ArShi OS - Beyond this Chapter - Page 3

Originally posted by: m4manju

Res for now, will get back

I will migrate to the ff section after you read and comment

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

Saw a story from you after so long yay

reserved

Padhna hai ki nahi padhna hai tumko

Originally posted by: --Priyaa--

I loved it it's so well written beautiful! Thanks for the tag I enjoyed reading it..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: RadhikaMishra

Really a beautiful one 😍

Read something so good on Arshi after a very long time ❤️

Amazing story 👏

Thank you so much! T

Originally posted by: dair10arshi

Really enjoyed reading this. Those flashes of Arnav and Khushi, could it be their past life? I do feel bad for Lavanya but I hope she finds her soulmate pretty soon.

Also is there another chapter to this?

Thanks for reading. Those flashing were of their next life, together. Lav is a sweetheart, she would understand like she did in the show

This is an one-shot. No further chapters. Ending is open, you can conclude it how you want the story to end :)

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Hey Shiri,

Thanks for writing this one.

Beautifully done - I could feel Arnav's turmoil through your writing. The visions that they had, and the slow realization (grandma's storytelling was a master touch) that they could be soulmates was very effectively portrayed.

One thing I have noticed about your writing - that I think is a change from before - is the economy in words to describe a situation. It's very effective and it goes down so well to a reader. When you can convey something in one word. never use 10! - Rule of thumb for any writer. The reader gets it. you don't need to emphasize the same thing over and over. So many published authors forget to do this, so I'm really glad you're employing this in your writing. Well done!

Lizzz

Thanks a lot for all the appreciation! Coming it all from you really means a lot

I got Kindle and reading a lot these days. I guess that has improved my writing. Before, I was choosy, but now I am reading different genres and also attempt to write. I have started a 5-chapter Horror story(for the first time since I have started writing) on Arnav and Khushi. Will tag you when I post

Thank you once again

Originally posted by: ExoticDisaster

I will migrate to the ff section after you read and comment

Hai re nandkishor. Deri ke liye maaf kar do shiri ji. Reading right away.

Some stories are so touching and compelling that they stay with you long after you finish reading...this one felt the same to me.

Arnav's reluctance to marry La, despite acknowledging his friendship with her. And then meeting khushi and feeling an instant connection with her, felt so beautiful. What I liked was you didn't show him dismissive to La's emotions. And he also ensured to not sacrifice his love either, and decided to express his feelings to khushi at right time.

Khushi's hesitance was understandable. Although, she also felt the same pull towards Arnav, she didn't want to come between him and Lavanya.

I also liked how they both got visions of their future together. It was kind of a divine intervention. Perhaps, they had taken a rebirth?

I think the end implies that Arnav decided to talk to La and back off from marrying her. I'd imagine he and khushi then give a fair shot to their feelings and end up together and Lavanya also finds someone who loves her.

Overall a wonderful OS, Shiri! Thank you for writing it

Arnav was apprehensive that he did not love Lavanya. Then he was struck by the arrow of love out of nowhere.

Looks like he has made up his mind to listen to his heart and go where it leads. Lavanya will be hurt, but this is better in the long run.