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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#71

yaar ye fic aur ek doosri Rn fic update nahi kar rahi ho baaki sab ho rahi hain update aur new fic start karti jaa rahi ho.

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ranajay_ria

@ranajay_ria

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#72

guys

n aur h ke aaj engagement ha

p-n tu bohot khossurat lag rahe ha is dress main

n-hmm

p-kya baat ha n tu kitne chup chup kun ha tjhe toh khush hona chaheye aaj tere sagai ha

n-main khush hu p

p-n khushi akhon se pata chal jaate ha tere akho main koi khshi nahin ha

n-woh toh main thore nervous hu

p-are nervous hone ke kya zarurat ha tujhe aaj tere sagai ha shaadi nahin ha

n-hmm

n's mom-p n ko leke neeche aaa hume hotel pucchna ha

p-jee aunty

p n dono neeche aate ha

n's mom-n tu bohot aache lag rahe ha

n hugs her mom

papa-chale

sab log hotel jaate ha

mr hooda-aaye aaye mr alluwalia

mr hooda hugs mr alluwalia

mr hooda-h beta idher aao

h comes

mr hooda-n beta

n comes

mr hooda-aaj mera beta amardeep aur mr alluwalia ke beti n ke sagai ha main chahata hu ke aap in dono ko aapna ahirbad dijiye

mr hooda-h beta n ko yeh ring pahenayo

h n ke haath main ring pahennata ha

mr alluwalia-n yeh lo ring h ko pahennano

n puts ring on h's finger

every1 claps

dj plays the music

every1 starts dancing

h aur n dance kar rahe ha

after party

sab log ghar aate ha

papa-sujata mainne kal pandit jee ko bulaa ha shaadi ke date nikalne ke liye

mom-hmm

next day

morning

pandit jee aate ha

mr alluwalia-kya date thik nikla

pandit jee-3 din bad ke bohot he subh din ha uske bad 3 months ek din ha

h-nahin 3 months i cant stay plz uncle aunty 3 din bad

mr hooda-kya bolte ha aap mr alluwalia

mr alluwalia-thik ha

h-thanks u uncle

p -yeh lo mithai

h puts the mithai on n's mouth

n-excuse me

mr alluwalia-mr hooda kal se hum mahendi aur haldi function rakte ha

mr hooda-thik ha

n -r plz mujhe maff kar do main jaante hu ke tum mujhse bohot pyaar karte ho par main papa ka dil tor nahin sakte

n calls r

the mobile no u have dialed is currently unavailable

n-plz r phone uthao

next day

hooda ke mom aur baki relatives aate ha n ko haldi aur mahendi lagane ke liye

n's mom-aaye

h's mom n ko haldi lagate ha

uske bad mahendi lagte ha

p-n tere mahendi kitne aache ha

n smiles

p-n tere haath main h ka naam likha ha

n-ha

p-n aur h hamesha khush rahena

n-hmm

dekhte dekhte shaadi ka din aa jaata ha

p n ko taiyar kar rahe ha

p-aaj n tu bohot khobsurat lag rahe ha

kajal-h toh n ko dekh ke behosh ho jayega

p-ha

bani-hey baraat aa gaye ha

p kajal sab neeche aate ha

n's mom h ke aarti uthtarti ha

n's mom-aao beta

h jaake baithta ha

p-kun h kisse dhund rahe ha tu

kajal-are n ko aur kisse

n-aaj main h se shaadi karke chale jaunge h ke saat

n ka mobile bajta

n-hello suhasi

s-n r yahaan nahin ha r shimla gaya ha

n-kya

s-ha n

n-tum mujhe shimla ke no de sakte ho

s-mere pass r ke shimla ke phone no nahin ha

n's mom-p jaake n ko leeke aa

p-jee aunty

p-n

n ro rahe ha

p-n kya hua

n-kuch nahin p

p-chal tujhe pandit jee bula rahe ha

n p ke saath neeche aate ha

n mandap main baithte ha

pandit jee starts hyms

pandit jee-kanya ke ma baap kanyadan kijiye

papa/ma kanyadan karte ha

pandit jee-ab dulha dulhan ke maag main sindoor dijiye

h puts sindoor on n's maag

pandit jee-dulhan dulhan ke gaale main maagalsutra pahenaye

h maagalsutra pahenta ha n ke gaale main

pandit jee-ab phere ke liye khare ho jaye

h aur n phere leete ha

after pheras h and n took blessings from their elders

ab bidai ka waqt ho gaa ha

n hugs her mom

mom-n ab se wohi tere ghar ha

n-ma

papa hugs n

n hugs p

h aur n h ke ghar jaate ha

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Simran Kaur

@sim.07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#73

R aur N alag ho gaye.ab R ka kya hoga😭😭😭

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#74

that was so bad for Raj and Naina

I hate this huda and Naina 's dad

plz continue soon

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ranajay_ria

@ranajay_ria

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#75

guys

suddenly window ke khule ke awaz se n hosh main aate ha

n-tummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

r-ha main

n hugs r

n-r yahaan kaise

r-n tum h se shaadi

n-r mujhe maaff kar do main

n rone lagte ha

r-dont worry n main aa gaya hu tumhe fikar karne ke koi zarurat nahin ha

door pe knock hota ha

n-r koi aaya ha

r hides behind the cupboard

n-opens the door

p-n kon ha

n-koi nahin p

n is nervous

p-mainne toh r jiju ke awaz sunne

n-r jiu tu tu pagal ho gae ha kya

p-kun jab r tere pati hoga tab main unhe ka bulaoge

n is shocked

r comes out from the cupboard

p-n tune mujhsehar baat share ke par itne bare baat tune ujhse chupaye

n-i am sorry

p-n main tere akhon main sagai ke din khushi nahin dekhe mujhe kuch aacha nahin laga

