Chal Mere Bhai ( Come on, brother) Karan Preeta Rishab - Page 6

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Posted: 11 days ago
#51

You didnt read it?its not the ending.


Originally posted by: SilverBell

Loved This Ending Too Jasmine

I Read It

And Edited My Post

Edited by SilverBell - 11 days ago
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Posted: 10 days ago
#52

Oh I cant decide which version I like better, I think Monisha was good in the other one but here she is evil. I liked the nice Monisha.

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Posted: 10 days ago
#53

In thr first version it was Mahira,not Monisha.thanks a lot.


Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Oh I cant decide which version I like better, I think Monisha was good in the other one but here she is evil. I liked the nice Monisha.

Edited by jasminerahul - 10 days ago
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Posted: 10 days ago
#54

Part 6

so Karan wants to scarifice his love for Rishabh

that's why he did that

Preeta was indeed shattered

of cos Rishabh was aware that Monisha was threatening Karan

Preeta revealed what she saw

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Posted: 8 days ago
#55

Poor Karan. He even had to act to romance with that gross Monisha. I am surprised he is even ready to get engaged to her. Sadly Preeta had to agree to the marriage. The dance was nice.Have you watched the video of this song? As usual I hate Rakhi and Bani. Monisha is so evil. Perfect pics. Waiting for next.

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Posted: 8 days ago
#56

Thanks a lot.Yes,I have watched the song.I even watched the movie after you told me.


Originally posted by: salley145

Poor Karan. He even had to act to romance with that gross Monisha. I am surprised he is even ready to get engaged to her. Sadly Preeta had to agree to the marriage. The dance was nice.Have you watched the video of this song? As usual I hate Rakhi and Bani. Monisha is so evil. Perfect pics. Waiting for next.

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Posted: 5 days ago
#57

Chal Mere Bhai ( Come on, brother)Part 7(Alternative version)

Thank you Salley for the Rishab Swastika edits.The credit for the PreeRan edits goes to the real editors.


Thank you everyone for supporting this version.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite jodi,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.


Rishab:Karan and Preeta love each other.So they should get engaged. Right?

All were shocked.

Mahesh:Then what about Monisha?

Rishab:Karan and Preeta love each other.But Monisha who was obsessed with Karan threatened Karan that if he does not break up with Preeta,she will harm Preeta and me.

All were shocked.

Monisha:No,it’s a lie.Preeta had seen us romancing.

Preeta:Yes.I saw Karan and Monisha romancing.

Everyone became dull while Monisha smirked.

Preeta:But it was a drama planned by Karan and Monisha to make me believe that Karan was cheating on me.I understood it.Because after I stepped out of the rehearsal hall,I hid behind the door.Because I felt that Karan cannot cheat me like that.

Karan became emotional hearing Preeta’s faith in him.

Preeta:I overheard the full conversation of Karan and Monisha.I told everything to Rishab.

Flash back…

Rishab was shocked.

Rishab: This much happened and I did’nt know anything.

Preeta shed tears.

Preeta:We all are in trouble Rishab.I don't know how to face it.Poor Karan is suffering alone.

Rishab:Don’t worry Preeta.I will handle everything.

Preeta was relieved:Thank you Rishab.





Rishab confronted Karan.

Rishab:Karan,we were inseparable since childhood and you used to share everything with me.But you hid so much from me.Why did’nt you tell me that Monisha is blackmailing you?

Karan :I did’nt want to give you tensions Rishab.

Rishab:Stop it Karan.Now tell me what did Monisha tell you?

Karan:Monisha told me that if I don’t marry her,she will harm you and Preeta.

Rishab:And you fell into her trap.Nonsense!You should have told me and Preeta everything.We will solve it together.We should expose Monisha.

Karan:But how?

Rishab:We should play a drama for that.

Preeta rang up Karan:You fool!You thought I will believe if you play a drama?I know that my Karan will never cheat on me.I trust you Karan.

Karan smiled emotionally.

Preeta:As per Rishab’s plan,you should tell everyone that you want to get engaged to Monisha.I will also agree to get engaged to Monisha.Then there will be a TV serial drama.

Karan:Sure.

They both smiled.

Preeta:Ok good night.

Karan:Good night and sweet dreams.

Preeta blushed.

Present….

All were shocked.

Rishab:This engagement function was to expose Monisha.

Monisha yelled at him:No,it’s a lie.

Karan stared at her.

Karan:Have some shame while lying Monisha.

Preeta:I had recorded everything Monisha.

Preeta took her phone and played the conversation between Karan and Monisha.

Monisha got embarrassed.

Rakhi slapped her.

Rakhi:How dare you threaten my son?Maheshji..call the police.

Monisha got tensed.

Rishab:I have already called the police.

Bani:Good.She deserves to be in the jail.

The police came and arrested Monisha.

Everyone smiled.

Bani:Now let Karan and Preeta get engaged.

Karan and Preeta blushed.

Rishab:Can I also get engaged to my ladylove?

Everyone looked at him in disbelief.

Rakhi:You love someone.Who is that lucky girl Rishab?

Rishab smiled.He went near Swastika and pulled her closer.

All were surprised.

Mahesh:Swastika?When did you and Swastika….?

Flash back…

Swastika asked Rishab painfully:Are you going to get engaged to Preeta?

Rishab was silent.

Swastika’s tears rolled down her cheeks.

Rishab:Why do I feel that you are not happy with my engagement with Preeta?

Swastika:You are right.I can’t tolerate you getting engaged to Preeta.Because I love you.

Rishab went near her emotionally and wiped her tears.

Rishab:I also love you Swastika.

Swastika looked at him in disbelief.

Rishab:Yes.After I sent you abroad for the project I started missing you.That time only I realized your importance in my life.

Swastika smiled emotionally.

Rishab:My engagement with Preeta is only a drama.

Swastika:What?

Rishab told Swastika everything.She was shocked.

Swastika:I will support you in everything Rishab.

He smiled.They embraced each other.

Karan-Preeta and Rishab-Swastika got engaged by exchanging rings.The couples posed for photographs.





Later Rishab-Swastika and Karan-Preeta got married.

The end

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Posted: 5 days ago
#58

Amazing update

so Preeta heard everything

of cos she trusted Karan

great she told Rishabh

as expected Preeta confronted Karan

well the engagement was a plan to expose Monisha

good that Monisha was arrested

happy for Karan Preeta and Rishabh Swastika

wonderful end

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Posted: 5 days ago
#59

I liked this ending better than the originalsmiley27

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Posted: 4 days ago
#60


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