birThDayZ..!! [Sujal-Kashish] epilogue*pg-29 updtd - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
pihu dear that was a awesome part.. seriously yaar that was so damn good.. you know when i was reading the part i could imagine everything happening in front of me..it seemed so real.. and i completely loved it... the part was mind blowing, mind refreshing.. totally dhassu, jhakaas, bindaas..bole tho ek raapchik.. your writing rocking... & your fanfic is rocking... superb, fantastic, excellent, par excellence, marvelous... hat's off to your writing... dear the part was written taking every minute detail in concern.. pehle thi i did not like it when siddanth came back... lekin jaise -jaise i started reading the fanfic agge i actually liked his entry.. i thought kii achcha hii hua joh siddanth has come back.. is tarah se ruhee will not move away from the love of her life ray.... siddanth ka aana has made ruhee realize that usne kuch ghalat nahii kiya.. and she has also realized kii if she is doing some thing wrong then it is just kii woh ray ko apne aap se durr karr rahii hai.. aur khud ko aur ray ko takleef pohancha rahii hai.. siddanth has come back for a second chance.. but joh ghalthi usne kii hai now he is paying for it as ruhee has moved on.. well i think it is better this way... siddanth may be has some one else in his life... but ruhee ko tho apna special special mil hii gaya hai... wohii humara sweetie-pie ray.. yippeee... and it is good that siddanth and ruhee have parted ways as friends.. is tarah koi gile-shikwe nahii honge.. then coming to the scene between ray & ruhee.. wow yaar that was amazing.. ray ka guilty hona.. ruhee ka usse samjhana kii he is not wrong.. joh hua sahi hua..as she too loves him.. yahoooo.. aakhirkaar ruhee ke dil kii baat uske honton par aa hii aagayi.. their confession was ek dum mast...zabardast..their kiss was very pure.. it showed how much they need each other in their life.... the barish... awww.. making the air more romantic... loved it totally... in the end i liked the song joh ray ne gaaya..very beautiful..wonderful part...keep it up...👏 pihu that was a beautiful, lovely end to a beautiful fanfic... waiting for the epilogue eagerly....😊😛😃
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Epilogue

he slammed the door as he threw another glance at the watch ..nd he regretted it the very next moment as he noticed all the eyes shifting to his angle .. he bit his lip .. "oops .. sorry .." ..he whispered ..nd quickly came nd took his seat in the waiting of the airport ..he grabbed his most favorite book nd began throwing glances with nil concentration ..he could still notice people looking at him from the corner of their eyes ..


"why am i alwayz stuck up with ladies who i don't think know any use of the beautiful watches they have!" ..he said to himself .. "NEVER on time .."

..nd just as then he saw the three of them ..nd all his anger vanished dunno-where as he looked at the three most beautiful girls he had ever seen ..he kept looking at them as they approached him ..

"pa .." ..the youngest said flashing her cute dimples .. but ray wasn't listening .. his eyes blinked only when the mother of the other two snapped her fingers infront of his eyes..

"woahh .." ..he came back to his senses ..nd started shouting to hide his embarrassment, "whyyy aren't you everr on time!!" ..nd oops.. a mistake again ..all the eyes again shifted to mr. rajeev khandelwal showing clearly visible made-up anger to his extremely beautiful wife..

"pa.." ..the youngest one called him again ..nd then he took her in his arms nd asked.. "wat darling??"

..she batted her lashes softly which brought a wide smile to ray's face ..she placed her finger over his cheek, nd said, "you know, you look soooooooo cute wen you "try" to be angry.."

..ruhee started laughing loud which remained unnoticed by ray whose own smile widened by another inch as he heard tamanna's (tammy) innocent remark ..he creased her cheeks softly nd then placed a sweet kiss on her dimples ..

"..aww.. thank u, my l'll angel ..nd you toh alwayz look cute sweety .."

..nd then she blushed ..just the very same as her mother ..

