Old/New scenes from my fiction - added scene 5 pg 7 Feb 22 - Page 7

This is from PHCS 

LOVED Geet's self-confidence and braveness

Maan also praised her " My Brave Girl"💖

Hi Anu

waiting for the next scene

thanks 

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Hi Anu

waiting for the next scene

thanks 

Hey Anu dear 😍

Wishing you & all the readers very happy purnima and Holi festival 🥮

I loved this scene Dadi grilling Maan & Maan has started to realise what he has done to a person who loves him to the core

Pain & frustration from both Maan & Geet side was quite evident

Keep writing 

Scene 5

This scene just shows Geet's love for Maan

no matter how he treated her , Geet still holds immense love for him 

but I loved Dadima telling Maan to stop calling Geet as Butter 

and that would certainly be one way to gain respect 

Devils den how I will forgot it my favorite

Hi Anu

hope you had a great weekend

Happy Holi to you and your family.

Thanks for posting the next scene

Scene 5

Touching scene.... greatly written 

Geet's family were indeed amazed seeing how changed she is

gone is their bubbly yet feisty Geet

of cos she assures them that she is happy

Brij's concern was justified

well she lies that Maan loves her

she certainly loves Maan immensely 

and that's the truth

Mohinder's question was reasonable

they love and care for her so much

they can do anything for her happiness 

as expected Geet was overwhelmed with guilt

sad that she was aggressive with them

she was clearly hiding her pain and reality

Brij did not buy her lie

alas Mohinder intervened

dismayed that Maan does not know Geet's likes nor dislikes

Geet was so emotional seeing her fav food

Geet's thoughts were understandable

not surprised that Geet warned Brij not to harm Maan

she does not anything further harm to her family

well Maan was welcomed with respect

at least he knew it was just a formality

one thing for sure is that Maan does care for Geet

sad that Geet is not participating in the marriage preps

pleased that dadima confronted Maan

dadima had valid points

Maan was really frustrated

glad that dadima spoke to Geet

liked her advice to Geet

continue soon