||Aaye Ho Meri Zindagi Mein|| Premeer One Shot - Page 4

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Meeru! Love the song choice. *hums* True...but I butchered it! 😳 *hides face*

The shot is so sweet. So simple, and logical. The way you had Prem come back, despite not knowing the truth, because PremHeer cannot exist without one another. Their stubborness was well written, very well-expressed. Thanks, I'm glad that worked....

I love, love, LOVED them waking up in each other's arms. Who doesn't?😆😆😆

The second half was (honestly?) a bit iffy. I mean, it was nice enough, logical, PremHeer happy together kind of thing, but it seemed really rushed. And it was missing something. Like a spark. The spark that is usually in your work. *shrugs* I loved it all the same, but you wanted honesty! Awww I did want honesty, so I'm really really glad you gave me the truth Radz, it'll help me improve! 😳 But I love how everyone says I have a "spark" in my work or that "I" was missing from it!😆😆😆 I'll try to make sure my next one has all the stuff a good one shot has!😳

Thank you for dedicating it to us! Don't thank me!😊

Love,

Radz