"wow.." ..he whispered to ruhee as the four of them finally got in the flight nd took their seats .. "you know, i luvvvvv you for passing on that blush thing to both of them.. they're just so so so cute wen they do that .." ..nd then ruhee blushed too ..nd he cudn't help kissing her on the cheek .. her eyes widened nd she looked up at him ..

"wat?" ..he asked.. "you're my legally wedded wife yaar ..i'm allowed this much at least .."

"hmm.. " she didn't know at all wat to say ..

"hmm.. " ..he quoted ..

"hmmmmmm.. " ..she teased again ..

"hmmmmmmmmmm.. " ..he wasn't backing off anyway ..

"pheww.. you win.. happy?" ..she said looking away ..

"naaa .." ..he said nd turned her face towards himself ..

..but she crossed her arms in mock anger .. he held his ears cutely nd said "cholly, love .." ...nd he got it with one ..she just cudn't help looking at him lovingly ..

"you know what?" ..she asked..

"yea??" ..

"i love you .."

"awwwww ... luvvvvvvv you 2.. 3 ..4 .. 5 .. 6.. 7 .." ..nd he came closer with each increament ..nd before he cud get close enough to make her loose her nerves, she pushed him back nd whispered, "rayyyyy .. c'monnnn ..behaveee .."

"kyaaa yaar.. hamesha daatti rehti ho ..ek dum typical mummy .." ..he said ..

"not my fault ..you're suchhh a kid .. our daughters seem more grown up .."

..just then sumera (sara) woke up .. "wen're we gonna reach?? i wanna meet grandma .."

"..dun worry sara ..we'll there really soon ..you go back to sleep ..i'll wake you up before reaching ..kay?"

"nahhh .. m not sleepy ..pa, i wanna sit at the window seat .."

"noooooooooooo .." ..ray argued .." thatz mine ..iss baar meri chance hai ..ruhee samjhao naaa.. "

"..see what i meant?"..she giggled ..nd over this, ray got embarrassed nd turned all red .. but yea, he didn't let her sit on the window seat which he had to secure through a chocolate as a bribe ..

..so it had been 10 years since their marriage ..nd they were much much much more beautiful ten years than one could ever expect .. 'twas love all around, love for each other, their families, the two lovely daughters, love for life ..nd love for love .. nd this cute, small, perfect family was on itz way to India on the vaccation ..


three hours past, ruhee woke the three as the flight was about to land ..as they were over with all the post landing stuff nd, they came out to see the whole family gathered at the airport to receive them ..

"ridzzzzzzzz ..." ..tammy ran to riddhima nd hugged her tight ..she hugged her back, as ray nd ruhee greeted their parents, nd sara ran to her most favorite person in the family ..

"armuuu .. my chocolates?!!" ..nd she landed in her arms ..

"do you think i can forget that swthrt??" ..

"nahh .. i knew you won't ..varna aapko punishment miltii .." ..nd she grabbed the chocolate nd began unwrapping it ..
"awww.. missed you sooo muchh doll .." ..armaan kissed her cheek while she was still busy with the chocolate ..

"watz this yaar .. you both will pakka spoil them this wayyy .. at least don't make them call you by names .." ..ruhee scolded armaan-riddhima, who didn't seem to listen as they were so busy with the kids cuz they weren't hearing all this for the first time ..ruhee's welcome speeches were mostly made up of these dialouges ..

.. after the session of hugs nd gossips, they all headed for Chopra Mansion, where ruhee nd riddhima's parenta lived.. ray's dad had shifted to delhi after 5 years of ray nd ruhee's marriage, nd was here for a few days ..rehan, after completing his studies, shifted to india to help his dad with the business nd got married to anjali after a few years .. armaan-riddhima, live in mumbai, where both of them worked ..nd they had all come up together for ray's b'day, which was tomorrow.. but 'twas just a reason for this happy family to come all together ..

..the day went away talking nd giggling nd laughing nd enjoying ..

*

"happy b'dayyyyyyy .." ..she whispered in his ears when the clock struk 12 ..

..but he didn't seem to listen .. "rayyy .." ..she said a bit louder .. "swthrt ..c'monn wake up naaa.. lemme wish you at 12 as alwayz.."

