why else would she call at this hour? He was almost close to finding out who sent those papers to her.

"Kaun hai, Prem?" Lalit asked. Prem picked up the phone and answered, "Hello?"
"Hotel Ke Owner Ji?? It's Chahat!"
came the voice from the other line. Prem couldn't help but smile. After all these days, his Chahat is talking to him again. But at this hour. He got up and left the room to go to the kitchen. "Haan Chahat beta, bholo." Even before she could say something, Prem knew something was wrong. He could hear her sobbing on the other end and with each passing second, he was getting more and more worried. "Chahat beta, what's wrong? Why are you crying? Where is your mummy?"

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As he drove to Heer's house, Chahat's words keep ringing to his ears. Heer was locked in her room crying, not responding to Chahat or opening her door. Prem wondered what made Heer so upset. He was already hating the person, the thing that made his Heer cry so much. He have never known Heer to lock herself up and cry like that.

He parked his cark in Heer's driveway and rushed to the door. He knocked and a few seconds later, a sobbling little girl opened the door. "Prem Juneja!! Please help me! I don't know what's wrong with Mama!" she said as she hugged him. He bent down and cleaned her tears and gave her a hug back. "It's ok beta, I am here now. Everything would be alright. Where is your mummy?" Chahat took Prem's hand and lead him to outside Heer's room. Prem could almost hear Heer sobbing inside. He knocked on the door.

"Heer! Heer, it's Prem! Please open the door, Heer!" he cried.

Inside the room, upon hearing Prem's voice, it was as if a lightening hit her. She quickly got up and opened the door. Prem couldn't believe what he saw. His beautiful Heer, was covered in tears with her eyes all puffed and red. He has never seen her like this before. But before he could say anything, she clunged to him and hugged him. He looked down at Chahat who was looking at her mother and the stranger uncle in shock. "Beta, go to your room, I'll take care of your Mama!" Without saying anything, Chahat left. Heer was still holding on to Prem and he slowly hugged her back. They stood there in each other's arms for what seemed like an eternity before Prem slowly moved away and took Heer's face in his arms. He cleaned her tears and took her inside the room and sat her down. "Heer, what's wrong?" he asked as he stroked her face.

"Are you going to leave me?" she asked as more tears streamed down her face.

"Never! Do you trust me?" he asked. She smiled and knew in that moment that he won't. He never will, no matter what.



Ok it's not that good but I hope you guys like it.

Edited by Sonalicious - 16 years ago

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cpervaiz thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely.........we're gona have a sequel to this right????????? do keep up the good work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwww really cute!!! Hope there's a sequel!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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SEQUEL SEQUEL!!
It was awesome!!
I really did think Chahat would have called prem!! it would have made soo much sense!!
But no! She calls Geet!! uh..
Please continue it!!
I loved it!! perfect
He will never leave her!! He is after all OUR Prem..
-nikita.. <3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was very very sweet!!
i loved how heer just hugged him all of the sudden..he must've been very surprised!!
and heer...yes!..she finally got the guts and time to do what she has been wanting to do!
man! it would have been so much better if this happened in the show..but noooo...chahat had to call geet!
uggh...why can't the creatives think like you?!
and I demand a sequel!!..please?
aweeesome one shot!!
~Nitya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved it ....I wish Chahat had actually called Hotel Ke Owner Ji instead of Geet Massi....

Originally posted by: Sonalicious


Prem wondered what made Heer so upset. He was already hating the person, the thing that made his Heer cry so much. He have never known Heer to lock herself up and cry like that.

i loved that line...Prem 😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the comments guys. I would think of a squeal soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice!! me too wants a sequel!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nice oneshot.. loved reading it..

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I want Sequel sequel sequel....
i really likes it..
plzz do continue...
superb..!!!!!!!

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