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awww ur bak!!!
hehe yesh i love this one already!!
........prem was a playa??
ooh me is even more interested!!
cnt wait to read it di!
take ur time!
rinkz
Your backkkkkkkkk!!! With another intriguing FF, your first parts always come off with a BANG! Ahh your really good at inciting readers. [I used big wordies... tehehe]awww always wait for your feedbackš³
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The first thing that came to my mind was, YESH! Veera's getting scolded by our very own Prem. And i could totally imagine it. [Maybe cuz I have been imagining it for the last few weeks.] I mean I want that girl beaten balck and blue, grr.. i hate her so much. I hope she dies somewhere.. tehehe..
I'm so glad she's not a rich brat though, she's still lazy. She's a shame in all categories. When she was rich she was putting rich people down by her bratty attitude, and now she's middle class, right? and she's bringing them down with her laziness. This girl will never learn will she. unfortunately or fortunately you would love her in this packageš
Like i said before, your fics are VERY intriguing. The title itself is very intriguing. I mean 'blackmai'... Where's that going to come in from? Aaah do I want to try and predict? Prem blackmailing Heer, so far I think thats what it is. But you could come up with anything, your really creative like that. I like the situation Prem's in right now. He's after Heer like a... hungry beast, as Veera had said. But i like it. āŗļø I like possessive guys, show's how much they love. the most passionate and desparate prem ever.......this prem gets everything he wants in his own wayš......i love this premš³
I have a few things figured out, Heer used to work for Prem? rite......And Prem got out of control one day and kissed her, and she left, and Prem's hearstbroken? Am I right? WRONG.......la la la la......surprise.....lets keep it a surprise honš.... Well whatever, this is why i like your fics. You keep us in loads of suspense. Veera's nice side is kind of creeping me out though. š But I'm very confused about Veera and Heer's relationship. they were colleagues.......but were more like sisters......And, Heer's lost everything. So wait, Veera already knew where Heer was. i think i answered it already Aaah i can't wait till the next part. You always leave me desperate to read more. Cheattteerrr.. << Don't know where that comes in, but when i don't get what i want i call the other person a cheater. ššcheaters?????š¤£š¤£š¤£š¤£
Now go and continue soon. šaww u will have to wait till next weekend hon.....š³
Originally posted by: pooji123456789
ur back with another ff i am so happy
very very intersting nice
can't wait
š¤£š¤£ now i had to laugh at that part... Hungry beast... Prem sounds better and better š¤£.... first time ever i felt sorry for Veera, she was getting screamed at... very very enjoyable yet terrifying... Veera not Prem's sister, i love it already!!!what did you do to Mr. Prem Juneja that he is after you like a hungry beast??...