..but she didn't get any response .. she became sad ..

"happy b'day darling .." ..she said again, more to herself, in a sad tone, nd placed a sweet kiss on his cheek...

"pehli baar mein hi aise wish karti toh pehle hi sunaai de jaata .." ..he said, which starlted her ..nd before she could be angry at him, he started brushing her hair with his fingertips nd kissed her at the corner of her eyes ..he kept looking at her, nd every time he looked at her, it felt like he was seeing her for the very first time ..nd with every second she turned prettier .. he just kept gazing at her, nd she cudn't help but look back ..nd as seconds slipped by, he enclosed her a tight, intimate hug ..nd the night went on ..

*

..nd as it is said, they lived happily ever after.. just as she had alwayz wanted >> forever ..

*
so that was it ..hope you all enjoyed ..
love you all ..
buhbyeee..
take care ..
cya ..😳
Edited by piHu.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey pihu dear twas lovely endin........loved them.very cute lil family........congrats on finishin the ff............i loved ur ff...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow pihu awesome part
Edited by jyothi_cool - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part, great story ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely ending...
perfect in ever way....
i just enjoyed reading this fickk
hope u write a few more
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Posted: 16 years ago

double post😛

Edited by togepe30 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey lovely epilogue !
I wish u wud write another fic on Rajeev soon!
Do tell me if u start any !
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey pihu jaan!!! am back and just caught up with the last 3 parts of ure ff!!!! wot can i say they were just simply amazing!!! truly outstanding!!! loved each n evry moment of it!!! perfect in all aspects and i must say beautifully written also!!! loved it completely!!! sabse pehle part 15....that was an amazing part./..i really felt so bad 4 Ray wen he was feelign so upset and missing his mom, he was going through so much pain and him feeling that he looses evry1 he loves was soo sad but then ruhee consoled him and understood his frustration at that time, she supported him like a true friend....and then the sudden kiss....i knw it happened suddenly and at that point both didnt knw hw 2 react n i could feel how awkward they must have felt and maybe thats why ruhee ran away from there and also maybe she didnt understand hw she felt at that point..i felt bad 4 ray as he was feelign guilty...then Siddhanths entry, i was so mad 2 see him there at the party and i felt Ray's pain at that point but he still smiled only 4 Ruhee, he loves her soo much...and then finally the turning point, Ruhee has realised she loves Ray and im soo happy she did....the flashback of ruhee and siddhanth cleared evrythign....then the moment she goes 2 Ray and tells him she loves him and rids him from all his guilt was just beautiful and Ray kissing her, that moment was just superb...and then the god showering his blesings on the 2 through the rain was amazing!!! loved it completely...and the song 4 ruhee at the end, perfect and beautiful!!!......then the epilogue!!!! first of all pihu sweetheart thank u soo much 4 making me RA's child!!! lozlzzz i was suprised 2 see ,y name being used but felt gr88 ke chalo kamsekam FF mein tho mujhe yeh mauka milla, lolzzzz waise unse baat karni hogi ke mujhe adopt karlen heheeheh but yh jokes apart the epilogue was just amazing!!! truly beauuuuuutfiful!!!! wot a perfect family and 10 yrs later also there love is growing deeper and deeper...loved the airport scene, it was 2 cute and beautifuly described and then them reachin India and the girls meeting Armaan and Riddhima was adorabl!!! mujhe tho chocolate bhi milli lolzzzz....and the last scene was soo adorable with the bday wish, hehehe ray is so naughty, he was waiting 4 a kiss 2 open his eyes n the way he sed if she would have done this in the first place he would have opened his eyes, lolzzz n then wot more a beautiful endign can it be than them in each others arms!!!...i twas such a beautiful ending, no words 2 desribe it....n pihu i got 2 tell u that this FF was brilliant and superb and am really gonna miss it...it was a brilliant FF and very different 4 sure!!! a lovely FF 4 sure....wud love 2 read more of ure writing pihu so if u do start a new ff, dnt 4get 2 let me knw!!!! hpe u do write more jaan....luv summi xxx

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