n-par tujhe kaise pata chala aur r toh shimla main tha

tere mahendi ke din main

flashback

n's mom-p

p-jee aunty

ma-beta jaake n ke cupboard se ghagra leke aa

p-jee aunty

p opens n's cupboard

p-yeh ka ha

p finds some letters written y n to r

p-reads the letter

p-n r sir se pyaar karte ha par woh h se shaadi kun kar rahe ha

p calls at r's mobile

p-hello sir

r-hello kon

p-sir main p bol rahe hu kya aap mujhe abhi mil sakte ha

r-p main abhi shimla main hu

p-sir aap kab tak shimla se aa sakte ha

r-kya baat ha p

p-sir aap jitne jaldi ho sake mumbai chale aae

flashback ends

p-phir mainne aaj shayam ko sir ko phone kiya aur unhe yahaan ulaya

p-sir

r-ha p bolo

p-sir aap n se pyaar karte ha

r-p main

p-ha ya na

r-ha p

p-toh aap jaye n ko yahaan se leke jaye

r-par kun p baat kya ha

p-sir aaj n ke shaadi ho rahe ha h se

r-kya

p-ha sir plz sir jaldi kijiye

n-p tune mere liye

n hugs p

p-jiju aap n ko jaldi se yahaan se leke jae

n-lekin p papa

p-n tujhe bhagwan ne moka diya ha plz isse mat kho

n packs her bag

p-n aapna khaal rakna

n hugs p

n r ke saath bhaag jaate ha

n aur r shimla aate ha

r's mom-are r

next day

r-ma yeh ha n

ma-n aao beta

n ander aate ha

r-ma hume shaadi karne ha

ma-hmm

ma-r tu n ko leke room main jaa main khana bejte hu

n room main jaata ha

n khare ha

r-n

n hugs r

r-sshhhhhhhhh ro mat n

ma-n

n-jee aunty

ma-beta mainne aaj shayam ko pandit jee ko bulaa ha tum dono ke shaadi liye

shayam ko

pandit jee aate ha

ma-pandit jee yeh mera beta ha r aur yeh ha n

pandit jee-dulha dulhan baithte

pandit jee -starts the rituals

after shaadi

n aur r ma ka ahirbad lete ha

ma-laxmi n ko room main leeke jaa

n room main aate ha

n bed par baithte ha

r aata ha

r jaake n ka ghughat uthtate ha

r-n bohot khobsurat lag rahe ho tum

r kiss n's lips

r laid on n

r ka haath n ke dress ko untie karte ha

r n ke breasts ko chuta ha

n hi r ko kiss karte ha

r-n

n-hmm

r-tum khsh ho

n-bohot r

now happy this was the story not shaina di i am very hurt u called me a non rn fan plz i love rn so plz dont call me that

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#76

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!

Pooja ne sahi kaha Naina ki ankhon mein koi khushi nahi hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina aur Huda ki sagai ho jaati hai aur dono dance bhi karte hai!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Thats bad!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Ish kameene Huda ko bahut jaldi hai shaadi ki!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Raj ka phone bhi nahi lag raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ke haath mein Huda ke naam hi mehendi!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Kabhi nahi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ke friends Naina ko aur Huda ko tease kar rahe hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj Shimla gaya hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔O no!!!! Aur Suhasi ke paas uska number bhi nahi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Huda aur Naina ki shaadi ho gayi aur dono uske ghar chale gaye!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡O no!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina ka sapna toot gaya!!!! Sapna nahi yeh toh nightmare tha!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Thanks God yeh sab sapna tha!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj aa gaya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Hero ki entry!!!!!👏 👏 👏

Naina ne hindi filmon ka sabse cliched dialodue mara...................Tum!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina rone lagti hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Par Raj ne kaha woh sab theek kar dega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Pooja aati hai but Naina is nervous!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Kehti hai usne Raj jiju ki awaz suni!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Pooja reminded me of Chutki in Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Pooja ko sab pata chal chuka tha aur ussi ne Raj ko Mumbai bulaya tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for her!!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Pooja is really a great friend!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina elopes with Raj!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😃 😃 😃Finally they are together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj aur Naina Shimla jaate hai aur Raj's mom get them married!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Great!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is so romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The wedding night was very hot and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Finally they are one!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 17 years ago

#77

its awesomeeeeeee too good update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#78

that was gr8 finally RN ki shaadi ho gayi

cool but ab huda aur naina ke dad koi pro na karde

plz continue all ur fics plz continue

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#79

Oh thank god jab maine last ud padha tha to mere to hosh hi ud gaye the ki Huda aur Naina ki shaadi ho gayi hai. 😭

Par jab maine Shai ka comment padha to samjh me aaya ki it was a night mare, thank god.😛

Agar ye night mare na hota na to mai kabhi nahi padhti ye fic.😡

Thank god ki Pooja ne itna accha kaam kiya aur time par Naina ko bachane k liye Huda se Raj ko bula liya.😉

Finally kuch bhi kaisa bhi hua Raj aur Naina ki shaadi ho gayi .

They became one now.😊

update soon.😃

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#80

Hey sweet fic yaar.

Raj aur Naina finally ek ho gaye na.

update soon.

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